HAIKU DIALOGUE – Surrealism II – “Without Hope” – long list
Surrealism II with Guest Editor Lafcadio
For the next few weeks I would like to be your docent again in The Haiku Foundation Art museum. We will continue our tour of the Surrealist gallery. I know we were there last year, but now I’d like to show you a few of the works of the female Surrealist painters. First, let’s have a quick review about surrealism to make sure we are all on the same page, or in the same room. Surrealism is an artistic movement that began in the early 20th century. Surrealistic painters created dreamlike and often inexplicable images. One of the major characteristics of this kind of painting is the comparison of unrelated entities and components. This creates a surprise for the viewer and hopefully carries them into a world of fantasy and symbolism. This technique of painting not only challenged traditional painting, but was also a representation of the social and political upheavals of society after the trauma and disillusionment of World War I. Still, surrealistic paintings are used today to transcend the boundaries of the ordinary and deliver us in the realm of the extraordinary.
In 1924 Andre Breton, known as the father of Surrealism, wrote his first Surrealist Manifesto. He stated that 19 painters had created art that was absolute Surrealism. None of these painters were female. These painters felt women were useful to them as muses and inspiration but not as artists in their own right. However, by 1985 it was determined that no other art movement had such a large number of women participants. As Surrealist art grew into a larger and more diverse group of men, women became interested in expressing themselves through this art movement. Most of the first women who entered the Surrealistic movement were lovers of male Surrealists.
As with the previous male painters we have viewed, there is so much abstraction and symbolism in the drawings and paintings that you will be able to create surrealistic haiku and senryu that reflect the emotions in these works of art. Let’s begin…
Below is Lafcadio’s selection of poems on the topic of “Without Hope”:
shutdown
by my zipped-up coat
& santa’s lapCurt Linderman
Seattle
holding
an invisible tulip
what a noise does it makeBoryana Boteva
Sofia, Bulgaria
shadows seep through the walls
something grows stronger
inside meDeborah Karl-Brandt
Germany
smiles flipping
in a broken mirror
convex to concaveVaishnavi Ramaswamy
India
the gray rock abyss
between what kills and
what strengthensUrszula Marciniak
Poland
unless
you nod to life
you are attachedBarbara Anna Gaiardoni
Verona – Italy
swallowing the moon
an onyx night
with no north starmarilyn ashbaugh
usa
minefield
in the hollow of an oak tree
a newborn and a bibleTsanka Shishkova
Bulgaria
migraine attack –
a whirling beast
raises its headSanjana Zorinc
Croatia, Bjelovar
a witch’s cauldron
runs down the throat
trapped breathRadhika De Silva
Sri Lanka
trapped
in my own existence
dead animalBaisali Chatterjee Dutt
Kolkata, India
imbibing
words of encouragement
intravenous dripPaul Callus
Malta
doctors poke and prod
hope stands in the outfield
far from her graspVeronica Hosking
Avondale, AZ
meat moon
the funnel drips
her own bodyVijay Prasad
Patna, India
alone in a crowd
at night I hear the wolves call
as if they know meJohn Hawkhead
UK
writing poems
eyes, blood, and bones
in my word vomitJackie Chou
Pico Rivera, California
a pregnant dog sneaks
into the confessional
the coldCindy Putnam Guentherman
Loves Park, Illinois, USA
I plant screams in my garden then water them with dust
Dan Campbell
Virginia
–trigeminal neuralgia–
–the addictive power
––of the covid mask–Helen Buckingham
United Kingdom
tremor of sunlight
evil torn up
by rootLuciana Moretto
Italy
after his passing
feeding me with
their platitudesJahnavi Gogoi
Ajax, Ontario, Canada
s c r e a m i n g
inside my entrails
vegan manifestoTerri L. French
Alabama, US
decomposing
in depression lake
algal bloomsPamela Garry
Connecticut USA
at last count murmuration
Erin Castaldi
New Jersey
oncology wing
a snapped twig
in a jar of waterNitu Yumnam
UAE
painting
within the dark void
cenotaphRoberta Beach Jacobson
Indianola, IA, USA
modern day slave
her shackled personality
takes the Middle PathHla Yin Mon
Yangon, Myanmar
