HAIKU DIALOGUE – Times of Transition – The last frontier / Poems of dying and death (1)
Times of Transition with Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt
For the next few weeks let’s talk about Times of Transition. Arnold van Gennep and Viktor Turner explored these times of transition scientifically, because human existence is defined by them. So, together, let’s do the same – by reflecting on our lives. All of us experience periods in life when alteration takes place and we have to change too. Everything changes: the seasons, moods, the weather – there might even be times when the boundaries of right and wrong, of good and evil seem to change. We are caught in the middle of transition, becoming opaque like water in turmoil. Looking back, we hardly recognize our way up to the present; looking forward, our path seems to be foggy and uncertain. Sometimes we are challenged to let go of our former self to become someone new.
Below is Deborah’s selection of poems on the theme of The last frontier / Poems of dying and death:
long night moon—
only the crow and I left
to dream of tomorrowAdele Evershed
Wilton, Connecticut
a year later
and I still haven’t moved
his dog bedAidan Barger
Moscow, ID
last breath failing to bloom
Alan Harvey
Tacoma, WA
before my last breath
I will dance with each full moon
lux aeternamAlfred Booth
Lyon, France
a child’s death
the scent of
unlit candlesAlvin Cruz
Philippines
autumn afternoon
I didn’t notice it rising–
pale parchment moonAllison Douglas-Tourner
Victoria BC Canada
ultime foglie …
la voglia di volare
towards youlast leaves…
the desire to fly
towards youAngiola Inglese
Italia
pallid leaf
a breath between going
and goneAnju Kishore
India
at the last breath
heads bow
to things unseenAnn Rawson
Scotland
autumn garden —
the splendour
of dyingAnn Sullivan
Arlington MA USA
graveside visit –
Grandpa sits rigid
in his camp chairAnne Curran
Hamilton
moonlight
on white chrysanthemums
no need for candlesAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
one last time
through the window ajar
night jasmineArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh, India
last embers —
I could not live
the lie anymoreAparna Pathak
Gurugram, India
flatline sound
the earworm
I never wantedBaisali Chatterjee Dutt
Kolkata, India
shiva’s end
I am older by seven days
and a death(Shiva is the seven-day mourning period after burial in Jewish tradition.)
Barrie Levine
Massachusetts, USA
my poetry
precedes me in death
tomb of the unknownBonnie J Scherer
Alaska USA
season’s end
the unpicked field
succumbs to frostBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
disappearing inside grief shadows
C.X. Turner
UK
short notice
an undeserved
parting giftCarol Reynolds
Australia
Full of life –
young squirrels play chase
amongst the gravestonesCaroline Ridley-Duff
UK
winter garden
leafless maple
i’ll be backCharles Harper
Yokohama, Japan
setting sun
watching the last of
the western skyChen Xiaoou
Kunming, China
brushing cherry blossoms
a whiff
of my impermanenceCristina Povero
Italy
post-therapy
anytime now
wilted flowerpasca terapi
kapanpun bisa
bunga layuChristopher Calvin
Kota Mojokerto, Indonesia
after death
her smile
presents itselfConnie Pittman Ramsey
UK
last rite
the white butterfly
folds its wingsCynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
mourning dove
through the walls
without youD. W. Baker
St. Petersburg, FL
memory’s burden
one less weight
in the graveDamon Huss
United States
copy-pasting
the thank you note
condolencesDaya Bhat
India
last wishes
hopes and dreams
for my childrenDebbie Scheving
Bremerton WA USA
last rites
the friend who’d said
it’ll be our turn nextDipankar Dasgupta
India
finding out
old friends have passed
google searchesEavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
memorial candle
the flame dances
without a partnerEvan Spivack
Teaneck, NJ
This also happens
In the form of a cloud
Death is comingFatma Zohra Habis
Algeria
with no regret
wind felled ixora florets
dot the paved walkGillena Cox
St James, Trinidad
homecoming…
signing up
for hospice careGrace De Sousa
Québec, Canada
graveyard bench
beneath our feet
all creatures greatHelen Buckingham
UK
smiling gratitude
our aged eyes connectedherb goldsmith
Bastrop, TX
Buddha’s light
all that I have to make it through
the last mountainHla Yin Mon
Yangon, Myanmar
out of time . . .
