re:Virals 81

Welcome to re:Virals, The Haiku Foundation’s weekly poem commentary feature on some of the finest haiku ever written in English. This week’s poem was

     the good soldier
     my ancestor who lived to tell
     nothing
          — LeRoy Gorman, The Heron’s Nest XIX:1 (2017)

Mojde Marvast knows this poem from inside out:

Thoughtful!

War is a question word in itself!
As a citizen of a war-stricken land, I have seen true misery and grief of it.
I have lost young relatives.
Once, overwhelmed by the sorrows of parents of these young boys and their so-called life, after the loss, I asked myself:
The price of how much land equals the life of one’s son ?!?!?!
I am still searching for the answer!!

Thank you for turning eyes to this wound !

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re:Virals 82:

     after all these years
     ankle deep
     in the other ocean
          — Pamela Miller Ness, Frogpond 21.2 (1998)