HAIKU DIALOGUE – Looking Out – far from Earth – long list
Looking Out with Guest Editor Marietta McGregor
The phrase ‛looking out’ can mean to be on the watch in case something unexpected should happen. We shout, “Look out!” if we see danger approaching. We build physical lookouts. They may take the form of tall steel and wooden towers used as vantage points to search for forest fires, a crow’s nest high on a ship’s mast, periscopes on a submarine, or wooden clifftop decks on headlands overlooking scenic coastal vistas for travelers’ photo stops. Human lookouts are people whose job it is to warn against hazards on land and at sea. ‛Looking out’ can also mean observing our surroundings. As well as our own finely tuned senses, we use a variety of instruments to help us see more of the world. Microscopes and electron microscopes allow us to scrutinise very small things. Medicine makes use of X-rays, ultraviolet light and radio waves for scanning the body. Binoculars and telescopes help us look out beyond the planet. From our earliest existence, we look outwards to the world for a holistic view, through our parents and other family members, teachers, books, radio, TV and the internet. Space beckons us. And, of course, we look out for each other, to help in times of need or stress.
Below is Marietta’s selection of poems on the topic of Looking Out – far from Earth:
eight planets
a queue
for the telescopeSaumya Bansal
India
excited school kids
with their special glasses
and then it rainsCindy Putnam Guentherman
Illinois, USA
a child with binoculars
as still as
the watching kingfisherAnn Rawson
Scotland, UK
starry sky
the dreamer in me
wants outStephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA
looking in
those who-am-I questions
from a lighthouseAlfred Booth
Lyon, France
rising wind
we stand full time watch
crossing the Gulf StreamPris Campbell
U.S.
cabin porthole
after the watch
studying the moonGovind Joshi
Dehradun, India
small space
of skylight window
meteorTeiichi Suzuki
Japan
watering flowers
a look out for the next wave
of invadersRandy Brooks
Taylorville, IL, USA
Marrakech feeria—
the bride comes gently
with the moonSteliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania
Very Large Array
fifty mile field trip
to hear the universeEavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
far from Earth
a green planet flashing
a midnight visionTuyet Van Do
Australia
a size too small footprints on the moon
Roberta Beach Jacobson
Indianola, Iowa, USA
lost in the dunes
the Milky Way presses
the curves of this nightGary Rosin
Houston, Texas, USA
pale blue dot • slackjawed the whole trip
simonj
UK
far from Earth
am I too old to wish
on that shooting starDeborah Guenther-Beachboard
Adna, WA, USA
kids finding
animals in the clouds, now . . .
horse-heads in the starsAlan Harvey
Tacoma, WA
winter stars
this same night sky
our ancestors sawKeith Evetts
Thames Ditton, UK
the stars
in a child’s eyes
Milky Waymarilyn ashbaugh
usa
losing count
the number of zeros
between here and therewanda amos
Australia
stargazing
a firefly
intrudesRavi Kiran
India
night-time boat ride
the Milky Way above
and rippling belowJenny Shepherd
London, UK
butter moon
inches up
golden nightKavita Ratna
India
ski camp night
the sky heavy
with starsKeiko Izawa
Japan
First telescope—
I watch the stars
through a Smarties tubeCaroline Ridley-Duff
United Kingdom
boundless space
filled with dark matter
& my imaginationChen Xiaoou
Kunming, China
forgiving the child
who broke the melon vine
crescent moonDeborah A. Bennett
Illinois, USA
big bang
on the head . . .
seeing starsTony Williams
Scotland, UK
sleepless
under outback skies
I count Saturn’s ringsTracy Davidson
Warwickshire, UK
starry night—
I count your freckles
while you sleepLafcadio Orlovsky
USA
long lenses
the leaps
of an ibexHelga Stania
Switzerland
feynman point
strung from the trees
candle chandeliersJerome Berglund
Minneapolis, Minnesota
galaxy haze
an astronaut’s gaze
melts into starsSandip Chauhan
Great Falls, VA, USA
retirement—
discovering
new constellationsDaniela Lăcrămioara Capotă
Romania
mapping the sky
she quizzes me—
where is heaven?Grace De Sousa
Québec, Canada
gravity also
keeps the moon from falling
in loveMaxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebec
son’s telescope:
the planets dance
in tiny eyesNeena Singh
India
light from stars
that no longer exist
people we missIvan Georgiev
Germany
campfire
boy and his dad
counting starsMargaret Mahony
Australia
moon viewing
the new lovers
have stars in their eyesMarjolein Rotsteeg
The Netherlands
sailing through space
watching ancient films
of life on earthMelissa Dennison
UK
patiently waiting
under leaden skies
UK stargazingNick T
Frome, Somerset, England
Andromeda
an alien vibes
with an alienNalini Shetty
Mumbai, India
North Star—
childhood friend
foreverDan C. Iulian
Romania
deep space . . .