all those questions
i could have asked themIngrid Baluchi
North Macedonia
in death I shall feed
the banyan tree I lie
beneath todayJames Penha
Bali, Indonesia
yes Virginia even starlight dies
Jan Stretch
Victoria, BC, Canada
outliving her my roundness flattening
Jenn Ryan-Jauregui
Tucson, Arizona USA
grief is a snowflake
silently falling on me
blanketing in lossJennifer Gurney
United States
the endless wait
for the next heartbeat
he is goneJenny Shepherd
London, UK
see the world old gray stump
Jerome Berglund
United States
never again
will I eat her apple pie
I can taste the lossJoel Irusta
Archdale, North Carolina, USA
black tie event
introducing ourselves
to a shadowJohn Hawkhead
United Kingdom
the cracks of dawn this extinct glacier
John S Green
Bethlehem, Palestine
dry leaves on a branch
celebrating the first
birthday without youJovana Dragojlovic
Belgrade, Serbia
we have
such great times together
mom’s last wordsKathabela Wilson
USA
up in the graveyard
so many whispered stories
enliven the airKathleen Cain
Arvada, CO
open window . . .
she slips out
to join the starsKathleeen Trocmet
Texas, USA
chatter silenced
in the long pause
the lift offKavita Ratna
India
reincarnation —
wishing to be
a songbirdKeiko Izawa
Japan
the unplanned paths
wildflowersKimberly Kuchar
Austin, Texas
your shopping list still having it
Kiti Saarinen
Finland
ocean ripples
carrying to distant corners
marigold and ashesKrishna Palle
Chennai, India
autumn stillness–
we scatter your ashes
in the riverLafcadio
USA
origami husk —
the dying cat’s
rickety purrLisa Anne Johnson
Ann Arbor, Michigan, USA
between this world
and the other
a dandelion puffLori Kiefer
London UK
her ashes
we each hold a thimble
of god weightLorraine A Padden
San Diego, CA USA
still listening
for her golden oldies
nan’s rose gardenLouise Hopewell
Australia
entering death
open eyes…
forget me notsLuciana Moretto
Treviso, Italy
lonely street corner
after midnight
prayer candlesLuke Brannon
Pacific Northwest
when I die
don’t assume
I’m the butterflyM. R. Defibaugh
United States
tomorrow
I begin my best life…I promise
no more regretsmadeleine kavanagh
United States
palliative care
Dad tells me
I’m his favouriteMargaret Mahony
Australia
ebb tide
giving mother’s ashes
back to oceanMargie Gustafson
Lombard, IL USA
the death of the butterfly
on the fingers of the childla morte della farfalla
sulle dita del bambinoMaria Cezza
Italy
umpteenth attempt
at my death poem…
practice makes perfectMark Meyer
Mercer Island, WA USA
last frost
leaving the front door
unlockedMariel Herbert
California, USA
deep sea dive
a new widow
emergesmarilyn ashbaugh
edwardsburg, michigan
the last hill
will anyone be waiting
for meMaxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebec
his old watch
no longer
telling timeMike Fainzilber
Rehovot, Israel
final breaths
lingering everywhere
winter breezeMinal Sarosh
Ahmedabad, India
from under the dead leaves a few shoots
Mirela Brailean
Romania
thinking
of the life beyond —
cicada huskMona Bedi
Delhi, India
silence
of the falling snow
–last ritesNancy Brady
Huron, Ohio
a woman’s face
in the hospice window …
falling darknessNatalia Kuznetsova
Russia
Autumn garden
I am accepting
to fly awayNazarena Rampini
Italy
holding onto
the wilted blossom
… a dewdropNeena Singh
India
breath stops
for us both
only mine continuesNicky Moxey
United Kingdom
at lifeline’s edge
curiosity for
expiry dateNitu Yumnam
India
November sky
how heavy
the lifeless beaglePadma Rajeswari
Mumbai, India
melting candle
I try to sustain
the last sparkPadmini Krishnan
United Arab Emirates
decomposing
the bird that was
not a haikuPamela Garry
Connecticut USA
dried flowers paper-thin hands making arrangements
Pamela Jeanne
Yukon, Canada
on her deathbed
missing from the family
her aborted childPaul Callus
Malta
why
just now
do the words finally flowPeggy Hale Bilbro
Alabama
eighty now
another friend’s ashes
dust the wildflowersPris Campbell
USA
between me
and the moon
a few more chemo cyclesRam Chandran
India
fearing death
they danced all night
toasting the moonRehn Kovacic
Mesa, AZ
old scarecrow
like you, I never did anything
wrongRicha Sharma
India
columbarium
some stone painted names
just fade awayRichard L. Matta
San Diego, California
sundown chill
shadows follow
the glowRichard Straw
Cary, North Carolina
riding our breath the alchemy of time
Rita Melissano
Illinois – USA
between two worlds
the grass really greener
on the other sideRob Barkan
Arizona USA
newborn baby
the cries
of a motherRuth H. Hermosa
Gloria, Oriental Mindoro, Philippines
no more journeys
after this one
cliff edgeRuth Holzer
Herndon, VA
moving clouds …
wrapped in a baby’s cry
the cemeterySamo Kreutz
Ljubljana, Slovenia
pyre sparks rise …
fireflies
escape the jarSangita Kalarickal
United States
winter night
a skeleton tree
holds the moonSarah Paris
Santa Rosa, CA
mission accomplished . . .
