Peter C. Forster Archives - The Haiku Foundation

re:Virals 427

Amoolya Kamalnath —metaphors in the sea and boats: commentaries on two poems, by Chen Xiaoou and by Jonathan Moskaluk

Peter C. Forster — insert your own shiver: commentaries on "dawn walk / my daily shiver / at the dip in the road" by Cynthia Anderson

Ann Smith and AI friend — nature and technology converge: commentaries on "rain drops / playing chopin / the AI" by Helga Stania

Lakshmi Iyer—caught in a world of desires: commentaries on "eternal life/even the cuckoo wants it/summer night" by Deborah A. Bennett

Jennifer Gurney — groupthink: commentaries on "gulls mobbing a crow / when all you do / is tell the truth" by Tony Williams

Peter C. Forster — haiku, but not as we know it, Jim: commentaries on " shaving/above the ear/to fly better” by Barbara Anna Gaiardoni

Amoolya Kamalnath — a powerful monoku: commentaries on "moon shot the american way" by Helen Buckingham

Peter C. Forster: out of the ordinary... Commentaries on "a birch tree/a lichen/archipelago" by Warren Decker.

Jonathan Epstein — breakthrough: commentaries on "An empty plate/Smashing it//Autumn clearer" by Masaya Saito.

Patricia McGuire: detached observation, or a judgment? Commentaries on two strong verses, by Jerome Berglund and Michael Buckingham Gray.