re:Virals 494

Welcome to re:Virals, The Haiku Foundation’s weekly commentary feature on some of your favorites among the best contemporary haiku and senryu written in English, hosted by Keith Evetts (managing editor) and Melissa Dennison.  In the seat today is Keith.  This week’s poem, chosen by Linda Powers O’Dell was:

   
magnolia buds...
birds plumping feathers 
against the chill
—Ingrid Baluchi
 The Acorn Issue #48, Spring 2022

Introducing this poem, Linda writes:

This lovely poem rests on an authentic insight, an association between swelling magnolia buds and birds fluffing their feathers for warmth. The poet has been struck by how the expanding downy flowers and ruffling feathers resemble each other. We are treated with the image of birds perching in trees and the specific powerful scent of magnolia. This haiku is perfect for early spring when nature is beginning to bloom and it’s still chilly.

Opening comment (Keith):

The monk Kenko, in his Tsurezuregusa (Essays in Idleness), writes ca. 1330: “How is it possible not to rejoice each day over the pleasure of being alive?”

Amid all the angst in the world this is a gentle and pleasing observational haiku, with an harmonious juxtaposition or arrangement of separate but related things (toriawase): the fluffy buds of magnolia—an elongated egg-shape, and small birds with feathers fluffed up to retain heat.  Left hinted but unstated is that events are about to stir.  Buds and birds are ready.  Although it is still cold, Spring is on the way — tax free, which no ruler controls.  This is not a static moment of objects dutifully “sketched from life,”  but events of ever-changing Nature in which all things are connected, within haiku traditions of the Dao, Bashō’s zoka.

The deciduous species of magnolia that bloom in early Spring are magnificent.  Around where I live, each mature magnolia seems to have a resident blackbird of an evening.  A paean to Spring.  Especially as one grows nearer to leaving the world, I think these are among things to remember and treasure the most.

Adelaide B. Shaw:

It is early spring, probably early morning before the sun warms the day. A bird plumps its feathers to trap air which acts as insulation against the cold. Here we have more than one bird perched on the limbs of a magnolia tree. There is a contrast between the fullness of the birds’ feathers and the tightness of the magnolia’s buds. As the weather warms up in days to follow, the birds’ feathers will flatten, but the magnolia bud will open to full blossom. We don’t know the color of the magnolia; it could be pink or white. Nor do we know the type of birds. I imagine birds, such as robins, which have recently returned north and feel the cooler mornings more than say, sparrows, which do not migrate south. This haiku shows us some aspects of the scene, but leaves more for the reader to fill in.

Dan Campbell:

Instead of trying to push meaning or drive home a message, the poet seems to trust that the simple image of buds, birds, and chill will naturally stir something deeper in the reader.

There’s a quiet balance in these details—a sense of fragility in the buds, preparation in the birds, and adversity in the chill. The buds suggest vulnerability and potential, the birds reflect a sense of readiness and anticipation, and the chill brings in the discomfort of facing something difficult.

By allowing these natural images to speak for themselves, the poem creates an emotional depth that feels honest rather than forced. The poet’s restraint reminds us that true emotional weight doesn’t come from dramatic gestures but from the quiet truth of everyday experience. This subtlety gives the poem a lasting emotional resonance.

Sitarama Seshu Maringanti:

On observing how colourful buds of Magnolia and feathery birds try to protect themselves during extreme winter, poet Ingrid Baluchi sets before us how Haiku can be woven around selecting such subjects.
A beautiful Haiku that inspires new writers!

Sudha Devi Nayak:

The Magnolia buds waiting to blossom are the harbingers of spring’s effusive abundance. With the chill of the lingering winter the birds fluff up their feathers for that delicious feel of warmth and snug comfort. Magnolia is a symbol of purity and perfection in an inherently imperfect world. In a world forever in transience the Magnolia in its beauty and the birds in their sense of well-being give us the simple perfection of a moment.

Lakshman Bulusu:

This haiku captures how magnolia buds attract birds and their “presence in perfection” for certain species of birds to get warmth by puffing their feathers during winter or chill weather conditions. It is a “nature vs nurture” mechanism pairing magnolia buds and birds’ desire—the magnolias to pollinate and the birds to seek the former. The buds bloom and the feathers rise!

A sense of belonging, strong in imagery and profound in meaning, L1 leaves it to the imagination of the reader to ascertain how the magnolia’s buds turn into blossoms and lines L2 and L3 add a sense of sensibility in how keen the birds are in pursuing their quest.

Alan Harvey:

The visual juxtaposition between the plumping buds of the magnolia and the songbirds in the trees is enchanting. This is a winter haiku in the Pacific Northwest. We’ve noticed the magnolia buds are swelling on our recent walks even though the nighttime temperatures are still cold. Thus, the birds in the morning wear their winter fluff. Delightful observation and haiku, Ingrid Baluchi.

Amoolya Kamalnath:

A late winter verse. The magnolia buds have appeared. The birds are protecting themselves from the cold.

In winter, as an insulation mechanism, birds puff up their feathers, by trapping air in their bodies. This helps keep the heat from flowing out of their bodies.

The trees look full. This way, though it’s still winter, there’s a feeling of almost spring. An awaiting of revival and renewal. A beautiful sight in the slowly fading monochrome barrenness.

