HAIKU DIALOGUE – Surrealism II – “Self-Portrait” (Inn of the Dawn Horse) – long list
Surrealism II with Guest Editor Lafcadio
For the next few weeks I would like to be your docent again in The Haiku Foundation Art museum. We will continue our tour of the Surrealist gallery. I know we were there last year, but now I’d like to show you a few of the works of the female Surrealist painters. First, let’s have a quick review about surrealism to make sure we are all on the same page, or in the same room. Surrealism is an artistic movement that began in the early 20th century. Surrealistic painters created dreamlike and often inexplicable images. One of the major characteristics of this kind of painting is the comparison of unrelated entities and components. This creates a surprise for the viewer and hopefully carries them into a world of fantasy and symbolism. This technique of painting not only challenged traditional painting, but was also a representation of the social and political upheavals of society after the trauma and disillusionment of World War I. Still, surrealistic paintings are used today to transcend the boundaries of the ordinary and deliver us in the realm of the extraordinary.
In 1924 Andre Breton, known as the father of Surrealism, wrote his first Surrealist Manifesto. He stated that 19 painters had created art that was absolute Surrealism. None of these painters were female. These painters felt women were useful to them as muses and inspiration but not as artists in their own right. However, by 1985 it was determined that no other art movement had such a large number of women participants. As Surrealist art grew into a larger and more diverse group of men, women became interested in expressing themselves through this art movement. Most of the first women who entered the Surrealistic movement were lovers of male Surrealists.
As with the previous male painters we have viewed, there is so much abstraction and symbolism in the drawings and paintings that you will be able to create surrealistic haiku and senryu that reflect the emotions in these works of art. Let’s begin…
Below is Lafcadio’s selection of poems on the topic of “Self-Portrait” (Inn of the Dawn Horse):
man’s world
i dream of a snake
that fliesAparna Pathak
Gurugram, India
coming out
of my shell
e l e c t r o n
by
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nJohn Hawkhead
UK
beyond the sea
a boat beckons me
my wings sproutPris Campbell
US
the only thing
to do is floating
on your backBarbara Anna Gaiardoni
Verona – Italy
full moon
the neanderthal in me
wants outStephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA
longing to exhale
i beckon my spirit
animalJahnavi Gogoi
Ajax, Ontario, Canada
light in my darkness
the white-tipped wings of
a black swanCaroline Ridley-Duff
UK
dis/em/bo/died
I float carelessly above
my hobby horseJenn Ryan-Jauregui
Tucson, Arizona USA
still life on carousel
her fire turns
the rotisserieCurt Linderman
Seattle
white lilies
on wedding kite
Milky WayTsanka Shishkova
Bulgaria
offerings –
her hair and hyena’s milk
to a divine horseRadhika De Silva
Sri Lanka
lily of the valley
flowering through concrete
all my smilesMaxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebec
absorbing myself
into the
wolf moonVicki Vogt
Watertown, MA USA
this longing for a dance northern lights
Daniela Misso
Italy
old scrapbook
horses where his face
should have beenJackie Chou
Pico Rivera, California
i capelli legati
a coda di cavallo…
fughe d’infanziahair tied
in a ponytail…
childhood escapesAngiola Inglese
Italia
the white horse
flying toward freedom
please take meDeborah Guenther-Beachboard
Adna, MA USA
Riding a wild horse
in his chamber
the old monkJohn Hamley
Marmora, Ontario
unseen in the shadows my self
Eavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
I thought I was a stone–
later I found inside me
a crushed butterflyLorraine Schein
Sunnyside, Queens, NYC
escape route—
she plucks the manes
of wild equinesMilan Rajkumar
Imphal, India
grandma frog’s bonnet
no one talks about her
like they do big bullCindy Putnam Guentherman
Illinois, USA
Hyena milk for
breakfast enriches my hair
Time to roam pasturesS Janczyk
United States
dummy horse dance –
the anklets ringing
on her wooden legs(dummy horse dance is a folk dance performed in parts of India)
R. Suresh Babu
India
playing
this little piggy
with baby belugaPamela Garry
Connecticut USA
flowing hair
with raised sword, she charges
her horse flyingSubir Ningthouja
Imphal, lndia
looking in the mirror
before my eyes
a gridBoryana Boteva
Sofia, Bulgaria
two cheshire cats
punished
for inebriationCharles Harper
Yokohama
sea foam…
a white horse charges
out of Pandora’s boxShloka Shankar
India
shadow holds the fears —
behind me a child’s dream in chalk,
an unfinished hobby horseGoda Virginija Bendoraitienė
Lithuania
each night I wander —
my trunk dancing
