HAIKU DIALOGUE – Simply a Daily Activity (1)
Simply with Guest Editor Craig Kittner
Simplicity is one gateway to a balanced mind.
The world sorely needs balanced minds to mitigate all this conflict.
Haiku is uniquely suited for the cultivation and dissemination of simplicity.
In this round of Haiku Dialogue I’m seeking works that invoke the simple perfection of a moment in time.
The successful haiku will be formed out of love for what is not everlasting, but impermanent.
Below is Craig’s selection of poems on the theme of simply a daily activity:
It is through the nature of our attention that we find connection with a moment.
The nature of the moment hardly matters.
The moment is haiku if you lose yourself in it.
Sometimes surprising things arise from just doing. Sometimes not surprising, but simply true.
Enlightened or not, “chopping wood and carrying water.”
playing burraco –
the spring air is filled
with little yawnsSilvia Bistocchi
Italy
pork roasting low and slow the morning fog
John Pappas
USA
light the fire
of the moka
the waitBarbara Anna Gaiardoni
Verona – Italy
timed snuggle
the aroma
of bread in the ovenMaxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebec
halftime . . .
I wash, she dries
the dishesRandy Brooks
Taylorville, IL, USA
mower stops
the smell of grass
fills the silenceRavi Kiran
India
stoplight
the choices
to be madeStephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA
brushing teeth —
the only time
i smileLorelyn De la Cruz Arevalo
Bombon, Philippines
dirty dishes
rinsing the words away
of this eveningLaura Marino Trotta
Firenze – Italy
nocturnal pacing
even the moon sleeps
while momma rocks the babeLinda Ludwig
Inverness, Florida
slurping tea
from a saucer
morning radioDaipayan Nair
Silchar, Assam, India
green tea
a white-eye
watches me sipCharles Harper
Yokohama
siesta–
I become a tapir
eating a dreamTeiichi Suzuki
Japan
glint of the tooth
that turned to gold
flossingMona Bedi
Delhi, India
daily puja-
a marigold
falls from Durga’s garlandRam Chandran
India
at bedtime
my backscratcher reaching
where she couldMaurice Nevile
Canberra, Australia
oil sizzles
jaggery and tamarind swirl
into the family tattleKavita Ratna
India
spring drizzle
enough for two pigeons
rice in my fistRicha Sharma
India
warming
food for the VIP
louder meowsHla Yin Mon
Yangon, Myanmar
creasing
the origami paper
unfolding wishVibeke Laier
Randers, Denmark
two sunny side up eggs
and a banana –
his morning smileAlvin Cruz
Philippines
blackbird song
my son contemplates
overcooked porridgeSebastien Revon
Ireland
filling the teapot
the postman
brings another billTracy Davidson
Warwickshire, UK
morning beach stroll
the dog and I choose
the same stickMarion Clarke
Warrenpoint, Northern Ireland
shaping bread dough the song of a nightingale
Helga Stania
Switzerland
tea bag dips
I steep deeper
into my bookAnjali Warhadpande
Pune, India
drinking tea
the breeze blooms
a koel’s songNeena Singh
India
dust motes
float in sunbeams–
dancing broomLafcadio Orlovsky
USA
recycling
some bounce
some shatterMark Gilbert
UK
early morning . .
taking care of my flowers
with a caressRosa Maria Di Salvatore
Catania, Italy
instant breakfast
goslings pluck
dandelion fluffmarilyn ashbaugh
edwardsburg, michigan
the smell of coffee
tickling my cheeks
morning exerciseRefika Dedić
Bosnia and Herzegovina
watching the news
and looking away
from the rubbleEleanor Dean
Massachusetts, United States
first stars
laying out my clothes
for the morningBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
watching clouds
slowly shift
the shape of skyRuth Happel
United States
morning walk
I follow my shadow
and my shadow’s shadowMargaret Mahony
Australia
Filled bird feeders —
the flutter of waiting wings
as I walk back inJenny Shepherd
London, UK
walking to work…
the familiar faces
of late or on timeLaurie Greer
Washington, DC
blood in the water—
watching the sunrise
after a night shiftAdele Evershed
Wilton, Connecticut
morning routine
with coffee from his mug …
widowhoodNatalia Kuznetsova
Russia
belly rubbing
the cat to sleep
summer nightRupa Anand
New Delhi, India
dish soap
the effortless glide
of my handsJenn Ryan-Jauregui
Tucson, Arizona USA
dawn walk
my daily shiver
at the dip in the roadCynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
red light . . .