the enduring mystery
of the dark side of the moonLaurie Greer
Washington, DC
Flower moon
Grandma’s bag
of talesRashmi Buragohain
India
lonely stargazer—
the last human
on EarthDan Campbell
Virginia
empty birch
the sky and I
desolateMadhuri Pillai
Australia
star gazing
my son asks me to point out
AsgardAdele Evershed
Wilton, Connecticut
Starlink
selling me the right
to watch meBiswajit Mishra
Canada
a pause
in our stargazing
night jasmineArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh, India
meteor jam
starlight squeezes
through the planetsRupa Anand
New Delhi, India
first theme park
planets merry-go-rounding
the sunSumitra Kumar
Chennai, India
constellations—
all the stories
we still tellRuth Happel
United States
Pac-Man moon
the stars come out
to playValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, Ohio, USA
solar wind
my head releases
its star seedsCynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
wheelchair
watching the butterfly emerge
from a cocoonFatma Zohra Habis
Algeria
the path of totality
all the ways we arrive
in sacred spaceSari Grandstaff
Saugerties, NY, USA
parallel universe—
I am forest bathing
under twin moonsLee Hudspeth
California, USA
Challenger explosion
over east Texas
falling starsBette Hopper
Louisiana, USA
cold moon—
my thoughts floating like
space debrisPadma Priya
India
summer holidays
grandma asks us to look out
for the fishmongerMinal Sarosh
Ahmedabad, India
bonfire sparks
the Milky Way
unfoldingArchie G. Carlos
Minnesota
watching the autumn sky
nothing I expected
all I expectedEva Limbach
Deutschland
southern lights
the radiance
of her smileSue Courtney
Orewa, New Zealand
I trace a path
through the Milky Way
firefly gardenMona Bedi
Delhi, India
telescope . . .
on the moon I see
a fireflyAna Drobot
Romania
how she came and . . .
left with them in her sleep
her Perseidsfor Deborah P Kolodji
8/1959-7/21 2024Kathabela Wilson
USA
white cane
tapping with
the song of the starsLakshmi R Srinivas
Hyderabad, India
distant hills . . .
the ancient gods return
to their absenceVijay Prasad
Patna, India
dead of night
opening the door
to a dream lionAmoolya Kamalnath
India
the stars
way back home
Christmas eveAnthony Rabang
Philippines
searching Earth
for signs of tranquility
. . . LunariansIngrid Baluchi
North Macedonia
universe
the fly
and iDipankar Dasgupta
India
not remembering
what I just remembered
total solar eclipseClaire Vogel Camargo
United States
ad alta quota
la gioia delle ali—
Via Latteaat high altitude
the joy of wings—
Milky WayGiuliana Ravaglia
Bologna, Italy
the farther I see
the smaller we are
one blue dotPeggy Hale Bilbro
Alabama
adolescent stars
I shift my gaze
to the girl next doorBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois, USA
new year’s eve—
after the fireworks
stars!Milan Rajkumar
Imphal, India
the stars that are
and are not there
night skyHelen Ogden
Pacific Grove, CA
cloudy night
dreaming of
vincent’s starsKerry J Heckman
Seattle, WA
imagining infinity my firefly mind
Annie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
August evenings
a little more moon
with each walkSusan Farner
USA
cloudy night
only a shaft
of moonlightChrista Pandey
Austin, TX, USA
campfire circle
drinking the light
of a perseid showerLori Kiefer
UK
a shooting star…
before I look
at the telescopeTomislav Maretić
Hrvatska
still waiting
for the body to appear . . .