the slow dying of
matchesSatyanarayana Chittaluri
Hyderabad, LB Nagar, India
tired and heavy
I write my name in water
float on the seaSharon Ferrante
Florida, USA
our old neighbors ––
finding their names now
engraved in graniteSheila Sondik
Bellingham, WA
cemetery on the hill
people from yesterday’s city
resettled hereStoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
ready
or not
autumn leavesStephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA
one last glance
from the riverside—
red spider liliesStephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
Lease of life expires
he leaves
without a backward glanceSudha Devi Nayak
Bhubaneswar India
raking the path
after weekend . . .
a new gardenerSuraj Nanu
India
lightning bolt how brief my time here
Susan Burch
Hagerstown, MD
a solitary
morning glory
gone by duskSusan Farner
USA
brother passes—
bright-white-light
glows on the peace lilySusan Lee Roberts
Montesano, WA, USA
snowflakes
melting
in the hugs of the riverSwarma Bopali de Zoysa
Sri Lanka
born with nothing on
die without regrets
the harvest moonTeiichi Suzuki
Japan
moonless night –
will the light within us
light the wayTomislav Maretić
Zagreb, Croatia
rainy night
imagining
my funeralTomislav Sjekloća
Cetinje, Montenegro
slipping into winter…
one apple left
from a bag of eightTony Williams
Scotland, UK
last post
the funeral plan leaflet
she should have readTracy Davidson
Warwickshire, UK
end of life
in the pot
a drooping plantTuyet Van Do
Australia
nearing end
all those books I didn’t
read or writeVandana Parashar
India
becoming history
to a set of four digits
a set of four digitsVishnu Kapoor
Chennai, India
coiled tendrils–
the seeping quietude
of morphinewanda amos
Australia
on the last edit
the i undottedWendy C. Bialek
az, us
Join us next week for Deborah’s commentary on additional poems, & our next prompt…
Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt lives in Bonn, Germany, with her husband, two rabbits and numerous books. After her PhD studies in Scandinavian languages and literatures, she now works as a freelance author and poet. One of her poems won 2nd place in the 2021 Pula Film Festival Haiku Contest. Her poems have most recently appeared in Prune Juice, Kingfisher, First Frost, Frogpond, Failed Haiku and Tsuridoro. If she is not outside for a long stroll or to do some birdwatching, she is an avid reader who is currently exploring Chinese Xianxia Webnovels.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. A novice haiku poet, she lives in New York City.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Barrie,
excuse me for my lateness in noting this uniquely and exquisitely written haiku!
(i sometimes am very poor with my math.)
in my observation into this experience, it seems to me who is being mourned was one of a twin set. with this image in my mind…i see a seven day old infant perhaps on the mother’s lap while she is sitting shiva for the loss of the sibling that would have be born at the same time as the babe on her lap. this haiku appears to me to show the mourning grief (is delayed) will always stay, in the awareness, loss and bond of a twin sibling who shared the same meals and same home for the previous nine months.
shiva’s end
I am older by seven days
and a death
(Shiva is the seven-day mourning period after burial in Jewish tradition.)
Barrie Levine
Massachusetts, USA
end of life
in the pot
a drooping plant
Tuyet Van Do
ii was pensive reading this…, I imagined myself as just a leaf
Nani Mariani – Australia
Oct 09, 23
Beautiful chosen dear Deborah..,
Congratulations!!
enjoy while learning. Congratulations to all 💕💕💕
Deborah, excellent selections and very grateful you deemed mine worthy of their company.
i am very touched by each of these death/dying ku, in Deborah’s collection.
Also. impressed with the grouping of ku into categories to make the read
flow even more meaningful for me. thank you Deborah for including mine, and placing
it at the end…where it rightfully belongs.
this one was a stand out for me…..it captures the shock of numbness, the cocoon
isolation felt by such a loss.
a child’s death
the scent of
unlit candles
Alvin Cruz
and i resonate strongly, with Eavonka’s ….. many of my poems written and some published were motivated from having discovered the very person i was reaching out to online has slipped away before eyes in a google search, too.
finding out
old friends have passed
google searches
Eavonka Ettinger
many became a fitting backdrop for the growing loss in Ukraine and Israel.
Conflict and war is a scourge that kills many innocents on both sides.
Let’s also remember the Afghanis who died near Herat in last Saturday’s earthquake.
