Haiku Windows: window shade, window blind
Haiku Windows
In the book Haiku: The Art of the Short Poem, editors Yamaguchi and Brooks quote David Lanoue: “A haiku is a window”…
In the following weeks we will look at (or through?) the many possibilities raised by this thought – and you’re invited to join in the fun! Submit an original unpublished poem (or poems) via our Contact Form by Sunday midnight on the theme of the week, including your name as you would like it to appear, and place of residence. I will select from these for the column, and add commentary.
next week’s theme: porthole
Riverboat, tall ship, ocean liner, submarine, houseboat, sailboat, freighter, ferry, fishing boat, paddlewheeler, yacht, cruise ship, pirate ship, supertanker, icebreaker, galleon…
I look forward to reading your submissions.
Haiku Windows: window shade, window blind
Another wonderful and varied selection – thank you poets!
early start…
the blinds
half openCarol Jones
I am not a morning person – perhaps that is why this poem appeals to me… straight-forward language, and a gap that the reader can fill, maybe after a cup of coffee…
painting rainbows
right on the windows
for lack of shadesKath Abela Wilson
Pasadena, CA, USA
Every week there are a number of poems that are unlike all the others – the perspective is different, or in some way the window or the view is turned in a direction no other submission has taken. This is one of the things that makes reading all the submissions so enjoyable! Here we simply have no window covering at all except paint…
morning snow
window curtains
are filled with lightSerhiy Shpychenko
Kyiv, Ukraine
There can be a certain brightness in morning snow – looking out into the whiteness – or perhaps it is a dark winter morning, and looking at the house from the street, the room is filled with light… either interpretation can work, and there could be others…
Here are the rest of my selections for this week:
closing the shutters
on the peeping moon –
the late night bossAdjei Agyei-Baah
Ghana
old window…
faded curtain fringes veil
a mud dauber nestAl Gallia
Lafayette, Louisiana USA
drawing the curtains
I see my neighbour
drawing the curtainsAndrew Shimield
UK
new neighbours –
all the window blinds
always tightly shutAngelee Deodhar
venetian blind
the bending of light
against meAngelo Ancheta
thin rain
the cat plays hide and seek
with the fluffy curtainAngiola Inglese
air raid siren –
blue orchids tremble
on the curtainsarvinder kaur
chandigarh, India
behind
transparent curtains
naked soundBasant Kumar Das
evening lull
the cats groom their claws
on the curtainsBeverly Acuff Momoi
Mountain View, CA
blinds closed…
the things we don’t say
to each otherCarol Raisfeld
tearing down
the heavy drapes
spring fevercezar florescu
a rare glimpse
of mom crying
shaded windowsinspired by christine eales’ haiku from last week
Christina Sng
Singapore
manipulating
circadian rhythm
black-out curtainsClaire Vogel Camargo
USA
writer’s cabin
opening the blinds
past midnightDebbi Antebi
dandelions opening
my neighbor’s window shades
shutDeborah P Kolodji
Temple City, CA
window shade
the glittering dust
of a sunbeamEufemia Griffo
hidden
behind white window blinds
the shadows of springEva Limbach
fluttering curtains –
scent of roses
among the sheetsGiovanna Restuccia
Modena (Italy)
visiting hours
peeking through the blinds
the foster childHifsa Ashraf
Pakistan
twitching curtains
a neighbor misses nothing –
lonelinessIngrid Baluch
Uganda
divorce papers
on the table
sliced sunlightJoanne van Helvoort
no drapes necessary
deep in the north woods
the bears don’t careJudith Hishikawa
hide-and-seek
sunshine and silhouettes
behind the curtainsKimberly Esser
Los Angeles, CA
funeral parlor
through the venetian blinds
a fractured worldLee Nash
sunny window…
behind the crochet curtain
mama’s shadow(finestra al sole … dietro la tenda a crochet / l’ombra di mamma)
Lucia Cardillo
holland blind
over window geraniums
a scalloped worldMadhuri Pillai
nursing home
the bent up blind
she peeps throughMarilyn Appl Walker
madison, ga, usa
shading the cot
lots of rainbows in rows
for a rainy dayMark Gilbert
UK
sun and shadow
painting the tiger stripes
on the ginger catMarta Chocilowska
stalker moon
from window to window
I draw the shadesMartha Magenta
England, UK
Venetian blinds our on-again-off-again
Matthew Markworth
Mason, OH, USA
sheers…
getting to know
all about youMichael Henry Lee
remembering
when it was our silhouettes –
winter cabinMichael H. Lester
Los Angeles CA USA
presenting
a brand new day
the curtain cordMike Gallagher
open window…
two hooks
missingMohammad Azim Khan
peeking out the blind
at the neighbor
the catNancy Brady
Huron, Ohio, USA
two pigeons
in love –
window shadeNeha Talreja
hand me down
lace curtains
a borrowed viewNicole Tilde
Shady Dale, Ga.