Cat’s Eye NebulaJulie Bloss Kelsey
Germantown, Maryland, USA
cielo infinito—
un girasole sfiora
la prima stellainfinite sky—
a sunflower touches
the first starAngiola Inglese
Italia
bedroom full of space dust we scatter in the night sky
C.X. Turner
UK
total eclipse
the moon takes a bite
of the sunAnn Sullivan
United States
summer night
my toddler reaches out to touch
the Milky WayMaya Daneva
The Netherlands
for centuries
outside our reach
the moonRichard Straw
Cary, North Carolina
meteor shower
washing away
the night’s frictionKelly Sargent
Vermont, USA
death of a star
the telegram . . .
still in transitAllison Douglas-Tourner
Victoria BC Canada
not expecting it
the wormhole
full of wormsSusan Burch
Hagerstown, MD
blinking star
she imagines it’s grandpa
driving the spaceshipM. R. Defibaugh
United States
solar eclipse
the diamond ring slips
off our marriageAnju Kishore
India
holding her hand
as she slipped away
umbilicus cloudLorraine A Padden
San Diego, California USA
focusing
inside for insight—
the third eyeStephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
stepping into the multiverse
each one draws
the sun they seeRuchita Madhok
Mumbai, India
Join us next week for Marietta’s commentary on additional poems…
Guest editor Marietta McGregor is a retired Tasmanian botanist and journalist who has made her home between Canberra and the scenic south coast of New South Wales for over four decades. A lover of the natural world since childhood, she went on to study natural sciences, and has worked as palynologist, garden designer, science journalist, editor, university tutor, education manager, and grants developer for the national wildlife collection. Her haiku, haibun and haiga have been widely published, have won awards and appear in anthologies.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. A novice haiku poet, she lives in New York City.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Thank you for including my haiku. All the verses by the poets featured in the list are so evocative- emotion & thought distilled into such few words!
Liked these so much:
Daniela Capote’s
retirement-
discovering
new constellations
Anju Kishore’s
solar eclipse
the diamond ring slips
off our marriage
Margaret Mahony’s
campfire
boy and his dad
counting stars
So many beautiful verses. Liked these two the most:
light from stars
that no longer exist
people we miss
Ivan Georgiev
Germany
not remembering
what I just remembered
total solar eclipse
Claire Vogel Camargo
United States
Very well written. Will stay with me for days.
Firstly, thank you, Kathabela, for your fitting tribute to Deborah P. Kolodji.
lonely stargazer-
the last human
on Earth
Dan Campbell
Haunting but still surprisingly beautiful.
Starlink
selling me the right
to watch me
Biswajit Mishra
A representation of the complicated circle of present day life.
cloudy night
dreaming of
vincent’s stars
Kerry J. Heckman
Taking me to the painting, and the song.
Debbie, thank you for the comment, I appreciate it.
Congratulations to all the poets on such varied and touching haiku. There is humor in Valentina ‘s Pac-man moon haiku; nostalgia and longing in Ivan’s haiku; sadness in Bette Hoper’s haiku, and as Jerome indicated so many more gems and diversity of subjects in the group. Every time I read through them, I discover another shining star. Again, congrats, and thanks to Marietta, for taking the guest editor hat, and to KJ and Lori for all the work you do behind the scenes.
Hopper, sorry Bette. Otto is plaguing me again.
Nancy. thank-you for commenting on my haiku.
Many thanks to Marietta McGregor, and also for the kind words from those I’ve touched with my haiku.
I’m happy that my haiku is in this beautiful selection, thanks Marietta Mc Gregor and compliments to all the authors.
I too liked Ivan Georgiev’s :
light from stars
that no longer exist
people we miss
Whosoever we are, no matter what our individual beliefs and faiths, there is something about stars that remind us of those who have passed, providing some sort of comfort in the connection.
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North Star—
childhood friend
forever
Dan C. Iulian
Romania
The one constant many of us learn to recognize in order to navigate direction and our way around the night sky. A friend indeed.
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Admirable selection of a variety of poems to give us thought beyond our troubled world. Thank you Marietta, and for including one of mine.