A wonderful response to Deborah’s prompt. Here are some of my favorites:
.
lightning bolt how brief my time here
Susan Burch
Hagerstown, MD
.
a woman’s face
in the hospice window …
falling darkness
Natalia Kuznetsova
Russia
.
last frost
leaving the front door
unlocked
Mariel Herbert
California, USA
.
the death of the butterfly
on the fingers of the child
la morte della farfalla
sulle dita del bambino
Maria Cezza
Italy
.
when I die
don’t assume
I’m the butterfly
M. R. Defibaugh
United States
.
open window . . .
she slips out
to join the stars
Kathleen Trocmet
Texas, USA
.
memorial candle
the flame dances
without a partner
Evan Spivack
Teaneck, NJ
Another fine week. Standing out to me on the reread were:
disappearing inside grief shadows
C.X. Turner
between this world
and the other
a dandelion puff
Lori Kiefer
no more journeys
after this one
cliff edge
Ruth Holzer
winter night
a skeleton tree
holds the moon
Sarah Paris
on the last edit
the i undotted
Wendy C. Bialek
thanks debbie for the mention!
Thank you Deborah for including my haiku in this beautiful selection.
Congrats to all poets .
Thank you so much Deborah Karl-Brandt! Thanks for this topic. It was one of the most moving selections. I LOVE YOU ALL I believe you make the world more beautiful with little touches of haiku.
Thank you so much Deborah Karl-Brandt! Thanks for this topic. It was one of the most moving selections. I LOVE YOU ALL. I believe you make the world more beautiful with little touches of haiku.
I am touched by these deeply meaningful poems. Thank-you Deborah for all your efforts in the selection of these beautiful verses. Thank-you Kathy and Lori for everything you do for Haiku Dialogue.
Thank you for including my haiku in your excellent selection. So many of these are incredibly powerful, and really highlight the ability of a poem to express so much in so few words. I very much look forward to next week’s selection.
Hi Deborah!
Thanks for including me. As was the case last time, this time too was a fabulous collection of death poems. I read all of them, liked them all. The following in particular captured my attention.
Dipankar
pallid leaf
a breath between going
and gone
Anju Kishore
India
Captures the last breath superbly.
my poetry
precedes me in death
tomb of the unknown
Bonnie J Scherer
Alaska USA
Brilliant. You cannot talk of death after dying.
finding out
old friends have passed
google searches
Eavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
Sad to have to google this out.
holding onto
the wilted blossom
… a dewdrop
Neena Sinngh
India
I will not be able to view a dewdrop again without remembering these lines.
decomposing
the bird that was
not a haiku
Pamela Garry
Connecticut USA
The realism of it all … and the poetry.
cemetery on the hill
people from yesterday’s city
resettled here
Stoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
Great description of crossing the border.
ready
or not
autumn leaves
Stephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA
The inevitability captured so well.
becoming history
to a set of four digits
a set of four digits
Vishnu Kapoor
Chennai, India
The way I read it L3 is when the event happened, L2 is now and the rest of future. L1 is such a clear description.
Thank you, Deborah, for including my haiku in this excellent selection. Congratulations to all authors featured here, especially those friends who often accompany me on my writing journey.
So many beautiful poems. Thank you, everyone.
Congratulations to all dear friends ❤️
Beautiful !!
Thank you Deborah for including my haiku in this beautiful selection. I shed a few tears.
A very moving collection…but I won’t cry, at least until now, because reading is not over. Many thanks, Deborah Karl-Brandt (Guest Editor) for selecting my monoku! Hearty congratulations to all and each!
Thanks Deborah for selecting my haiku this week. Such great and moving haiku included in your selection. Here are a few of my favorites:
dry leaves on a branch
celebrating the first
birthday without you
Jovana Dragojlovic
Belgrade, Serbia
Just this past week, I celebrated my mother’s birthday without her for the first time since her death, so I really resonated with this.
last breath failing to bloom
Alan Harvey
Tacoma, WA
Watching and waiting for that last breath is so hard. I like this description of it.
a child’s death
the scent of
unlit candles
Alvin Cruz
Philippines
Powerful!
autumn garden —
the splendour
of dying
Ann Sullivan
Arlington MA USA
Such a fresh way of looking at death!
There were so many more great ones. Thanks for submitting everyone!
Pamela Jeanne
Such powerful, poignant, heartfelt poems in this column this week. Didn’t read them all on the first pass.. Too much pain and emotion, but found Eavonka’s haiku about Google searches pertinent as recently I was doing the same thing. Jenn’s haiku about the loss of an infant, heartbreaking. My condolences no matter how long it has been.
Will return to reading them all after a timeout. Congrats to all the poets, and to Deborah, thanks for reading all of the haiku, which had to be difficult.
I’m sorry you’ve had the Google search sadness of discovering a loss, Nan. 💔
I found solace in these selections knowing that almost all of my friends and fellow poets were gathered here together, and my incredible gratitude that I am privy to these heartfelt musings.