hospice kitchen
the aroma of antibiotic
in the chicken stewR. Suresh Babu
India
the world unravels
like an old sweater
never worn againTerri Thorfinnson
West Sacramento, CA
umbilical cord
my daughter’s life tied
to the feeding tubeMirela Brailean
Iasi, Romania
a feather from the sky
for the wound that I have
to stop touchingGoda Virginija Bendoraitienė
Lithuania
bed and breakfast—
the black bird and i
fattened on sorrowAdele Evershed
Wilton, CT
an ache…
my mind goes running
through cool night airTony Williams
Scotland, UK
engagement end
without Ariadne’s string
walking the labyrinthAndrew Pineo
Exeter NH
painted bed
another piece of sky
forced downNalini Shetty
Mumbai, India
stone fruit
I throw myself
a lifelineJenn Ryan Jauregui
Tucson Arizona USA
his long infusions
the fluttering wings
of lipstick angelsKathabela Wilson
USA
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Williston, VT, USA
force feeding
the paralyzed mind
social mediaRavi Kiran
India
cuckoo egg tossing
out of the nest
and into the voidAlan Harvey
Tacoma, WA
mosquito kiss
suddenly I have
four handsAnica Marcelic
Zapresic, Croatia
me and my aestivational rip tide
simonj
UK
old voodoo doll trapped in a needle’s m(eye)graine
susan burch
Hagerstown, MD
Meat is the way
all the well-trimmed lawns
and wildfire smokeDiana Gallardo
Oak Park, IL
the battle inside
after all the skulls of ’45
a peachy sunAdrian Bouter
The Netherlands
on blankets
the weight of double moonsSharon Ferrante
Florida, USA
flamingo crèche
a monochrome to technicolor
trekCharles Harper
Yokohama
early harvest
and below the tree
detruded nestZoltan Pachnik
Hungary
a daisy chain
of dead babies rings her wrist
only she sees themJenny Shepherd
London, UK
bulging walls
parting words on stretcherkiti saarinen
tampere, finland
bedbound
too tired to fight off
the skull crushersTracy Davidson
Warwickshire, UK
imprisoned in my own body :: blown fuse in the whale’s belly
Shloka Shankar
India
this last surgery
some cicada song
stitched inBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
the desert owl i’d like to fly with insomnia
Lee Hudspeth
United States
mango seeds
clot my Ganga heart
deafening silenceVictor Ortiz
Bellingham, WA
weighted blanket
a monster comes out
from under the bedThomas David
United Kingdom
one day up :: one day down
feelings are fickle passengers
night train to nowhereRupa Anand
New Delhi, India
a funnel foie gras force-feeding
Guido De Pelsmaeker
Belgium (Holsbeek)
hospital bed –
dead fish eyes
staring beyondMinko Tanev
Bulgaria
cocooned
by bedsheets
a slurry of daysRich Schilling
United States
the only spring in the desert – her eyes
Ivan Georgiev
Germany
stalked…
his hand strips the petals
from my compass roseLaurie Greer
Washington, DC
spitting stars
pinned with steel bound in bed
to shoot for the moonKirk Lawson
Accord, NY
shooting stars
my august bail-out
on summer’s tailDaya Bhat
India
bird’s wings
my eyebrows
don’t fly awayNazarena Rampini
Italy
Billie Frida
strange fruit hangs
from the branch easelJohn S Green
Bellingham, Washington
sepia dream
nightmares slurry through
the oracle’s mouthBiswajit Mishra
Canada
I folded my lust
into a butterfly
ash in the flamesAlex Fyffe
Texas, USA
I often long
to walk on the moon
losing my legsTejendra Sherchan
Nepal
aging in place
orphaned crone
treads waterSigrid Saradunn
Maine, USA
gagging
the nightingale in me
porcelain funnelArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh India
from a plastic bag
a limb a lung a lamb
downstairsBittor Duce Zubillaga
Basque Country
a woman still
hibiscus blooming
in the body bagElla Aboutboul
West Sussex, UK
magnetic rhythms
with veins aglow I disappear
down the wormholeMelissa Dennison
UK
slow descent
I carry the mountain
in my voiceLori Kiefer
UK
a rosary of burning moons BRCA genes
Vidya Premkumar
India
one last hack
the crystal tree
seems to bendGeetha Ravichandran
India
bedridden
dusk kindles again
my pyreCezar-Florin Ciobîcă
Romania
you, semi-conscious
limbs in the wreckage
the breeze, a songless Koel(Koel, a songbird from India that sings melodiously)
Lakshman Bulusu
Princeton, NJ, USA
fog-filled sanatorium
the hoarse cry of
a ravenMohammad Azim Khan
Peshawar, Pakistan
my heart
cupped in my hands
flutters to escapeAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
easy game . . .