in the whispering grassPadma Rajeswari
Mumbai, India
two emerald jewels
peer at me from the flax bushes –
intrepid explorerAnne Curran
Hamilton, New Zealand
black moon
a spider weaving
barbed-wireMohammad Azim Khan
Peshawar, Pakistan
rainbow’s end
in a desert a woman
hugs a pot of goldJenny Shepherd
London, United Kingdom
flying unbridled
towards the stars
winged horseRaji Vijayaraghavan
Bangalore, India
a rocking horse
rears up in my thoughts
I flee out the windowMarie Derley
Ath, Belgium
cobwebbed windows…
dimly seen
the sun settingAndrew Pineo
Exeter NH USA
gliding dragonfly …
on the pond surface
my split shadowSamo Kreutz
Ljubljana, Slovenia
sitting still
the world floats by
in thunderclapsPat Davis
Concord, NH USA
calliope’s filly
wind galloping through
her manemarilyn ashbaugh
usa
stress and might
I sink and rise
from wild watersDejan Ivanovic
Lazarevac, Serbia
ocean thunder
white horses galloping
out of her calendarAnn Sullivan
Massachusetts USA
unbridled heart
a carriage horse dreams
of PegasusRavi Kiran
India
she abandons
dressage to race
with the windClysta Seney
Northern California
raising the bet –
a wild horse bolts for
the forestPachnik Zoltán
Hungary
why do I
hit the same piano key
over and overRoberta Beach Jacobson
Indianola, IA, USA
olive branches
the dove in me
always busyHla Yin Mon
Yangon, Myanmar
billowing clouds
on the distant horizon
a mermaid’s open hairArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh India
ginger roots
my words want to go deep
into the soilMinal Sarosh
Ahmedabad, India
rocking horse —
eyes shut she gallops
faster & fasterRupa Anand
New Delhi, India
as if the wind braided wishes into hair
Nitu Yumnam
UAE
homebody–
every window breathing out
breathing inLaurie Greer
Washington, DC
roused from slumber
I shake the night
from my feathersNick T
Frome, UK
dawn breeze
the past regions of
her window faceRicha Sharma
India
living under the rock
i find
myselfGovind Joshi
Dehradun, India
black cats…
she brews potions
with her mortar and pestleNancy Brady
Huron, Ohio
first haircut
she brings a picture
of a unicornthomas david
United Kingdom
childhood prayers
a rocking horse
my trusty steedAnette Chaney
United States
late into the night
still at the sewing machine
I stitch my new skinPeggy Hale Bilbro
Alabama
iris petals
swirl in a river eddy —
spiral galaxyMargaret Anderson
Vancouver, BC
through a stained glass of odd angles this moonlight
Bryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
driftwood girl
with a tumbleweed head
her flowery hatKathabela Wilson
California, USA
elven tongue
the melodies
in my languageCynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
Shredded mirrors
my reflection
broken tooAmotz Maimon
California, US
inside a dream
playing air piano
echo of shadowsJohn S Green
Bellingham, Washington
one character
keeps flickering
hologram glitchArrigo Bassi
Switzerland
peaks under the stars
green-eyed woman
flies over the rosesStoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
wild spirits
tear the curtain –
cry of hyenasMinko Tanev
Bulgaria
selfie
trying to capture
his solitudeDan C. Iulian
Romania
at one
with freedom
woman and beastMargaret Mahony
Australia
skyborne . . .
curlicued in cashmere
lotus roots run deep(All winter season word, kigo 季語: lotus roots, renkon 蓮根. The World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greve, Daruma Museum, Japan, is my primary almanac (saijiki) for kigo and muki, footnotes about kigo, and for translation of kigo and muki into English.)
Monica Kakkar
India
spil
ling
from
my roots:
words wasps bees and birdsMelissa Dennison
UK
open window
my hair escapes
with the horseElla Aboutboul
West Sussex, UK
the gospel according to an empty desert road
Lee Hudspeth
USA
geode
the multiverse
inside my headValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, Ohio USA
undiscovered self
astride a hobbyhorse
instead of a broncoRichard Straw
Cary, North Carolina
first self-portrait
within my chest nests
a lyrebirdCezar Ciobica
Romania
green velvet coat
I unzip the trees
inside meNalini Shetty
Mumbai, India
I opened the double doors—
a crepuscular eye
of the mountainKristian Abe Dalao
Rizal, Philippines
every breath
one leaf closer
to the flowered skyElizabeth Shack
Illinois
prison wall
i draw a window with colours
outside the spectrumSumitra Kumar
India
diamond raindrops
yet here I am dwelling
in my dwellingC.R. Harper
United States
ears
of the elephant plant
watching our conversation(When I was younger, I had a dream that six elephants were resting in the backyard of our house…I woke up feeling a kind of happiness, as if I had their protection somehow. I know there are people in this world who feel that elephants have a protective presence, and I have become a believer too. At the same time, I’ve considered that by appearing in my dream, these magnificent creatures may have been asking for the same favor from me.)