Vidya Premkumar—a whisper of renewal:

Ingrid Baluchi’s haiku captures a quiet, almost meditative moment in nature. The softness of magnolia buds and the instinctive preparation of birds against the cold create a sense of gentle resilience. The poem feels like a whispered observation that invites deeper reflection through different literary lenses.

From an eco-critical perspective, this haiku is a perfect example of how nature speaks in its own rhythms, independent of human concerns yet profoundly intertwined with them. The magnolia buds, harbingers of spring, suggest renewal and change, but they are not in full bloom yet—only on the cusp of transformation. The birds, meanwhile, are responding to winter’s lingering grasp, fluffing their feathers for warmth. This delicate balance between seasonal shifts mirrors how the natural world constantly adjusts, reminding us of its quiet perseverance.

A psychoanalytic reading might focus on the tension between vulnerability and self-protection. The buds still closed, could symbolize potential—something not yet fully realized, holding promise and fragility within it. On the other hand, the birds engage in a small but necessary act of survival. There’s an almost unconscious instinct at play here, a reminder that all living beings respond to their environment in immediate and deeply ingrained ways. The poem speaks to those moments in human life when we are caught between waiting and acting, between the anticipation of change and the need to protect ourselves from what lingers of the past.

A feminist reading could consider the haiku’s emphasis on care and nurturing. Often seen as feminized in literary traditions, nature is presented here not as passive but as responsive. The magnolia tree prepares to blossom in its own time, not rushing or bending to external demands. The birds, too, engage in self-care, acknowledging their needs without apologising. There’s an underlying message of quiet strength—an assertion that survival and beauty are not separate but part of the same continuum.

Structurally, the haiku’s three images work together in a slow unfolding. The opening line sets the scene with magnolia buds, hinting at the coming of spring but not rushing to declare it. The second and third lines shift the focus to the birds, making their movement the heart of the moment. The contrast between stillness and motion is subtle but effective, reinforcing that change is always happening, even in the slightest, most delicate ways.

On a personal level, this haiku resonates as a reminder that transitions—whether in nature or life—rarely happen all at once. There is always an in-between, a space where the old and the new exist together. The buds do not bloom instantly, and the birds must face the cold before warmth returns. This moment in the poem, brief yet deeply layered, captures that in-between space, offering a quiet reassurance that change, even when slow, is inevitable.

Author Ingrid Baluchi:

I’m looking down at a neighbor’s garden from the third-floor apartment here in Skopje, North Macedonia. It’s a polluted city, particularly in winter, not so much from industry as from wood-burners and traffic, so I’m always surprised at the number and variety of birds that call its suburbs home. Here, bird song is ever present, even at night, with owls and nightingales making their presence known. It’s spring, and after long dreary days of gray discomfort, the sun is such a blessing, the spirits lift . . . mine, the birds’, and even trees. Suddenly from the traceries of bare branches, a tinge of green heralds the change in season, and everything feels vibrant, poised to explode into activity.

The garden below is filled with trees, but the one that is first to welcome spring is the hysteranthous magnolia. Yes, I had to look it up; the adjective refers to those trees where blossom precedes leaf growth, and magnolia is one such. All the buds seem to form at the same time, as if each branch is in competition, and, with warm days of encouragement, they swell into a voluptuous pink, their tips all pointing in one direction, reminding me of fat birds with expectant beaks. As it happens, early flowering in this case seems not to attract insects, otherwise the tree would be full of life, but no matter; I can always imagine these buds to be ‘barbie birds’, like galahs or bullfinches, fluffed up and waiting for the sun to warm their bodies.

Thanks to all who sent commentaries. As the contributor of the commentary reckoned best this week, Vidya has chosen next week’s poem, which you’ll find below. We invite you to write a commentary to it. It may be short, or of moderate length, academic, your personal response, spontaneous, or idiosyncratic.  As long as it focuses on the verse presented, and with respect for the poet, all genuine reader reaction, criticism, and pertinent discussion is of value.   Out-takes are kept in the THF Archives.  Best of all, the chosen commentary’s author gets to pick the next poem.

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Poem for commentary:

     
December wind 
through the kitchen door 
my mother motherless 
—Antoinette Cheung, Canada
 #FemkuMag 38: Spring 2025

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Footnote:

Bio:
Temporarily resident here and there, Ingrid has spent much of her life traveling and writing creative non-fiction. Her micro-poetry has been published in international journals, in print and online. A retired teacher and professional artist, she has a deep love of, and respect for the natural world.

Ingrid’s delightful and humorous verse in Prune Juice Issue 41…

forever
             searching
                              for
                                     beginnings
                                                         Scotch
                                                                  tape

…was the subject of re:Virals 456.

I think that Ingrid’s haiku this week is more elegant than the famous:

Bitter morning
sparrows sitting
without necks.
—James W. Hackett
American Haiku issue #1, 1963

On magnolias, I recall the excellent and less orthodox:

the magnolia
wasn’t ours, yet its absence
is
— Patricia J. Machmiller, Kingfisher #6, October 2022
…which made the Touchstone long list for 2022 but alas no further. Examined in re:Virals 416.

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Lastly:  In a welter of verses these past few years that conspicuously focus on (and sometimes wallow in) personal emotion, often the negative emotions, Dan Campbell’s is a comment for all seasons and for most haiku.  Endorsed.