HAIKU DIALOGUE – Intoxication – Writing Poetry – long list
Intoxication with Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt
It has been with us since time immemorial, and almost all of us have experienced it firsthand: intoxication. Endorphins produced in the body during exercise give us a feeling of happiness known as a “runner’s high,” and once again we are intoxicated. Intoxicants have been used to awaken our spirituality, make us forget physical hardships, or elevate our imagination to unprecedented heights. And yet intoxication has its dark side. In the coming weeks, we want to explore how legal intoxicants affect us, our brains, and our everyday lives. I invite you to join me on a journey into our everyday lives and our brains to explore intoxication.
Below is Deborah’s selection of poems on the topic of Writing Poetry:
one stick at a time
the beaver builds a dam—
words start flowingPatricia Haddock
United States
prairie wind
through wild asters
Apollo’s half-smilemarilyn ashbaugh
USA
a thousand
haikus about a frog
do I have oneŽeljko Vojković
Croatia
rainy morning
repeating the lines to myself
as they rush inDejan Ivanovic
Lazarevac, Serbia
gazelle eyes-
her kajal spills
into a vertical poemR. Suresh Babu
India
happy space
a calligraphy pen
in free flowRobert Kingston
Rayleigh, Essex, UK
in the woods
words fall in places —
a deep breathRashmi Buragohain
India
in the sun
a row of notebooks –
my life in haikuMarie Derley
Belgium
syllable by syllable with only the rain as my witness
Shloka Shankar
India
day moon —
line after line
still fullArtur Zieliński
Poland
tree swallows
the swirling tornado
rests in the sonnetDaya Bhat
India
in the small hours
my words tumble into being –
a secret lifeAnne Curran
New Zealand
a sheet of paper
my focus
beyond wordsBoryana Boteva
Sofia, Bulgaria
lonesome night …
finding peace and wisdom
in Omar KhayyamNatalia Kuznetsova
Russia
leaf raking
letting the wind
work for meIvan Georgiev
Germany
the candle dies
and the last word quilled
moon ripplesAlfred Booth
Lyon, France
plastered leg
playing soccer
in my poemsSubir Ningthouja
Imphal, India
meditation labyrinth
winding deep inside
a poemLouise Hopewell
Australia
just three little words…
anything or nothing
is possibleOmarion Anderson
Greenwood, MS
this autumn poem
every year I read it
differentlyUrszula Marciniak
Poland
my heart overflows
on paper
your passingTuyet Van Do
Australia
a line of ants forming a kigo
John Hawkhead
UK
ink river—
i am 1 in a hundred
a hundred in 1Adele Evershed
Wilton, Connecticut
Cloud gazing –
a new poem
takes shapeCaroline Ridley-Duff
UK
morning finds my glass,
I remember everything-
except myselfValincia Richard
Sunflower, MS
play time to juggle words
Eavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
highway zone-out
a slip to the shoulder
to scribble the poemMaxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebec
quiet evening—
the stars whisper
a cricket’s songSanjana Zorinc
Croatia
iroshizuku words the rustle of wildflowers
Vaishnavi Ramaswamy
Chennai, India
ink smears my left hand
I scribble words on paper
illegible nowVeronica Hosking
Avondale, AZ
a falling leaf
to write or not to write
a poemVladislav Hristov
Bulgaria
artesian spring the poetry flowing from a fountain pen
Sam Bateman
Everett, WA
giddy from writing
this poem flowed drunk and happy
from my tired brainLorraine Schein
Sunnyside, Queens, NYC
fireflies
a blinking cursor
becomes wordsMillicent Bee
Richmond, VA
rush of joy
i write one more
poem about griefJahnavi Gogoi
Ajax, Ontario, Canada
free falling
into midnight journals
the muse and meJoanna Ashwell
United Kingdom
that perfect line
swallowed by sleep…
morning bluesBaisali Chatterjee Dutt
Kolkata, India
river bend
my poem finds
a new courseHifsa Ashraf
Pakistan
female birds sing too
dad takes another sip
of my poetryPatricia Hawkhead
UK
grandfather’s poems
in my hands
painful intoxicationZdenka Mlinar
Hrvatska
sunday solitude —
verses flow
multihuedSathya Venkatesh
Coimbatore, India
wine tasting
all my friends
suddenly poetsAnica Marcelic
Croatia
poems
when the flowers grow again
in GazaIsabella Mori
Vancouver, BC
unlike words –
tears never need
a translatorDan Campbell
Virginia
warning me when to stop spirit guide
Roberta Beach Jacobson
Indianola, IA, US
evening silence-
I open my heart
to poetryGordana Kurtović
Croatia
night stars
drifting off to sleep
a poem arrivesKatherine E Winnick
United Kingdom
this leaf
ebbs and flows
as does my poetryJohn S Green
Bellingham, Washington
burnout
a dog eating its own shit
on the dead grassSteve Black
UK
ink-ku one word spills into another
Lori Kiefer
London UK
the Himalayas —
my father
visible in syllablesLakshmi Iyer
India
blackout poetry reinventing the world
Olivier Schopfer
Geneva, Switzerland
a bridge across the stream
letting my unconscious
do its thingMark Gilbert
UK
a woodpecker
and my typewriter
pecking awaySari Grandstaff
Woodstock, NY, USA
old journal
the lingering scent
of a lilac poemJenn Ryan-Jauregui
Tucson, Arizona USA
a gulp of air
before I drown
writing a poem…Ayushi Dubey
Pune, India
written and read –
words flow
changing shapeTim Chamberlain
Tokyo, Japan
at last the shapes of my poems
come true…
