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re:Virals 159

Welcome to re:Virals, The Haiku Foundation’s weekly poem commentary feature on some of the finest haiku ever written in English. This week’s poem was

Carnival balloon
     still filled with
             a dead child’s breath
          — James Kirkup, First Fireworks (1992) 

Radhamani Sarma finds opposites:

A pleasure to comment upon this week’s haiku by James kirkup, a British poet, professor, and translator.
The striking feature of this week’s haiku is that the haiku revolves around the principle of antithesis, converting the meaning of all three lines. Carnival/demise, birth/death, inflation/deflation, and the somber memory of death is such that it creates a vacuum, a void, while the inflated baloon continues flying. Human feelings represented by air bubbles/air balloons traversing far beyond time and space.

As a contributor to an obituary column, James Kirkup must have had an inkling to write this haiku, with necrology serving as an impetus.

As this week’s winner, Radhamani gets to choose next week’s poem, which you’ll find below. We invite you to write a commentary to it. It may be as long or short, academic or spontaneous, serious or silly, public or personal as you like. We will select out-takes from the best of these. And the very best will be reproduced in its entirety and take its place as part of the THF Archives. Best of all, the winning commentator gets to choose the next poem for commentary.
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re:Virals 159:

     flapping in the prunus 
     woodpigeons shedding 
     feathers and leaves
          — Geoffrey Winch, A Hundred Gourds 5:1 (2015) 

This Post Has 6 Comments

    1. Dear esteemed poet,
      Greetings! Thank you so so much for your encouraging words of
      appreciation. All due your best wishes.

      Reading the link : James Kirkup was the first president of the British Haiku Society,

      how informative it is!
      with regards

  1. Thank you Radhamani for your excellent analysis. I think this haiku is a good example of how something so brief (in this case 9 words) can contain so much.

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