Madeleine Kavanagh
United States
untethered dreams
astride a winged stallion
she rides the windAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
banyan roots all around my self esteem
Mona Bedi
Delhi, India
smart phone video
bluebird dropping the ichthys
replayBrian Soderman
Stanwood, Washington
in and out
I wave the moonbeams
into versesMona Iordan
Bucharest, Romania
red heels
bestride the fields and daffodils
give way to wooden spoonsHelene Guojah
UK
lost horse shoves
mom off her rocker
hyena laughsStephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
self-portrait –
a cheetah running
under the harvest moonCristina Povero
Italy
soft antler
the part of me
still growingC.X. Turner
UK
on a polar bear
a birch spoon
promisesBittor Duce Zubillaga
Basque Country
water monkey
hoards found sparkles
spirit of ravenSigrid Saradunn
DownEast Maine, USA
metamorphosis
one thousand fears become
a frameworkChristine D
USA
leaves behind inkings
is the black walnut tree
writing about herselfwendy c. bialek
usa
Join us next week for Lafcadio’s commentary on additional poems…
Bios:
Guest (& Assistant) Editor Lafcadio, a former teacher, now works from home writing, editing and proofreading study guides for nursing textbooks. She lives in Tennessee. She has written poetry for a long time but a couple of years ago fell in love with Japanese micropoetry and hasn’t looked back. Lafcadio has been published in a number of journals and anthologies. She writes under the nom de plume of Lafcadio because nom de plume is so fun to say. You can read her poems on Twitter (X) @lafcadiopoetry or BlueSky @lafcadiobsky.
Assistant Editor Vandana Parashar is an associate editor of haikuKATHA and one of the editors of Poetry Pea and #FemkuMag. Her debut e-chapbook, I Am, was published by Title IX Press (now Moth Orchid Press) in 2019 and her second chapbook Alone, I Am Not, was published by Velvet Dusk Publishing in April 2022.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. She lives in New York City and enjoys reading and writing haiku.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She served as Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada for ten years, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Dear Lafcadio, Ms. Munro, Ms. Zajkowski, and Ms. Parashar,
Greetings for National Urban Beekeeping Day in National Moth Week as we celebrate Wild About Wildlife Month! Congratulations to participating poets!
Thank you for reviewing my submission. I am delighted to be published in Haiku Dialogue! I appreciate your sharing the kigo.
Thank you for your consideration. Best wishes.
Sincerely,
Monica Kakkar (she/her/hers)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/monicakakkar/
Thank-you, dear Lafcadio, for reading, considering and selecting my work for the long-list. It was a challenging prompt and an impulse to be creative. Congrats to all the poets who were selected!
You are most welcome. I appreciate you submitting such a wonderful poem!
Thanks, Lafcadio, for a very interesting topic, for including my haiku, and for showing me the Inn of the Dawn Horse. It’s an excellent painting. So good that it inspired me to come up with a good haiku, even though I’m generally totally useless on writing them on demand.
I have fallen in love with it too! I also have difficulty writing for a prompt. I enjoyed your ‘old monk’ haiku! So glad it inspired you.
The prompt of Self Portrait and the painting and its details were so stimulating as to inspire me to add mine this time and make it too! The collection here is a treat to read and enjoy. Thank you, Lafcadio for including mine in the list and thanks to everyone involved for their time and contribution!
I think it was such an interesting painting. I’m glad you felt that too and shared your poem with us.
Thank you Lafcadio for including mine . Extremely thrilled to be amongst the best
Thank you Eavonka for your kind words.
Congratulations to all the featured poets
I’m so glad you were inspired to submit. There were so many wonderful poems, including yours!
why do I
hit the same piano key
over and over
Roberta Beach Jacobson
Indianola, IA, USA
Reading through the selections, this one really resonated with me. I wonder if Jacobson and I are hitting the same key or a different one. Either way, I get it. The other keys are right there–intellectually, it’s clear that there are other keys that could be pressed–, but something keeps me pressing this same one, justifying it as “minimalism” but really just trying to conceal my fear of stepping up (let alone jumping an octave!). This key is safe. It’s my key. I know it inside and out. Those other keys might not harmonize with me, after all. I think I’ll stay here, here, here, here, here, here, here . . . .
hmmmm… Interesting interpretation. I’ve been wondering about the one key myself. Thank you for the illumination. Very C# of you!