hypnagogiaLaurie Greer
Washington, DC
grace state…
a frog jumps into the pond
I play dumbMircea Moldovan
România
kinda tipsy ~
my charming style is cartwheeling
on her corneaaangeschoten ~
mijn charmante stijl draait rondjes
op haar hoornvliesGuido De Pelsmaeker
België (Holsbeek)
soft water
the poet murmurs
internal rhymesAdele Gallogly
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
lake fishing
two german browns
and a tankaMyxlP
Newfoundland
last night’s poem swirls in morning fog
Peggy Hale Bilbro
Alabama
cloud after cloud –
on a receipt
key wordsElisabetta Castagnoli
Italy
late night
the susurrus
of recto and versoJagajit Salam
Imphal, India
sudden rainbow
I count colours
carefullyMargaret Mahony
Australia
a poem
the bliss of following
a cloudMinal Sarosh
Ahmedabad, India
lost in thought
the search continues
for five wordsStephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
daily pages
someone cut
the brake linesMargaret Anderson
Vancouver, BC
go with the flow —
another poetic flop
down the toiletMark Meyer
Mercer Island WA USA
backspace backspace backspace resnowing the field
petro c. k.
Seattle, Washington
grocery run –
blindsided
by a haikuValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, Ohio USA
spring breeze
the dormant verses stir —
red lilies explodeDouglas Lim
Los Angeles, California, USA
poppy seeds
monkey in a raincoat
points to the interiorMorgan Ophir
Sydney Australia
freewriting I carry cloud thoughts
Lee Hudspeth
United States
the blue in the sky…
that part of me
that I now knowl’ azzurro in cielo …
quella parte di me
che ora conoscoangiola inglese
Italia
haunting my dreams
all night long –
an exchange of ideasRefika Dedić
Bosna i Hercegovina
flow writing –
a piece of dark chocolate
in my mouthDaniela Misso
Italy
moon beyond the balcony
beyond the hills…
all I need to write againSteliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania
the first words
spoken on the moon
poetryGreer Woodward
Kamuela, HI
writer’s group
we all get on
the same cycleMargie Gustafson
Lombard, IL USA
off the cuff haiku
just letting
the ink f l o w. . .Nancy Brady
Huron, Ohio
autumn deepens the poetry left in me
Sumitra Kumar
India
talking to me?
I am here
somewhere elseBarbara Grueger
Whitehorse, Yukon
even better
than when I wrote it
its acceptance letterBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
autumn dusk—
writing my death poem
I start to live againMona Bedi
Delhi, India
wordsflowfasterfrombrainthanMimifingerscantypethem
Mimi Dollinger
Colorado
an invisible ladder –
the words come down
with stardustStoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
rollercoastalstorm
Helen Buckingham
Wells, Somerset, UK
butterfly colours
on a little palm
a poem takes shapeFatma Zohra Habis
Algeria
limpid pool
the heart chakra opens
to word-rhythmGeetha Ravichandran
India
autopilot
the stillness of my mind
on a ginkoArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh, India
writing clinic
my poem slides out
like a sea lionOrense Nicod
Paris, France
doomscrolling
for a season word
another haikuAnthony Rabang
Philippines
reading Basho
I spare the life
of a mosquitoCezar Ciobica
Romania
school song book …
lost in the words
we once gave voice toMadhuri Pillai
Melbourne, Australia
blackbird song
the love poem
writes itselfAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
leaves turning…
raking in the cheer
with favourite lyricsRaji Vijayaraghavan
Bangalore
Fall ginkgo walk
Basho and Issa
in every verse I writeLakshman Bulusu
Princeton, NJ, USA
ki-no-nagare
poetry
in motionMike Fainzilber
Tel Aviv, Israel
if only a poem could perch dragonfly
Nitu Yumnam
UAE
words composed
like falling leaves…a haiku
forgottenmadeleine kavanagh
USA
ginko walk––
our footsteps transform
into metrical feetSheila Sondik
Bellingham, Washington
hammock…
a lilting line
in the love poemLorraine A Padden
San Diego, CA USA
pulled down
by the undertow
the joy of letting goAnn Sullivan
Arlington, MA USA
still dark out
day breaks
into a villanelleStephanie Bauer
Chelmsford, MA
restored prairie
every windblown bluestem
a poemElizabeth Shack
Urbana, IL
my muse Vulcan mind meld ChatGPT iPadkuing
Bruce Feingold
Berkeley, CA USA
a vaulter
planting the pole
the right wordRichard Straw
Cary, North Carolina
blue hour
w i d e n i n g
on my pageNalini Shetty
Mumbai, India
one line becoming another becoming first light
C.X. Turner
U.K.
roller coaster
I gasp at the ending
of my poemKimberly Kuchar
Austin, Texas
Join us next week for Deborah’s commentary on additional poems…
Bios
Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt lives in Sinzig, Germany, with her husband, two rabbits, and a sizable collection of books. After completing her PhD in Scandinavian languages and literatures, she works as a freelance writer. Her works have appeared in numerous haiku and short poetry magazines and have earned her several honorable mentions, second place in the haiku competition at the 2021 Pula Film Festival, and the 6th Star Haiku Contest Overseas Grand Prize in 2025. Also in 2025, she was selected as a fellow for confluence. She has also served as a guest editor for Haiku Dialogue since 2023. Her new book, Wild Rabbit Moon, was published in 2026.
