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New to Haiku: Advice for Beginners – Deborah P Kolodji

Happy 2022! As our first post of the new year, New to Haiku is pleased to interview Deborah P Kolodji. A leader in both English-language haiku and science fiction short-form poetry, she is the California Regional Coordinator for the Haiku Society of America, a member of the board of directors for Haiku North America, and the former president of the Science Fiction & Fantasy Poetry Association. Thanks for sharing your haiku journey with us, Debbie.

In Advice for Beginners posts, we ask established haiku poets to share a bit about themselves so that you can meet them and learn more about their writing journeys. We, too, wanted to learn what advice they would give to beginning haiku poets. You can read posts from previous Advice for Beginners interviewees here.

Welcome to New to Haiku, Debbie! How did you come to learn about haiku?

Like many of us, I wrote my first haiku in fourth grade following a 5-7-5 lesson plan. I later took two years of creative writing as a high school elective, even editing the school literary magazine, and yet I still wasn’t exposed to anything beyond the syllable count. As I continued to write poetry as an adult, mostly speculative poetry, over time I began to feel my work was too wordy. In the 1990’s, I joined the scifaiku mailing list on Yahoogroups, experimenting with short 5-7-5 science fictional thoughts. There, I met gK, a poet who told me about a haiku group which met in Long Beach at a bookstore.

At that time, I was a single mom with three kids, but as the older ones started to move out and go to college, gK kept reminding me about the haiku group and eventually I drove to the bookstore and met Jerry Ball. Jerry quickly changed my perception of haiku and what haiku could be. Over the next several months, I bought every haiku book I could find in the bookstore and others around Southern California. At some point, I discovered an early Red Moon Anthology and I loved what contemporary poets were writing. I looked at the publication credits in the back and began subscribing to the journals I saw listed there. In 2002, I attended one day of Haiku Pacific Rim in Long Beach where I met some of the people behind the names in my books and journals. Twenty years later, I am still buying haiku books, subscribing to journals, going to haiku conferences and events, and I moderate the haiku group that changed my life.

Do you have a haiku mentor? What advice did they give you? Did someone else’s haiku greatly influence your own?

Jerry Ball was my haiku mentor. He taught me about kigo, kireji, and juxtaposition. He envisioned the Southern California Haiku Study Group as a place for like-minded poets to study haiku together, and I learned so much from each monthly workshop. One of my favorite sayings of Jerry’s was his reply to a question like, “Can you use rhyme in a haiku?” or “Can you use the “f” word in a haiku?” His reply would always be, “Yes, but not often.” I loved the idea of experimenting and seeing where my imagination would take me.

David Priebe, who published Haiku Headlines, was a member of the group and each month he’d bring issues to hand out, so I started thinking about publishing my own, and some of my earlier haiku publications were in Haiku Headlines.

Where do you most often write? Do you have a writing process?

I keep my writing notebook close by so I can make notes in it regardless of what I am doing. I may not write a complete haiku; I often write what I consider “haiku seeds,” essentially half-haiku, either a phrase or a fragment of whatever caught my attention that I can work into a haiku later. I love going on ginko expeditions, whether in a botanical garden, at the beach, at a National Park, on a boat/train/airplane, on a walk around my block, or, in this time of COVID-19, simply sitting in my backyard.

For those just starting out, what advice would you give?

Read as much as you can. There are great online resources and journals in addition to the books and print journals I started off with long ago. Write what you see, whatever strikes you at the time. If an idea intrigues you, write down the “haiku seeds” and worry about forming a haiku out of it later if something doesn’t happen in the moment. If it does, consider it a gift from the universe, but still check back in a week or so, to see if you have any edits.

If there is a local haiku group, consider joining it. Consider attending a haiku conference or retreat. Keep writing and writing and writing. In this world of Zoom, attend a Zoom haiku meeting or conference. There’s a community aspect to haiku where I believe being around other haiku poets helps you discover your own haiku sensibility. Make friends with other haiku poets. I have several haiku friends that I love to bounce ideas off and who bounce ideas off me.

What are some of the fun ways that you have used or experienced haiku?

First of all, I love going to haiku conferences, which is why, after being a co-organizer of the 2013 Haiku North America conference on the Queen Mary, I ended up eventually joining the board of directors for Haiku North America. The 2023 conference will be in Cincinnati, Ohio and I hope to see many of you there. In the non-pandemic era, I also have attended Asilomar, Seabeck, Haiku Canada Weekends, HSA Regional Meetings, and Haiku Circle. It is fun being around other haiku poets, I love participating in workshops, I love haiku walks, and can stay up all night for an anonymous haiku workshop.