Hi Lafcadio:
Thank you for posting my haiku:) I am thrilled to have my poem included in such a remarkable collection of poetry. I am looking forward to reading them all again. Thank you to the wonderful volunteers for keeping Haiku Dialogue up and running!
I agree it is an exceptional collection. I enjoyed your poem and we all loved the back story of your dream. Thank you for providing the extra insight!
Thank you, Lafcadio. I am touched by your kind words.
unbridled heart
a carriage horse dreams
of Pegasus
.
Ravi Kiran
India
.
It is human nature to dream of a better life even when a better
life is not possible.
Oh yes, that’s so true! Thank you for this and and the lovely geode image in your poem.
I am glad you liked my haiku.
Amazing selection Lafcadio, thank you for including mine.
My pleasure! Thank you for joining in with us.
A great selection of the weird and wonderful Lafcadio. Unfortunately, mine didn’t come out as submitted – the second ‘electron’ letters were staggered all over the submission form in an ‘electron cloud’. Lesson learned for me there! Thanks for curating so many varied and interesting perspectives on the surreal self.
Oh I’m sorry that happened. By the time it made it to me it was a straight line. But I love the idea!
It has been a joy reading all the wonderful (and weird) submissions. Thank you for sharing!
Wowza, Lafcadio, your prompt has inspired simply tremendous work this week! I am honored to have been included It’s hard to imagine what awaits us next week.
While I had many favorites, this poem really wowed me:
green velvet coat
I unzip the trees
inside me
Nalini Shetty
Mumbai, India
I was excited by the diversity of viewpoints here. An amazing collection of poems.
Nalini’s was one of my favorites as well. Loved both of your submissions too! Thank you for submitting!
Lafcadio
I agree with Peggy Hale Bilbro’s assessment about the haiku in the long list. Such delightful haiku with insights into each poet’s idea of self. Congratulations to you all, and I feel I understand you a bit better because of the prompt provided by Lafcadio. I appreciate that you included mine, too.
Thanks, too, to KJ, Lori, and the others who volunteer their time and energy behind the scenes, keeping this column going. You’re awesome.
Your poem was so exactly you, Nan! I was amazed by how much you captured in so few words. 💜💜💜
Nancy,
Thank you for your kind words. I also felt like I had a front-row seat to everyone’s emotions. Truly an eye-opening experience for me.
I loved your poem, and Eavonka was correct in saying it was so you!
Lafcadio
Eavonka and Lafcadio,
Thank you for the compliments. Attempting to write a self portrait (as I read and re-read the prompt) was rather interesting especially looking at myself from a surrealist point of view. Thanks for allowing me to think outside the box and that you understand means so much. Nan
Hello, please excuse my questions but I’ve lost touch with dates and haven’t been writing much recently due to settling and Estate. I love being part of this community and reading your excellent prompts and the poems they inspire. I’m sad that I keep missing the submission week. If, at the beginning of your prompt you gave the due dates it would help tremendously. Please tell me when the next prompt is due and I’ll mark my calendar for every 3 weeks. Thanks for your patience.
IE Submission dates for 2025: etc.
hi Seretta – the submission deadline is included, along with the submission form, in every submission post, triweekly or every third week – the next submission post will be Wednesday 30 July, & the deadline for submissions will be Saturday 02 August – hope this helps! kj
Dear Seretta,
I’m so glad you wrote a comment. I’m sorry you’ve been missing the deadlines. I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your poem that you submitted for the first prompt. It was great! We couldn’t use it but I’m glad I can tell you how much I enjoyed it!
I see kjmunro has advised you of the dates for the next prompt. I hope to see you then.
Lafcadio
This is one of the most lovely series of poems I’ve seen! Kudos to all!
Thank you Peggy! The responses were indeed sublime. I loved them all!
Thank you for including my haiku in this selection full of such fantastic images, congratulations to all the authors
My pleasure to include your poem! Thanks so much for joining in on the surreal fun!
Thank-you Lafcadio for selecting my haiku for publication. Thank-you also to Kathy, Vandana, Lori, and the Haiku Foundation. Congrats to all the poets who were selected.
We appreciate your kind words and for submitting!