HAIKU DIALOGUE – Music Around the World – From apprentice to master or how to walk the path of music – long list
Music Around the World with Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt
Hi guys, it’s me again. Over the next few weeks, we’ll be immersing ourselves in music together. There is a variety of instruments, rhythms and melodies to explore around the globe. Ancient Chinese music is based on a five-tone system and the guqin had an almost religious significance. Waka and later the tanka are basically songs. The mother’s steady heartbeat calms the baby in the womb and can be compared to the rhythm of a drum. Music is the language that everyone can connect with, even without understanding the meaning of the words being sung. It speaks directly to our hearts. I would like to invite everyone to explore the world of music with me in these prompts.
Below is Deborah’s selection of poems on the topic From apprentice to master or how to walk the path of music:
Music: River And Clouds Flowing in My Heart (云水禅心) – Tank Drum
totally tone-deaf
but I still keep practicing
under the showerMirela Brailean
Iasi, Romania
first piano lesson
practicing
straight backMartina Matijević
Vidovci, Croatia
a talent wasted
I leave my viola
on the trainPenny Lowery
Devon, UK
spring again
frog song
emerging from the mudStephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA
we’re in bed!
night clarinet practice
stops abruptlyPris Campbell
U.S.
the glittering silver cover
of my rock’n’roll songbook –
piano lessonsAnne Curran
Hamilton, New Zealand
vintage songs
I would have loved
to be a hippieMarie Derley
Ath, Belgium
first piano lesson
I’m looking for
the note of silenceVladislav Hristov
Bulgaria
childhood fun
a comb and thin paper
home-made kazooLuciana Moretto
Italy
the walk to school
learning to whistle
to answer the birdsKeith Evetts
Thames Ditton, UK
living room
filled with live music
I shake an eggEavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
practice room door
cracked open
a flurry of arpeggiosLee Hudspeth
United States
she quit playing
the day the piano died
in my mother’s wombJackie Chou
Pico Rivera, California
For River —
finally, the piano
lends me its voiceSean Murphy
North Beach, MD
retirement
rusty arpeggios
from the forgotten guitarKeiko Izawa
Japan
weary blues
wind plucks a diddley bow
through cornfieldsJohn Zheng
Mississippi
a smile through tears
starting over
the Moonlight sonataBoryana Boteva
Bulgaria
High-heeled ladies pass—
the old street musician
tunes his violin.Herwig Stas
Meldert
winter nocturne
I lose track of time
with the piano teacherDejan Ivanovic
Lazarevac, Serbia
crickets chirp faster to match my banjo picking
Dan Campbell
Virginia
school festival
here and there
kulintang tunesAnthony Rabang
Philippines
twilight
my heart unwinds
into the fluteNisha Raviprasad
India
fifty years on …
dad’s old guitar and me
get in tune at lastNatalia Kuznetsova
Russia
drumming
my feet plant
a lightning rodJoanna Ashwell
UK
playing the gogona
grandma lisps a song
about an old lover(Gogona – A musical instrument made out of bamboo. One end of the gogona is held down by the teeth while the fingers are used to stroke the other end to produce music. It is a kind of jaw harp.)