Assistant Editor Lafcadio, a former teacher, now works from home writing, editing and proofreading study guides for nursing textbooks. She lives in Tennessee. She has written poetry for a long time but a couple of years ago fell in love with Japanese micropoetry and hasn’t looked back. Lafcadio has been published in a number of journals and anthologies. She writes under the nom de plume of Lafcadio because nom de plume is so fun to say. You can read her poems on Twitter (X) @lafcadiopoetry or BlueSky @lafcadiobsky.
Assistant Editor Vandana Parashar is an associate editor of haikuKATHA and one of the editors of Poetry Pea and #FemkuMag. Her debut e-chapbook, I Am, was published by Title IX Press (now Moth Orchid Press) in 2019 and her second chapbook Alone, I Am Not, was published by Velvet Dusk Publishing in April 2022.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. She lives in New York City and enjoys reading and writing haiku.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She served as Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada for ten years, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Thank you Deborah for the time you devoted to reviewing our poems and thanks also to the participants, I enjoyed reading your poems!
Hi Deborah, it’s such an exciting subject, and it’s been a joy to read all these outstanding poems! My thanks to you and to the Volunteers of Haiku Dialogue. Thank you for including my verse:)
Thank you, Deborah, for selecting my haiku, and for all the work you put into this column. Congratulations to all the poets featured this week.
What a great selection of haiku this week! I found myself nodding and agreeing with the sentiments expressed by this global community of haiku poets. Too many to name, but know you are seen. Congratulations to you all, and thank you, Deborah, for including one of mine with the others.
Thanks, too, to the volunteers who keep this column going week after week especially since they, too, are poets.
Thank you for selecting my poem. Enjoyed reading all the lovely poems.
Wonderful to see haiku poets writing about writing! Thank you for including mine.
Thank you so much for published my poem! I enjoyed reading the selection!
What a beautiful and inspiring selection. Thanks for including me amongst so many fine writers.
Dear Joanna,
thank you for your lovely comment.
Warm regards
Deborah
Sooooo much fun! Thank you ….alll….and thanks for including my lines….
Special smile to Mimi…..youmademegiggle….iknowthissoooowell
Let it flow! Barbara
Dear Barbara,
I love your comment! :-)
Deborah
I was quite inspired by this prompt, and I’m so grateful to have been included here. Thank you, Deborah (and the entire HD team). What a pleasure to be amongst so many of my haiku friends. This poem, in particular, spoke to how so many of my own poems seem to get written:
a bridge across the stream
letting my unconscious
do its thing
Mark Gilbert
UK
Thank you, I enjoyed yours very much also.
Dear Eavonka,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. I feel much the same way. And I think it’s wonderful that all of us who write haiku are on the same wavelength. The creative process is really something else!
With regards
Deborah
even better
than when I wrote it
its acceptance letter
.
Bryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
.
This haiku has inspired me to write –
.
even worse
than when I wrote it
its rejection letter
Dear Valentina,
thank you for your lovely comment and for sharing your poem with us. I really appreciate the humor.
Have a nice evening…
Deborah
Many thanks to Deborah for selecting my haiku for publication. Many thanks also to everyone who makes this column possible through their volunteer efforts. Congrats to all the chosen poets.
Thank you Deborah and all poets for this must-read list… it truly inspires a must-write vibe!
Dear Millicent,
thank you very much for your kind words. It’s always nice to see how much Haiku Dialogue is appreciated. I personally find Haiku Dialogue very rewarding and inspiring.
Best wishes
Deborah
Thanks for including my haiku! I get the feeling reading these that it was a favored theme for many. These three haiku I particularly adore. This one is a real nugget – cloud shapes, poem shapes. It’s perfect, I can visualize it written in a cloud:
Cloud gazing –
a new poem
takes shape
Caroline Ridley-Duff
UK
This one is relatable and I love the connection of footsteps and poetic feet. I write many of many of my poems while walking too:
ginko walk––
our footsteps transform
into metrical feet
Sheila Sondik
Bellingham, Washington
Another great connection haiku between the course of a river and the course of writing. Just love it:
river bend
my poem finds
a new course
Hifsa Ashraf
Pakistan
Dear Sari Grandstaff,
thank you very much for your comment and for sharing your favorites. The “Topic” thread was very well received, and many excellent haiku were submitted. However, the “Meditation” thread was even more popular. :-)
Best regards
Deborah