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re:Virals 316

Welcome to re:Virals, The Haiku Foundation’s weekly poem commentary feature on some of the finest haiku ever written in English. This week’s poem was

 
     rumors of war I spin the globe
          — Roberta Beach Jacobson, Cold Moon Journal (2021)

Donal O’Farrell takes close a look:

My first reaction to this poem is an image of the poet consulting the globe to locate the rumored war, perhaps following a news report. Then I’m drawn to reflect that the roots and seeds of war are not so remote after all, but are closer to home: war “over there” because of my/ our behavior here. Further reflection brings the image from Voyager as it leaves our solar system and looks back at this fragile planet — a tiny blue fleck caught in sunlight — and the global wars our species is waging against the planet and its biodiversity. Not so remote after all! Final thoughts: What wars did I wage today and who is suffering as a result? Tomorrow, I’ll try to wage more peace and loving kindness.

Nick T focuses on the spin:

Reading this poem, I imagine a scenario where a politician or a “spin doctor” is trying to influence public opinion across the world at a time of crisis. This could apply to many recent conflicts where propaganda from all sides has played such an important role, especially with the emergence of social media. There is an element of misdirection and distortion associated with the use of “spin,” and this gives the poem a dark undercurrent. Also, I feel the brevity of the poem makes it very stark and adds to this sinister nature. A fascinating haiku which has lodged in my subconscious.

Lakshmi Iyer comes across a solution:

All the unsaid words and expressions fill in the rumors of war. Are they the false headlines of today’s news? Or perhaps the only news that is spreading like fire? Yes, rumors can destroy peace. Rumors can bring mishaps, differences, protest and even war! The poet is obsessed with these falsehoods spreading tiny sparks of fire that collapse a huge wall of peace. She has beautifully found the solution for that: “I spin the globe.”

Something so easy to say and do, but can we escape “bad weather.” Spinning the globe cannot prevent the rumors from spreading. But, it will definitely reduce our mental stress and fatigue. On the other hand, the poet wants to just wipe off even the storm of rumor by spinning the magical globe, which represents the entire manifestation of earth, air, fire, water and ether.

Who doesn’t love to spin a globe? Our hands automatically spin the globe when we first see it. This is what the poet wants us to do — an action that relieves the pressure, that just wipes off all negative energy around us.

Peggy Hale Bilbro examines the hearsay:

Do they ever end, those rumors of war? Roberta Beach Jacobson doesn’t say where the wars might be, or where the rumors come from. It may just be political bluster, or she might be hearing the distant sound of cannons and gunfire. She doesn’t indicate how near or how far in the future the rumors suggest, only that there are those disquieting rumors of war. But then she immediately follows with a gesture we have all made — a spin of the globe. Spinning the globe is often associated with spontaneous plans for a vacation in some far-off land, a desire to escape the reality of our everyday lives. But when coupled so closely with the first half of this monostich, the need to escape takes on a more serious and immediate nature. Where in the world can I go where there is no war, or even rumors of war? Is such a place possible? This poem is filled with a foreboding sense of anxiety and even fear, and the urgent need to escape to somewhere that peace reigns. Is there hope in this poem? Yes, but each reader must decide which is stronger: the hope expressed in a spin of the globe or the fear in those rumors of war.

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re:Virals 317:

 
     candlelit shadows
     we forget
     we are mortal
          — Tia Haynes, Acorn, Issue 44 (2020)

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  1. re:Virals 316:

    rumors of war I spin the globe
    — Roberta Beach Jacobson, Cold Moon Journal (2021)

    Many thanks for Haiku Foundation for this unique feature of re-Virals
    and also creating a space for us to comment upon selections every week.
    This week’s choice, single line haiku by Roberta Beach Jacobson, triggers
    a mode -a spark of fear and uncertainty for the theme is such ‘ war’.
    It is not about killings and actuality of deaths in warfield, the concerned writer
    has come across in newspapers, or sensational headings of bombardments in
    warfield, mass murders and blood oozing and army men running here and there; only rumors of war ; (Here) Even in rumors of war- all the above mentioned, ghastly, inhuman ruthless happenings are bound to happen;

    “rumors of war I spin the globe”
    From various quarters, unauthentic information, bombardment in air, which country is targeting which country, how far and how long, what is the modality
    Of operation- these are possible threats which anybody can foresee,
    In the next session, “ I spin the globe”, the speaker has an apprehension; as a result, wants to know the topography , the places and the towns nearby likely to be affected; hence she spins around the globe, a virtual tour getting to know
    more about the places involved in this range of rumor.
    Another viable Inference is that globe is such a handy tool, easily accessible to visit places, a virtual tour, to know more about distances and nearness etc.;
    A subconscious fear emanates, whether her hometown, is in in vicinity or she is
    Safe in her place etc; Another logical inference, there are times, there were times, incessant, the entire world, affected with the panic of war, ‘war’ as a menace going on ; hence the ebullient write of pen visualizes this:
    War everywhere and incessant going on.

  2. Dear Nick T,
    Going through commentary, nice.

    Reading and re reading the following, always enriching experience.
    “There is an element of misdirection and distortion associated with the use of “spin,” and this gives the poem a dark undercurrent.

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