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Book of the Week – blue balloon by Grant Caldwell

Grant Caldwell’s blue balloon gathers together nearly three decades of haiku and senryu practice and, in doing so, offers readers not a single voice but a developing conversation with the form itself. Caldwell, an Australian poet, novelist, and academic associated with the University of Melbourne, writes from close observation while remaining alert to philosophical inquiry, humour, and the small absurdities of daily life.

The collection is arranged across several sections, including poems rooted in Melbourne, travel poems from Ireland, China, Kyoto and France, and selected earlier work. Caldwell’s introduction is itself worth reading. He speaks thoughtfully about haiku aesthetics, from wabi and sabi to the relationship between self and object, grounding the poems in both Japanese tradition and contemporary practice.

The opening section immediately signals Caldwell’s reflective temperament:

drawing a circle –
so much depends upon
where you start (p.11)

The poem reads almost as ars poetica. A circle suggests completion or wholeness, yet Caldwell reminds us that beginnings shape perception. The poem gestures toward art, memory, argument, and even biography.

Equally memorable is this understated city poem:

so quiet –
i hear a fly
land on the window! (p.13)

The exclamation mark is unusual and earned. The poem depends upon heightened attention to detail. It recalls the way haiku enlarges perception by narrowing focus.

Caldwell’s humour often arrives through sharp observation:

headline
outside a 7/11:
IT’S 9/11 24/7! (p.22)

This is senryu working through irony. Advertising language, media repetition, and historical memory collide. The poem feels contemporary without straining for relevance.

One of the strongest poems in the collection brings grief into view with remarkable restraint:

at my father’s funeral –
my stepmother’s sons
carry the coffin (p.17)

Nothing is explained, and nothing needs to be. Family relationships, belonging, distance, and emotional complexity gather in the space around what remains unsaid. The poem trusts the reader.

The travel sequences add another texture to the collection. In Kyoto, Caldwell encounters the famous rock garden:

the fifteen rocks equal truth
– fourteen are visible
meditating (p.62)

The poem speaks directly to the Zen paradox. Truth exists as incompletion. The final word shifts the poem from description to inward experience.

And then there is the poem that gives the collection its title:

lost in the crowd
only seen by children –
a blue balloon (p.66)

The balloon becomes more than an object. Children notice what adults overlook. The poem asks whether wonder disappears or merely slips outside adult attention.

Reading blue balloon, one notices Caldwell’s movement between humour and gravity, philosophy and ordinary detail. Trams, flies, rain, supermarkets, funerals, libraries, and temples coexist naturally.

Pause for a moment with the title poem. What is your own blue balloon? Something visible all along, perhaps, but noticed only when attention shifts.


You can read the entire collection in the THF Digital Library.

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Do you have a full or chapbook length book published in 2021 or earlier that you would like featured as a Book of the Week? Contact us for details. Haiku featured in the Book of the Week Archive are selected by the THF Digital Librarian Vidya Premkumar and are used with permission.

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