Despite the inclusion of my poem, I feel humbled by the galaxy of selected poets. A particularly fascinating contribution —
light from stars
that no longer exist
people we miss
Ivan Georgiev
Germany
Thank you Marietta for including my haiku, congratulations to all poets, beautiful selection.
Dear Marietta, thank you so much for including a ku of mine in this long list. What an amazing selection out here!!! Here are some of my favourites:
lost in the dunes
the Milky Way presses
the curves of this night
Gary Rosin
Houston, Texas, USA
cold moon—
my thoughts floating like
space debris
Padma Priya
India
the farther I see
the smaller we are
one blue dot
Peggy Hale Bilbro
Alabama
retirement—
discovering
new constellations
Daniela Lăcrămioara Capotă
Romania
This one specially is very very dear… having lost my most beloved father recently… I see him here!
light from stars
that no longer exist
people we miss
Ivan Georgiev
Germany
Thanks Marietta.
These stood out for me for freshness:
small space
of skylight window
meteor
Teiichi Suzuki
Japan
feynman point
strung from the trees
candle chandeliers
Jerome Berglund
Minneapolis, Minnesota
Starlink
selling me the right
to watch me
Biswajit Mishra
Canada
dead of night
opening the door
to a dream lion
Amoolya Kamalnath
India
and the v. Burchian:
not expecting it
the wormhole
full of worms
Susan Burch
Hagerstown, MD
Thanks for the mention, Keith.
solar eclipse
the diamond ring slips
off our marriage
.
Anju Kishore
India
.
The two images in this haiku form an unusual juxtaposition. Since a solar eclipse does not last, maybe the diamond ring will slip back on the marriage.
Lorraine’s verse was particularly touching, M.R. and Susan’s sci-fi senryu just out of this world! One of the neatest themes and assemblies of selections yet, deepest appreciation and hats off to terrific editor Marietta McGregor for superlative work+intriguing commentary, congratulations talented contributors! (Love banner photo too! 👏👏👏)
Thank you so much for selected my haiku, I am so glad!
Congratulations to all featured poets!
Thank you Kathabela for this!!!! Very poetic how Debbie came and left … with the Perseids.
how she came and . . .
left with them in her sleep
her Perseids
for Deborah P Kolodji
8/1959-7/21 2024
Kathabela Wilson
USA
Thank you so much, Marietta, for including my poem amongst these stellar verses. My gratitude also to KJ and Lori for all you do.
I couldn’t help but admire at the sneaky way this poem evolved. 😉
big bang
on the head . . .
seeing stars
Tony Williams
Scotland, UK
Thank you for this wonderful selection of haiku/senryu. These are the ones that spoke directly to me. I am looking forward to your final selection next week.
deep space . . .
the enduring mystery
of the dark side of the moon
Laurie Greer
Washington, DC
This brings to mind the Pink Floyd song which has s-ecualizare meaning for my family.
Challenger explosion
over east Texas
falling stars
Bette Hopper
Louisiana, USA
My husband worked for NASA. Though he wasn’t involved in development of the Challenger, our entire community mourned the loss of those astronauts. We all remember the moment when we heard about it. 😢
cold moon—
my thoughts floating like
space debris
Padma Priya
India
A perfect expression of my thoughts! And related to space, another personal connection.
Congratulations to all the poets!!! There were so many beautiful verses! I love the moon and stars and sun and the universe… These were all so wonderful to read!🌞🌝✨🌌💞
Congratulations to all the poets here! Thank you Marietta for including my haiku this week! I agree with Pamela about so many beautiful poems here. These two particularly struck me, very atmospheric:
Marrakech feeria—
the bride comes gently
with the moon
Steliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania
meteor shower
washing away
the night’s friction
Kelly Sargent
Vermont, USA
So many beautiful poems here. Just to mention one of many I especially appreciate:
light from stars
that no longer exist
people we miss
Ivan Georgiev
Germany
And another one:
not remembering
what I just remembered
total solar eclipse
Claire Vogel Camargo
United States
Many thanks to Marietta for selecting my haiku for publication. Many thanks also to Lori, Kathy, and the Haiku Foundation for making this column possible. Congrats to all the poets that were selected and encouragement to the poets that were not.