Welcome to re:Virals, The Haiku Foundation’s weekly poem commentary feature on some of the finest haiku ever written in English. This week’s poem was
open page shadow of the poem leans forward — Karen DiNobile, Frogpond, volume 36:1 (2013)
Radhamani Sarma finds hints for the reader:
Thanks to Karen DiNobile for giving us powerful writing, stretching the imagination of readers far beyond their ambience. The poet, while composing a poem, its theme, image and plot, in the formative stage, believes somewhat that the telling or showing is shadowy. The poet is still not able to decide what to write, how to present or construct; hence, a shadow dominates in outline form. The first line, “open page,” leading on to the “shadow of the poem” adumbrates that it is not filled in; there’s no flow. The reader chances to imagine the possibility of theme, or technique, in his own way.
Another viable inference is that the reader is positioned in such a way, slanting the page, that only the shadow of the poem can be read; it leans forward. Also, perhaps designers of the book have printed the poem so that only a shadow leans forward, which could be attributed to printing technology. In libraries on old book shelves, due to the aging process, the books lose flavor and their fresh aura; the print becomes blurred somewhat, hence the shadow. Moreover, before printing technology, handwriting, such as it was, slanted, from right to left, and with the passage of time, only the blurred figures now appear. Yet another view is that a poem, which has an illustration, is hiding, projecting the shadow of the poet’s lady love or figure, whom he hints at.
It could also be that, in the opening pages’ introductory note before a lengthy poem, the poet gives readers a hint, or shadow, leaving options of interpretation to them.
Lakshmi Iyer leans into the shadows:
A new day with an open page. The poet starts her day with an open mind with no idea whatsoever of writing any haiku. But, then lines two and three speak of the shadow of the poem leaning forward. We can pause to wonder: If there isn’t any poem, where does the shadow come from? Yes, it’s a clear, the beautiful morning with shadows leaning in front of us.
Here, the poet has the image of the poem in her mind, almost ready to be posted. Sometimes, our inner conscience clicks with images to be written, though we may do the writing sometime later in the day. But here the shadow of the poem leans forward to have the writer place it on the open page.
Well in advance, Karen has used the shadows to post her poem and, with a minimum of syllables, has captured the most beautiful aspect of life: “Live your life with an open page.”
As this week’s winner, Lakshmi gets to choose next week’s poem, which you’ll find below. We invite you to write a commentary to it. It may be as long or short, academic or spontaneous, serious or silly, public or personal as you like. We will select out-takes from the best of these. And the very best will be reproduced in its entirety and take its place as part of the THF Archives. Best of all, the winning commentator gets to choose the next poem for commentary.
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