Welcome to re:Virals, The Haiku Foundation’s weekly poem commentary feature on some of the finest haiku ever written in English. This week’s poem was
Peter's Pence - the village priest arrives in a new luxury sedan, — Djurdja Vukelic-Rožić, cattails (April 2019)
Marion Clarke finds parallels to a local incident:
On first reading, I thought “Peter’s Pence” referred to a tale from folklore, like “The Pied Piper of Hamelin” or the tongue-twister rhyme, “Peter Piper.”
However, the association with religion in the next two lines brought back memories of church, and after some research I discovered “Peter’s Pence” is the oldest collection in the Roman Catholic Church, first mentioned in history as far back as 1031 and, in Ireland, dating back to Norman times.
However, lines 2 and 3 resonated, moving to Catholicism today in Ireland and the words of an elderly parishioner who informed me, “The new priest arrived on a motorcycle and has a yacht moored down at the marina.”
So, Djurdja’s last two lines could have been uttered by the same old lady, but I think “Peter’s Pence” raises the bar!
Cezar Ciobîcă recalls one of the seven deadly sins:
The poem proposed for analysis is a senryu that sheds light on how some priests deviate from moral precepts. Everyone knows that the greed, or love for money, is one of the seven deadly sins. What is shocking is that the churchman simply astounds his parishioners by appearing with a luxury limousine. Peter’s Pence should aid victims of war and natural disasters, displaced persons and migrants/ refugees, as well as educational centers, scholarships, orphans of war, etc. Maybe the clergyman forgot that his mission is to love and serve God, not money which can make us blind. Finally, what can I state further: don’t put the blame on him, ’cause he’s only human after all.
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Poetry often makes unintended connections for a reader. Though I’m sure it was not meant to do so, this poem brings to mind our American Vice President Pence, a self-proclaimed righteous man, and the current popularity of Prosperity Gospel among some Christians. Many a village priest has dedicated himself to building a megachurch and bringing In Dollars for God rather than souls for God. As Vice President Pence travels in his official limo, so too do those men of God choose to travel in their limos or personal airplanes, bought with God’s money. I believe it is a sign of a successful poem when it leaves room for making connections at a personal level as this poem has done for me. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to ramble on.
Peter’s Pence –
the village priest arrives
in a new luxury sedan
— Djurdja Vukelic-Rožić, cattails (April
Thanks for giving us a senryu by Djurdja Vukelic ,featured in Haiku Foundation’s blog. The tempo of the write, possibly intended by the Croatian writer, directed towards Corruption and anarchy prevalent among Roman Catholic priests. (Certainly a knowledge of history delving into details about Peter’s Pence until and after Reformation, is a must ).
The first line obviously “ Peter’s Pence” refers to the income by way of charity, Slowly became collections by way of tax Or donations. Historical evidence has thus :Peter’s Pence collected from every house every penny.
“ Peter’s Pence —” the pause- at the end of the line, giving room for the readers to imagine, furthering into more and more info.
The second line “ the village priest arrives, leading on to the second line, in a New luxury sedan car with more comfort. Two different entities veering round two different situations. Copious flow of wealth among priests, tempting them to indulge in luxury and drive about sedan.
Present tense verb “arrives” in distinct way, tells us the confidence, ambiance of flow, atmosphere of luxury and assumed majesty etc., Sacred deviating into celerity of ungodly and mundane – – depicted here in this write, where telling is more of showing clothed in polished terms.
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