Jahnavi Gogoi
Ajax, Ontario, Canada
his flute my song
wilt thou be my dearie
our wedding vowsKathabela Wilson
USA
harmonium practice—
my old fingers tune
a new songNeena Singh
India
hillbilly band warming up
a young boy plays along
on his toy guitarAl Gallia
Lafayette Louisiana USA
marching band rehearsals
the fleeting glances
of two flautistsDaniela Misso
Italy
cascading guitar strums my zen
Barbara Anna Gaiardoni
Verona, Italy
pink-budding hedges
around our new home
♫ Que Sera, Sera ♫Maxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebec
opening the door
to a bigger world
little ukuleleBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
a gift of
guitar grit
punk mixJohn Pappas
USA
rediscovery
my hands haven’t forgotten
playing the celloMiluše Míčková
The Czech Republic
pan flute
a few steps that I never
managed to climbIvan Georgiev
Germany
sitar class
a sparrow’s trill
completes the ragaNitu Yumnam
UAE
first flute lesson
where on earth am I
supposed to put my fingers ?Olivier Schopfer
Geneva, Switzerland
old pianist
his hands remember
what time forgotoude pianist
zijn handen herinneren zich
wat de tijd vergatGuido De Pelsmaeker
België (Holsbeek)
catching crickets–
the vibration
of a cello stringLaurie Greer
Washington, DC
she masters a final arpeggio quits
Kay Schwartz
Michigan, USA
metro station
I sing to petal faces
for my supperJenny Shepherd
London, UK
the strums of veena
in sync with heart beat
healing prepLakshmi Iyer
India
november rain
the art of listening
to our old songsEva Limbach
Germany
first piano lesson –
my palms are learning to hold
apple made of airGoda Virginija Bendoraitienė
Lithuania
first drumbeat …
mother’s heartbeat
still insideVijay Prasad
Patna, India
grandma’s piano
the stillness of
the atticMohammad Azim Khan
Peshawar Pakistan
first day at dance class
the children assume
I’m the teacherBaisali Chatterjee Dutt
India
piano lessons
who he wants me to be…Margaret Mahony
Australia
autumn breeze
finding on the recorder
my forgotten voiceMinal Sarosh
Ahmedabad, India
a deep breath
of jasmine-scented air
writing my first songLouise Hopewell
Australia
adagio
the spillway of fiddle
from empty theatreZoltan Pachnik
Hungary
all thumbs
coaxing mountain melodies
from a gourd harpShannon Blood
United States
the rhythm of my violin
bringing my heart
to the twentiesSwarna Bopali de Zoysa
Sri Lanka
mridangam
left behind by son
thrumming heartstrings…(Mridangam is a wooden double sided drum.)
Raji Vijayaraghavan
India
drifting between
passion and serenity
the soul of a ‘celloKarina Klesko
New Mexico, USA
karaoke night
select a real rock song
fat bottom girlsVeronica Hosking
Avondale, AZ
Aussie pub concert
the band leading the crowd
chant the choruswanda amos
Old Bar, Australia
childhood sheet music
a gold star from grandma
on each pageWendy Cobourne
Homestead, Florida
open / close
the screen door’s squeal
learning the descantRachel Greve
Wisconsin, USA
violin
in sister’s footsteps
unfit feetChrista Pandey
Austin, TX, USA
my bluest blues
on slide guitar
his memorialMark Meyer
Mercer Island WA USA
teenage kicks
revisited —
the joys of heavy metalMelissa Dennison
UK
flute practice
the Thames river’s
rise and fallLori Kiefer
UK
memory ward–
hollow eyes brighten
to vinyl show tunesGary Evans
Stanwood, Washington, US
my talking drum
made of tin
human againMark Gilbert
UK
all these years
my violin still refuses
to trust meNalini Shetty
Mumbai, India
er hu music
on the street corner
a child listensHerbert Shippey
Tifton, Georgia
flute practice—
a wood thrush flies
out of a cracked noteAdele Evershed
Wilton, CT
lo-fi music
the baby’s
first kickGeetha Ravichandran
Chennai, India
black sky-
I sink
into a guitar’s woundRashmi Mohapatra
Mumbai, India
unplucked strings…
mother’s veena
too fall silentMadhuri Pillai
Australia
forest –
in the foliage the wind
polyphonicDan C. Iulian
Romania
shakuhachi…
the sound of your voice
empties my mindRita Melissano
Rock Island, IL USA
sārīs ashimmer . . .
grandma’s gramophone
lamenting summerMonica Kakkar
India
children’s piano –
scattered in the seasons
ringing chordsStoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
through memory
I take shape in his arms…
the violinistFatma Zohra Habis
Algeria
driftwood
bobbing up and down
my lullabyKavita Ratna
India
family whip round
his birthday guitar
still in the loftRobert Kingston
Chelmsford, UK
in solitude
the mockingbird’s song—
writer’s blockArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh India
reverting
to my native tongue–
song without wordsCynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
open window
children’s voices chanting
a jump rope rhymeValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, Ohio USA
never
reaching the harbor
whale songRoberta Beach Jacobson
Indianola, IA, USA
autumn koel
her panchama
echoes mine(In Hindustani classical music, panchama is a melodious raga that evokes peace and tranquility.)