a squeegee scrapes
my windshieldKathleen Trocmet
New Braunfels, Texas, USA
hot bath
the lady vanishes
in the mirrorChen Xiaoou
Kunming, China
another pill
rewinding
the old clockChristine Goodnough
Delisle, SK, Canada
a morning walk
past the infants school
and the graveyardKeith Evetts
Thames Ditton UK
so many
blooming trees…
I check my FacebookAna Drobot
Romania
hefting each orange
before the first cut
another sunriseHelen Ogden
Pacific Grove, CA
trilling
returns to our peepul
evening walkArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh, India
buttered toast I taste my grief
C.X. Turner
United Kingdom
same coffee
in different cups –
guests arrivalSatyanarayana Chittaluri
Hyderabad India
war news
an amethyst stone
falls off the shelfMircea Moldovan
România
season drama
the growing hill
of seed shellsAJ Anwar
Jakarta, Indonesia
moon gazing
my one cup of tea
becomes threeLori Kiefer
London UK
helping
to cook the dinner
Bob DylanHelene Guojah
UK
make-up removing –
cuddling my wrinkles
in front of the mirrorCristina Povero
Italy
laundry day
our clothes
dirty dancingKerry J Heckman
Seattle, WA
toothbrush
poised in mid-air
sparrow songCharlotte Hrenchuk
Whitehorse, Yukon, Canada
daily commute
the butterflies
ahead of meAmoolya Kamalnath
India
Join us next week for Craig’s commentary on additional poems, & our next prompt…
Guest Editor Craig Kittner claims a round-earther identity as an alternative to the ones the world would impose. While their feet feel the earth, their ragpicker mind works the trash heap that’s their brain, pulling out words. Origami Poems Project, Shot Glass Journal, bottle rockets, and Acorn have recently hosted his work.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. A novice haiku poet, she lives in New York City.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Went through all the poems..So many facets of daily life…majority with undelying meloncholic feeling. …I wonder is it only in the poem? Is real life diffetent. ?
I wondered the same thing, Lanka. I sure hope not, but I imagine there is.
love these two haiku!
dawn walk
my daily shiver
at the dip in the road
Cynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
This haiku moment is truly beautiful. And expresses how wonder finds us in the midst of daily activity. Not only the daily activity of the walk is here but the fresh experiece of wonder is shown can be produced daily… physically and psychologically as by that little dip! I can feel this strongly as if I am there! A familiar experience from childhood, actually.
instant breakfast
goslings pluck
dandelion fluff
marilyn ashbaugh
edwardsburg, michigan
How wonderful the nourishing quick breakfast fluff that the goslings eat resembles their own white fluff!! This perceptive sensitivity of Marilyn’s adds magical layers to this and many quick moments, and to the gestures of the goslings!
Kathabela,
Thank you so much for appreciating my haiku and the goslings and dandelions who inspired it! ❤️
Thank you Kathabela, I’m so glad this one resonated with you!
Thanks, Craig.
I particularly loved:
helping
to cook the dinner
Bob Dylan
Helene Guojah
A natural expert at senryu humour, Helene’s choice of Bob Dylan is beautifully edged, adding just that note of protest at kitchen drudgery…. “how many times…the answer is blowing in the wind….” Watch out guys, “your old road is rapidly aging, please get out of the new one if you can’t lend your hand, for the times, they are a-changin’ ”
Clipped to my slender file of favourites.
Yes, I agree with you Keith. Helene Guojah is now on my list of favorites with this striking poem.
You don’t see Bob Dylan in many haiku (I put senryu under the haiku umbrella.)
My wife started a special genre called ‘Dylan-ku.’ Here’s one:
darkness at the break of noon alone on our favorite bench
John: love it (Dylan-ku).
It often seems that in an era when much of mainstream poetry has lost its music, the best poets have been the songwriters. Dylan, Paul Simon, Joni Mitchell, Leonard Cohen… the list goes on.
Great selection, Craig. Thanks.
I related to
halftime . . .
I wash, she dries
the dishes
Randy Brooks
Taylorville, IL, USA
We too work this way.
watching the news
and looking away
from the rubble
Eleanor Dean
Massachusetts, United States
I don’t watch news anymore but during the time I did I switched channels at the time of rubble.
dawn walk
my daily shiver
at the dip in the road
Cynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
My shiver when reaching the bamboo forest by the canal while walking in the campus of forest research institute.
And
same coffee
in different cups –
guests arrival
Satyanarayana Chittaluri
Hyderabad India
Same goes for meals with guests. A different crockery set.
Thanks Craig, great selection, happy to be included.
Intense layers of meaning expressed in a pithy way, like the haiku
“buttered toast I taste my grief
C.X. Turner
United Kingdom”
laundry day
our clothes
dirty dancing
/
Kerry J Heckman
Seattle, WA
/
When I read this haiku, I immediately thought of the movie “Dirty Dancing”. It is interesting how some movies have become so engrained in our society. The couple may not be dancing but at least their clothes are.
Starting the day with delight to read these
Wonderful haiku, personal, original, and heartwarming!
timed snuggle
the aroma
of bread in the oven
Maxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebec
I love Maxianne’ originality and the real presence of pleasure here! We can all feel the hug and smell the bread!
halftime . . .
I wash, she dries
the dishes
Randy Brooks
Taylorville, IL, USA
So sweet and in the moment. The game stops for a moment and the dishes done together just in time, in simple, playful cooperation…
morning beach stroll
the dog and I choose
the same stick
Marion Clarke
Warrenpoint, Northern Ireland
I love haiku by Marion, especially! For years living by the ocean i walked each day bringing home sticks that looked special. I was amused when i realized the dogs brought home sticks too !
I still have, twenty years later some of these “driftwood wands” I collected!
These hree haiku have a magic like driftwood, to transform the simple ordinary things we do, and reveal the wonder!
Very interesting, what people consider everyday. Thanks for showing us, Mr. Kittner.
Guys my name is spelt wrongly. Can you please rectify it. Thank you
sorry none of us caught that – it has now been corrected! thanks for letting us know, kj
Thank you so much KJ !
Thank you so much for rectifying my name.