snared by snakeskin
checkerboard is toast(Early summer season word, kigo 季語: snakeskin, snake skin, hebi no kinu 蛇の衣. The World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greve, Daruma Museum, Japan, is my primary almanac (saijiki) for kigo and muki, footnotes about kigo, and for translation of kigo and muki into English.)
Monica Kakkar
India
memory’s moon the empty corner of a humming
Richa Sharma
India
slow swallowing…
the dead fish eye sees
the sun and moon in the desertSwarna Bopali de Zoysa
Sri Lanka
mountain lake wading—
solid gold sunlight swirls
with every stepElizabeth Shack
Illinois
molten daisies
two suns peeling
through a raw skySandip Chauhan
USA
Land of Oz –
from the rabbit wormhole
Alice emergesValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, Ohio USA
her features
spoon after spoon
of fish oilHynek Koziol
Jablonec nad Nisou, Czech Republic
rage made of feathers
centaurs gallop on cake tops
dada is dadaRebeca Thomas
Youngtown, Arizona
dizzying head –
from my giraffe neck
suddenly the world expandsCristina Povero
Italy
in her vessel.
Siren silently
stitching the rentC.R. Harper
United States
my blood flows
in a lighter vein
pink skiesSumitra Kumar
India
Day of the Dead
crushing migraine
with my sugar skullMargie Gustafson
Lombard, IL USA
oncology wing
a snapped twig
in a jar of waterNitu Yumnam
UAE
eagle’s cry
turned our hearts
to stoneChristine D
USA
cat scans
in the portfolio
that held my photoswendy c. bialek
usa
Join us next week for Lafcadio’s commentary on additional poems…
Bios:
Guest (& Assistant) Editor Lafcadio, a former teacher, now works from home writing, editing and proofreading study guides for nursing textbooks. She lives in Tennessee. She has written poetry for a long time but a couple of years ago fell in love with Japanese micropoetry and hasn’t looked back. Lafcadio has been published in a number of journals and anthologies. She writes under the nom de plume of Lafcadio because nom de plume is so fun to say. You can read her poems on Twitter (X) @lafcadiopoetry or BlueSky @lafcadiobsky.
Assistant Editor Vandana Parashar is an associate editor of haikuKATHA and one of the editors of Poetry Pea and #FemkuMag. Her debut e-chapbook, I Am, was published by Title IX Press (now Moth Orchid Press) in 2019 and her second chapbook Alone, I Am Not, was published by Velvet Dusk Publishing in April 2022.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. She lives in New York City and enjoys reading and writing haiku.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She served as Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada for ten years, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Dear Lafcadio, Ms. Munro, Ms. Zajkowski, and Ms. Parashar,
Greetings for World Calligraphy Day during International Peace Month! Congratulations to participating poets!
Thank you for reviewing my submission and sharing the kigo. I am delighted to be published in Haiku Dialogue! I appreciate the opportunity to craft surrealist haiku/senryū!
Thank you for your consideration. Best wishes.
Sincerely,
Monica Kakkar (she/her/hers)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/monicakakkar/
Dear Lafcadio,
Dear Lafcadio,
It was a pleasure both to think of my own suggestion and also to read all these inspiring poems!
