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re:Virals 112

Welcome to re:Virals, The Haiku Foundation’s weekly poem commentary feature on some of the finest haiku ever written in English. This week’s poem was

     è già mattino —

     a pioggia bussa ai vetri con 

     cento dita 

     it’s morning — 
rain knocks to the window

     with one hundred fingers 

          — Lucia Cardillo, Otata 22 (2017) 

Hansha Teki sees rain as a possible intruder:

Not having experienced the seasons in Italy, I imagine here an abrupt awakening on a morning in late summer. The first line conveys startled surprise (it’s [already] morning), but it is not clear whether there is a sense of relief or annoyance. Has the summer been too long, hot, and dry? Has the night’s sleep been too short? Is the rain tapping against the glass, “with one hundred fingers,” the poet’s ‘man from Porlock’ or is it the good news awaited with so much anticipation?

The rain seems driven against the glass by wind, marking a new morning — the end of a period of drought perhaps.

As this week’s winner, Hansha gets to choose next week’s poem, which you’ll find below. We invite you to write a commentary to it. It may be as long or short, academic or spontaneous, serious or silly, public or personal as you like. We will select out-takes from the best of these. And the very best will be reproduced in its entirety and take its place as part of the THF Archives. Best of all, the winning commentator gets to choose the next poem for commentary.
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re:Virals 112:

     a wild boar
     comes and eats air
     spring mountain path 
          — Kaneko Tohta, Selected Haiku With Notes and Commentary Part 2:1961-2012, translated by the Kon Nichi Translation Group (Red Moon Press, 2012)

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    1. Don’t worry I’ll remove it from comments and I’ll include it in next week’s revirals. (I recently disabled the comments section so people who didn’t want to officially submit comments could still react to each week’s installment and have a conversation but it leads to confusion because people mistake the comments section with the contact section. (All terribly ambiguous, I know.)
      Maybe we will go back to disabling the comments section at some point.

    2. When you get the chance please send me a message in the contact box and use “re:Virals” as the subject and tell me your email so I can include you on the contributors list. Thanks.

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