Some highlights over the years for me include an unofficial ghost walk on the Queen Mary at midnight with Naia and the HNA board, a MetroRail ginko for an HSA weekend hosted in Pasadena, a Haiku Canada Weekend in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, where I tried to stay awake to see if it really got dark, a boat ginko in the Naples area of Long Beach, and a recent boat ginko with 3 other haiku poets in the San Diego Bay, where I wrote tons of haiku. I have enjoyed road trips to the Asilomar Conference Center in Pacific Grove where we wrote haiku as we were driving (with Wendy Wright) or read haiku from books and journals and then critiqued them (with Naia).

One really wonderful event evolved. For the HSA weekend in Pasadena, we had an “urban haiku” reading accompanied by an electric guitarist and a slide show of urban images. This evolved into a presentation for the Asilomar Haiku Pacific Rim in 2012 by Naia, Gregory Longenecker and myself, which was seen by Alan Pizzarelli and Donna Beaver, who then subsequently recorded us and edited it into a podcast for the Haiku Chronicles, “Ants on the Sidewalk.” I recently discovered that the Poets & Writers website has a link to the Haiku Chronicles podcast on their website.


What are your favorite haiku that you have written? Can you share a story behind one of them?

morning tidepools
a hermit crab tries on
the bottle cap

2nd Place, World Haiku Tournament, 2002

This haiku reminds me of the years of family campouts at Leo Carrillo State Beach in Malibu, where I’d get up at dawn to walk down to the tide pools, while everyone else was still asleep in their tents.

white marble
I am small at the feet
of Lincoln

The Heron’s Nest, 2003

My first trip to Washington, DC was when I graduated from high school through a summer program called “Capitol Classroom.”  This haiku always brings back how I felt standing there.

hospital hair
the ghost of who
I am

#FemkuMag, Jan 2021

Over the last couple of years, I’ve written many haiku about cancer and serious illness and this one really sums up all of them.

red planet dust
covers beta colony
the only green her eyes

Random Planets:  A Scifaiku Odyssey, Sam’s Dot Publishing, June 2003

I like to use this haiku as an example of how scifaiku or speculative haiku can show a greater truth than the actual scenario which actually inspired the poem. When I was about 12, I went on a family road trip with my parents and little sister, and at some point we stopped at a gas station in Oklahoma. While my dad filled up the tank, I got out of the car to stretch my legs.  I noticed the dirt/sand in that area was red and I asked my dad, “Is this what Mars looks like?” My dad replied, “I don’t know. I’ve never been there.”

I have green eyes and I remember standing there thinking that the only green thing was my eyes. I also remember the feeling of being sort of marooned in this strange place, this gas station stop by the road, so far from home. I could have written “a gas station/in Oklahoma/the only green her eyes” but that doesn’t capture the feeling of being sort of helpless to the whims of the “mothership,” so to speak. I think that writing this haiku as if the person is actually on Mars evokes that sense of being hopelessly far from home, conveying a greater truth than the actual scenario experienced. Scifaiku/speculative haiku when done well accomplishes this.

You were the president of the Science Fiction & Fantasy Poetry Association for 5 years. What is speculative haiku? How is it different (or similar) to “regular” haiku?

There is always a discussion within the speculative poetry community as to what is truly speculative and what defines it. Some poets feel that the poem has to be truly something that is imagined like the above haiku, where I am imagining being on Mars. If the speculative element is a metaphor, some feel it isn’t really speculative. I believe that if the speculative element is a metaphor, it is also bringing those possibilities to mind, so I have a broader definition than some.

Also, there have been discussions regarding science poetry, of which I write a lot. I feel that science, by its very nature, is speculative, so I classify science haiku as speculative haiku, as well as any haiku that uses speculative imagery, or any haiku written about a speculative situation.

Regardless of how you define it, images of science, from mathematics and technology, from science fiction, from myths and legends, and from horror, can become interesting prompts to write about. I write my “speculative haiku” the same way I write my “regular haiku,” but I just use more fantastical images. I subscribe to the daily JPL update and some science e-mail lists, so I often read science and astronomy “popular” articles (versus scientific papers, lol). Sometimes, the images intrigue me so I jot them down. I find that the speculative haiku which work best are those where the speculative image juxtaposes with my everyday life or recounts something that actually happened to me in a speculative way.

the tug
of a black hole
this isolation

#FemkuMag, April 2020

“The tug of a black hole” is a speculative image, but “this isolation” — written in the time of the pandemic and stay-at-home orders — means that while this poem is a “speculative haiku” about a black hole, it also can be read as a pandemic haiku.  It could also be read as a haiku about illness, a haiku about being separated from one’s family, or as a divorce haiku.  Or, it could be read literally, like a science fiction story, imagining the isolation of being in a spaceship being pulled into a black hole.