Thank you once again for taking this respinsible role of being an editor for the Haiku Dialogue and to ptovoke our surrealistic imagination.
For some subconscious reason John Hawkhead’s haiku really struck me. I must have read it 10 times, I think it is absolutely brilliant. Thanks for sharing.
alone in a crowd
at night I hear the wolves call
as if they know me
John Hawkhead
UK
I did enjoy John’s poem! I thought about it when I was listening to birdsong, wondering if the birds knew me!
I am very happy that my haiku has been selected by The Haiku Foundation (USA).
Many thanks to guest editor Lafcadio! Bravo to all haiku poets!
It was my pleasure! The poems were a delight to read! Thank you for sharing yours.
Congrats to all the poets on the list. I’m impressed with the sensitivity and variety of the haiku and senryu. A special shout-out to my fellow Ohioan, Valentina Ranaldi-Adams for the reference to Alice in Wonderland (one of my favorite books) and the Wizard of Oz in a few words.
Land of Oz –
from the rabbit wormhole
Alice emerges
Valentina Ranaldi-Adams
and to Veronica Hosking for her first appearance in Haiku Dialogue long list.
doctors poke and prod
hope stands in the outfield
far from her grasp
Veronica Hosking
Again, congrats to everyone, and thanks to Lafcadio for guest editing and for K.J., Lori, and the others for your behind-the-scenes help keeping the column going.
Nancy,
Thanks! I’m enjoyed guest editing. I feel like I had a tiny window into poet’s lives.
Sorry about the typo. I’m not but sure how to edit replies here. But I’ve enjoyed being a guest editor. :)
Lafcadio,
Blame the typos on Otto Correct, who lurks here, waiting for the chance to change words to other ones at the last moment. I know I do. Nan
WOW! I sure did enjoy reading these incredible poems, thank you Lafcadio for another creative challenge!
Dan,
I’m glad you enjoyed the poems. They were inspiring. Thank you for your surreal garden haiku!
I agree with Eavonka and I couldn’t say it any better. Thank you, Lafcadio, for this opportunity to write, read and share our most tender experiences…thank you to all our volunteers.
Madeleine,
I did feel honoured to be entrusted with people’s experiences in surreal form. Thank you for submitting and sharing with us.
I was happy to, Lafcadio…It’s been a heartfelt and positive experience reading these poems. They resonate with me…the poem that has been pulling on my heart strings these past couple of days Is Mirela Brailean’s:
umbilical cord
my daughter’s life tied
to the feeding tube
It’s been a wonderful experience, being part of the surrealism chapter of Haiku Dialogue:)
I wanted to add that I think Mirela’s poem is also beautiful.
I am grateful for your appreciation. Art’s purpose is to raise awareness and add beauty to life, after all.
It is said that life beats the movie… I’m glad you liked it. I appreciate Lafcadio’s empathy as well. It is an extraordinary joy and experience to read all these haikus.
Mirela’s,
Thank you! The poems were emotive and touching. Thank you for sharing yours with us.
Madeleine, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. And I agree Mirela’s touched my heart as well…beautiful the love of a mother!
Truly incredible and powerful poems, Lafcadio. It’s amazing what your prompts have inspired!
Thanks so much Eavonka! The poems were very powerful and touching. I also appreciate your poems and your comments.
Greetings Lafcadio,
Thank-you for publishing mine. Thanks also to all the others who make
this column possible including the many poets who submit.
Thank you! Enjoyed your poem. I’m so glad you submitted!
L’haiku che ho inviato non è in quest lista di selezionati, e penso proprio che non sarà nemmeno nell’altra : voglio fare i miei complimenti a tutti gli autori che hanno scritto i componimenti per la loro originalità .Qualcuno mi ha fatto venire anche i brividi, ma così doveva essere . Bravi a tutti !!
I agree that the poems were strong and emotive. We appreciate you submitting and reading the poems. Not everyone can have a haiku in the long list or the commentary every time, but we hope you continue to share your writing with us. Thank you ~Lafcadio
Grazie, certamente, siimpara così tanto qui !!