before turning on the lamp
moonlight through
the venetian blindsOlivier Schopfer
Geneva, Switzerland
breathing
through sheer curtains
blue incense of lavenderpamela a. babusci
rochester, ny usa
between the wall and the drapes
a cat without its
tailpat davis
pembroke, nh usa
in the shade
Venetian wine tasting
blindPaul Geiger
fear of discovery
too much pull
on the window shadePeter Jastermsky
Christmas Eve night
a young child peeps
though the curtainsRachel Sutcliffe
dawn leaks in
through the window shades
wiggly one between usRandy Brooks
drapes wiggle
the cat catches sight
of a hummingbirdRehn Kovacic
blinds closed
in the empty room
her rosaryRoberta Beary
County Mayo, Ireland
parted curtains –
we lie in a sliver
of moonlightRobin Smith
Wilmington, DE
through green curtains
tree and hedge seem
the samerobyn brooks
usa
mountain hut
rice sack curtains
lit by the moonRon C. Moss
Tasmania, Australia
slats open
just enough
neighborhood watchRonald K. Craig
Batavia, OH 45103 USA
slice by slice
through window blinds
rain cloudsSeretta Martin
San Diego, CA
summer breeze
enticing moonlight
into the curtainsSimon Hanson
Queensland, Australia
opening the blinds
the outline of pressed leaves
against the glassSkaidrite Stelzer
curtain dance
the cat hunts
the speedy mouseSlobodan Pupovac
Zagreb, Croatia
clinic window blind
I follow the rise and fall
of a bulbul’s songSonam Chhoki
night fall
the window blind
wraps upSrinivasa Rao Sambangi
open blind
the spring sun
widerStephen A. Peters
a space
between shade and sill
the boy with binocularsSusan Mallernee
waiting for daddy
our blinds
bentTia Haynes
shades drawn
setting boundaries
with the News FeedTiffany Shaw-Diaz
Centerville, Ohio, USA
wooden blinds –
the night still locked
in her roomTomislav Maretic
grandma’s house
all shutters covered
with mossTsanka Shishkova
Sofia, Bulgaria
vertical blinds…
eyeing a stray cat
who is eyeing meValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, Ohio USA
hospital bed
broken sunlight coming in
through window blindsVandana Parashar
Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada and an Associate Member of the League of Canadian Poets. She recently co-edited an anthology of crime-themed haiku called Body of Evidence: a collection of killer ’ku.
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This is the first time I’ve sent a poem thanks to Debbie K. I’m honored to be included in this fine collection. If you should come to visit San Diego, Haiku San Diego meets on the 2nd Sunday. And as the managing editor of the San Diego Poetry Annual, I invite you to submit haiku, haibun or other forms between June 15 and Oct. 15, 2018. serettamartin@yahoo.com.
Wonderful! Thanks to Debbie K, & thanks Seretta for sharing this!
WONDERFUL HAIKU! many thx for including mine.
blessings, pamela a. babusci
thank you Pamela
Christina
mum cries a lot
in haiku
dad’s turn
thank you for your haiku
Christine
thanks for this Christine! I love the idea that one poem from this column has inspired another…
Yet another enjoyable selection, and thank you for including mine. Looking forward to reading poets’ interpretations of Portholes.
thank you!