Deborah P Kolodji is the California Regional Coordinator for the Haiku Society of America, a member of the board of directors for Haiku North America, and the former president of the Science Fiction & Fantasy Poetry Association. She has published over 1000 haiku and her first full-length book of haiku and senryu, highway of sleeping towns, won a Touchstone Distinguished Book Award from the Haiku Foundation. Her e-chapbook of speculative haiku, tug of a black hole, is available as a free download from Title IX Press.

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Julie Bloss Kelsey is the current Secretary of The Haiku Foundation. She started writing haiku in 2009, after discovering science fiction haiku (scifaiku). She lives in Maryland with her husband and kids. Julie's first print poetry collection, Grasping the Fading Light: A Journey Through PTSD, won the 2021 Women’s International Haiku Contest from Sable Books. Her ebook of poetry, The Call of Wildflowers, is available for free online through Moth Orchid Press (formerly Title IX Press). Her most recent collection, After Curfew, is available from Cuttlefish Books. Connect with her on Instagram @julieblosskelsey.

This Post Has 17 Comments

  1. Debbie’s leadership at SoCal Haiku Study Group is tremendous and I love to continue trailblazing new haiku-land with you, Debbie! Someone new to Haiku is definitely lucky to read this article. Debbie never judges what we write and encourage individual creativities till we find our own path to refine them.

  2. Ah, Debbie, what a wonderful article.
    Thank you for it and for you.
    And all I can say is this: Jerry Ball, your mentor, would have just loved reading this. How wonderful that you carry on so beautifully what he did so generously: share the love of Haiku.

  3. What a Great Interview!

    If you’re lucky enough to run into Debbie at a haiku conference, be sure to attend all her sessions. You will learn a lot and have fun too. And you won’t find a more generous poet, one who is proactive in helping those new to haiku.

    I hope we get back to in person conferences before too long but in the meantime,

    Check out Debbie’s conversation on things haiku with editor Tim Green of Rattle Magazine

  4. Thank you for sharing your inspiring haiku journey and the wisdom of haiku seeds, Debbie! Your tireless work in the advancement of haiku and encouraging presence for beginners have contributed to the growth of haiku poets like me.
    Your e-chapbook of scifaiku, Tug of a Black Hole, is an absolute favorite!
    All the best,

  5. Thanks Deborah. This article, along with all of the ‘Advice for Beginners’ articles, has become a fabulous sounding board for our new haiku group, ‘Portarlington Haiku Society’ in Australia. We are all beginners and are travelling a wonderful ‘haiku’ road together. These segments are extremely helpful and inspiring.

    1. Congratulations on a new haiku group in Victoria. Hope to see occasional announcements at AHS maybe? 🙂

      Australian Haiku Society:

      I liked your haiku by the way!

      melting wind
      summer sand and wisps of hair
      in her ice cream

      Jenny Macaulay

      warmest regards,
      founder, Call of the Page
      editor, The Haiku Reader

      1. Hi Alan,
        Lovely to hear from you. We would be very happy to contribute information/announcements to the Australian Haiku Society as we are certainly gaining so much from this organisation as in haiku examples etc which all helps us along our way.
        Let me know how we can contribute.

    2. Great interview with Debbie. She’s a wonderful haiku poet and I consider her as one of my mentors.

  6. I love how you share the adventure and excitement of your haiku journey. Even though you have been inspiring me for many years and I I have “grown up” in your haiku study group, sharing many of these experiences, your story and fresh expression newly inspires me every time! Your genuine enthusiasm gives life to constantly unfolding and surprising haiku moments in our hearts! Thank you for your persistence and inspiration through these challenging times. What better introduction to new haiku poets!

  7. Debbie has amazing talent and gives so much to others who want to share and explore the wonderful world of haiku. She is a pleasure to work with in our SoCal Haiku study group.

  8. “Haiku seeds” is what they’re called? I collect them, too! 🙂 Thank you for this comprehensive interview, I enjoyed getting to know Deborah.

  9. Debbie, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your responses to the questions and appreciate your introduction, here, to a kind of “speculative” or SciFi haiku which makes good sense to me. While I’ve not attempted any such haiku, I’ve appreciated Science Fiction stories and novels for a very long time (long before my first haiku attempts) so who knows? 🙂

  10. This is one of my favourite haiku ever!

    morning tidepools
    a hermit crab tries on
    the bottle cap

    Deborah P Kolodji

    And love the ‘haiku seeds’ idea!

    After all, sometimes we can have useful fragments and phrases that we underrate until we take a risk and place two unlikely ones together and hey presto, unexpected magic! 🙂

    warm regards,

    Alan Summers
    founder, Call of the Page
    editor, The Haiku Reader

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