Daya Bhat
India
grandson on drums
music to my ears
I chose sportCarol Reynolds
Australia
night wind her love song grows dim
Richa Sharma
India
the rock stars we thought we’d be groupies
Anne Fox
Broomes Island, MD USA
roots of rhythm
a woodpecker
drums the morningmarilyn ashbaugh
usa
interlude
the notes wait
in the saxRavi Kiran
Hyderabad, India
playing the keys
on mum’s piano
I still feel her touchAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
showerhead
wannabe singer’s
microphoneStephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
ode to joy
her son picks
the guitarMadeleine Kavanagh
Northern California
learning meditation
the length of
my singing bowl
toneSangita Kalarickal
United States
cameras flash
her reclaiming of notes
after a chideSumitra Kumar
India
rachmaninov 2:
my life unfolds
on the scoreCristina Povero
Italy
end of the war-
from a roofless house
sounds of the pianoAnica Marcelic
Zapresic, Croatia
always an alto
in children’s chorus
i must sing with boysMargie Gustafson
Lombard, IL USA
high school talent show
we play Mary Had a Little Lamb
on beer bottlesnancy brady
huron, ohio
60th birthday
like a virgin in my hands
this guitarMaya Daneva
The Netherlands
two left feet
she finds a rhythm
all her ownJenn Ryan-Jauregui
Tucson Arizona USA
school dance band
the fifth best trumpet
can handle the lightsRichard Straw
Cary, North Carolina
cold sound
of the teacher’s rod –
piano lessonMircea Moldovan
România
still believing i can improvise on harmonica my he(art)
Pegah Rahmati Nezhad
Tehran, Iran
Join us next week for Deborah’s commentary on additional poems…
Bios:
Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt lives in Sinzig, Germany, with her husband, two rabbits and numerous books. After her PhD studies in Scandinavian languages and literatures, she works as a freelance author and poet. Her poems have appeared in magazines like Prune Juice, Kingfisher, First Frost, Frogpond, Failed Haiku and Tsuridoro. If she is not outside for a long stroll or to do some birdwatching, she explores Chinese and Japanese novels.
Assistant Editor Lafcadio, a former teacher, now works from home writing, editing and proofreading study guides for nursing textbooks. She lives in Tennessee. She has written poetry for a long time but a couple of years ago fell in love with Japanese micropoetry and hasn’t looked back. Lafcadio has been published in a number of journals and anthologies. She writes under the nom de plume of Lafcadio because nom de plume is so fun to say. You can read her poems on Twitter (X) @lafcadiopoetry or BlueSky @lafcadiobsky.
Assistant Editor Vandana Parashar is an associate editor of haikuKATHA and one of the editors of Poetry Pea and #FemkuMag. Her debut e-chapbook, I Am, was published by Title IX Press (now Moth Orchid Press) in 2019 and her second chapbook Alone, I Am Not, was published by Velvet Dusk Publishing in April 2022.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. She lives in New York City and enjoys reading and writing haiku.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She served as Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada for ten years, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Dear Ms. Karl-Brandt, Ms. Munro, Ms. Zajkowski, Lafcadio, and Ms. Parashar,
Greetings for International Jumping Spider Day in National Spinning and Weaving Week as we celebrate Bat Appreciation Month! Congratulations to participating poets!
Thank you for reviewing my submission. I am delighted to be published in Haiku Dialogue! This haiku was written in memory of my maternal grandmother, Mrs. Santosh Kumari Sareen.