I very much liked Christina Sng’s and Joanne van Helvoort’s, the latter technically excellent.
thanks for sharing this, Mark!
As a cat lover, I copied all the poems mentioning cats in this edition. Thank you for including mine, Kathy!
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thin rain
the cat plays hide and seek
with the fluffy curtain
Angiola Inglese
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evening lull
the cats groom their claws
on the curtains
Beverly Acuff Momoi
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sun and shadow
painting the tiger stripes
on the ginger cat
Marta Chocilowska
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peeking out the blind
at the neighbor
the cat
Nancy Brady
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between the wall and the drapes
a cat without its
tail
pat davis
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drapes wiggle
the cat catches sight
of a hummingbird
Rehn Kovacic
*
curtain dance
the cat hunts
the speedy mouse
Slobodan Pupovac
*
vertical blinds…
eyeing a stray cat
who is eyeing me
Valentina Ranaldi-Adams
Hi Marta, I very much liked your cat one, but I wondered whether you considered removing the ‘the’ in line 2?
Hi, Mark! I have problems with “a” and “the” always! Thank you very much for your help 🙂
Marta
Don’t we all!
exactly! thanks for this David
Hi. Marta,
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you said:
“Hi, Mark! I have problems with “a” and “the” always! Thank you very much for your help 🙂
Marta”
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I’ve just written an article about articles [a, an, the] as a prompt for a website feature, as I’ve been told there isn’t anything online about articles in haiku.
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Once it’s up, I’ll also post it to my blog.
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It’s a fascinating subject in its own right. 🙂
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sun and shadow
painting the tiger stripes
on the ginger cat
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Marta Chocilowska
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Neat haiku, and so possible to do at least two other versions, switching or removing articles. Your version will be fun to read out or perform at a poetry gig, and I am sure you’d be purrrrrrfect doing that! 🙂
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Thank you very much, Alan, I love your comments as always!
sun and shadow
painting tiger stripes
on the ginger cat
I would like to read your article about articles very much! Perhaps you may want to sent the link to me marteusz@gmail.com ?
Love
Marta
thanks for this Alan – as always – I am looking forward to your article as well!
cheers, Kathy
thanks for this, Mark – as you may have noticed, I am not offering any edits aside from what I think are obvious typos, & I love this kind of respectful discussion…
Oh, Kathy… I’m so grateful for everything you’re doing for us!
Perhaps after reading Alans’s article I improve my knowledge about articles 🙂
Have a nice weekend
Marta
Marta,
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I thought your haiku was lovely! I believe the article will be broadcast next week, and then I can add it later to my blog.
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warm regards,
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Alan
love this, Marta – thanks!
Many thanks, Kathy 🙂 As a crazy cat lover, I could not resist 🙂
Another great selection. I really love all of the cat activity represented here! Thanks for including mine, Kathy! Looking forward to what next week brings.
-Robin
thanks Robin!
Outstanding collection! Thanks for including me, Kathy.
Porthole, eh? 😉 Cant wait to read those.
Outstanding collection! Thanks for including me, Kathy.
Porthole, eh? 😉 Cant wait to read those…
thanks for the kind words, Carol!
Another great line up, Kathy. A wonderful read.
Thank you so much for including one of mine.
thank you for submitting, Carol!
Thanks for adding mine to this list of distinguished poets. I feel honored and humbled.
I notice how often cats play into this theme. Obviously, cats like to observe the world and blinds and curtains don’t deter them.
thanks for this, Nancy!
Congratulations to all the poets and thanks to you, Kathy 🙂
Marta
thanks Marta!
Wonderful!
agreed!
What variety! I especially like Claire Vogel Camargo’s “manipulating” . Thanks for including mine. Looking forward to the view from a porthole.
thanks for sharing, Pat
Thank-you for publishing one of mine. I am honored to be among such well-known poets.
thank you for submitting, Valentina!
Thank you for including me here, Kathy.
Angelo – thanks for submitting!