It includes a late summer season word; kigo 季語: lamenting summer; to lament about the passing of summer; natsu oshimu 夏惜しむ(なつおしむ) *Each change of a season brings a mixed bag of feelings, some people are happy it is over, some would like it to last a bit longer. As the season winds down, we remember the good things about it and ponder our expectations for the coming season.
The World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greve, Daruma Museum, Japan, is my primary almanac (saijiki) for kigo, footnotes about kigo, and for translation of kigo into English.
Thank you for your consideration. Best wishes.
Sincerely,
Monica Kakkar (she/her/hers)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/monicakakkar/
Thank you for your insightful commentary.
What a fabulous collection of haiku and senryu about music. This prompt proved that music is an international language as demonstrated by all the poets from around the globe. Humor and pathos living side by side, producing smiles, sadness, and even giggles. I can’t pick a favorite as there are so many. Congrats to all, and thanks to Deborah for including one of mine.
Thanks, too, to all the volunteers behind the scenes. I know how hard they work to keep this column goung.
Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful words.
Thank you Deborah for this challenge to celebrate music with our poems!
I feel honored to be able to explore this topic together with so many wonderful poets.
Thank you for including my haiku which was inspired by April Yang’s musical link. I appreciated the raucous entries by Veronica Hosking, Wanda Amos, Mark Meyer and Melissa Dennison but also loved Karina Klesko’s
drifting between
passion and serenity
the soul of a ‘cello
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed this selection and the music as well.
Dear Deborah,
thank you for being the editor of this haiku dialogue and thank you for the interesting topic that provoked our thinking.
I am honored that my work was also selected for this long-list!
Dear Boryana,
thank you for your kind words! I’m feeling honored to be trusted with all of this poems.
What a fascinating and fun read — brought back so many memories. Evocative, indeed! Thanks for including my effort in the mix. :)
Dear Shannon,
I am delighted that you like the selection and that it opens up new perspectives on music.
Deborah
So many musically evocative poems! We can see how poetry and music come from the same source.
Yes, I had the same thought. I once read, that the first waka were prayers and their were sung. It’s fascinating!
Thank you so much for including my haiku. What an amazing selection of poems that were inspired by this prompt.
I’m glad you liked the read!
Thank you so much, Deborah, for including my poem. I loved traveling the world with your selections. What a joy it is to learn new things! Still I couldn’t help but giggle at this relatable image:
showerhead
wannabe singer’s
microphone
Stephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
Thanks Eavonka, I’m glad I could make you giggle! Thanks Deborah for including this piece.
Dear Stephen,
you are welcome. I like your poem a lot. :-)
Deborah
I love, that the poem made you giggle.
Thank you Deborah for including my haiku. They were a joy to read. Congratulations to all poets.
end of the war-
from a roofless house
sounds of the piano
Anica Marselic
Zapresic Croatian
It struck a chord, very moving haiku
Dear Margaret,
it’s a pretty heavy subject, but it was such a gentle piece, and music has so many healing powers. After war, which brings destruction and chaos, there is someone who creates something beautiful.
Thank you, Deborah for posting my haiku:) I had a lot of fun responding to the “Walk the Path of Music” theme. I also enjoyed reading the excellent haiku of this collection. Thank you to Kj, Lafcadio, Vandana and Lori for the work they do to keep our Dialogue up and running.
Dear Madeleine,
I’m glad you enjoyed this selection of poems. This means a lot to me!
Deborah
There are so many outstanding poems and approaches here… But what is haiku or any other form of poetry if it only obeys the rules? Without a cognitive leap, we won’t be able to cross the abyss of our unknowing. Thank you, Deborah, for publishing my haiku. Congratulations to all poets!
Dear Mirela,
you are absolutely right. This collection contains haiku in many different written forms, and when I look at the diversity and range that haiku can offer, I am simply happy. There are as many different perspectives and ways of writing haiku as there are people who write haiku. So many different voices, but one song. I like that thought.
Welcome Deborah and thank you for selecting my haiku this week. Thank you also to all at the Haiku Foundation who make countless efforts to make this column possible. Congrats to all the poets who were accepted.
Thank you Valentina. I enjoyed reading your work!