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HAIKU DIALOGUE – Going for a Walk – magnificent trees

Going for a Walk with Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt

The late Buddhist monk and peace activist Thich Nhat Hanh could see water in all its transformations. Water in the form of a cloud would soon become rain, a river, the sea, and it would help grow plants and trees. The trees would flourish and become paper on which the haijin would write their poetry, so that the cloud (water) would eventually be contained within the poetry itself. Nothing can exist by itself. Let’s take a walk together to follow the different paths of water and see where they will lead us.

prompt: magnificent trees

Relax and come to rest. Breathe in the fresh air. Deeply into your lungs. Do you remember the scent of damp earth? Do you hear the trickle of water beads? Falling from the tall leaves to the ground? Do you see all the different shades of green? Do you see the cloud in this tree and that tree over there?

Write about the adventures you had deep in the forest. About your feelings and insights. About the soundscape and silence of a lush, green wilderness. And about all the other creatures you encountered out there.

I look forward to reading your haiku/senryu!

The deadline is midnight Eastern Daylight Time, Saturday June 22, 2024.

Please use the Haiku Dialogue submission form below to enter one or two original unpublished haiku inspired by the week’s theme, and then press Submit to send your entry. (The Submit button will not be available until the Name, Email, and Place of Residence fields are filled in.) With your poem, please include any special formatting requirements & your name & residence as you would like it to appear in the column. Please note that by submitting, you agree that your work may appear in the column – neither acknowledgment nor acceptance emails will be sent. All communication about the poems that are posted in the column will be added as blog comments.

Join us next week for Deborah’s selection of poems on the topic of magnificent trees…


Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt lives in Bonn, Germany, with her husband, two rabbits and numerous books. After her PhD studies in Scandinavian languages and literatures, she now works as a freelance author and poet. One of her poems won 2nd place in the 2021 Pula Film Festival Haiku Contest. Her poems have most recently appeared in Prune Juice, Kingfisher, First Frost, Frogpond, Failed Haiku and Tsuridoro. If she is not outside for a long stroll or to do some birdwatching, she is an avid reader who is currently exploring Chinese Xianxia Webnovels.

Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. A novice haiku poet, she lives in New York City.

Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at:

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Haiku Dialogue offers a triweekly prompt for practicing your haiku. Posts appear each Wednesday with a prompt or a selection of poems from a previous week.

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  1. Is there any way to correct a submission after submitting? I pressed the button too soon…

    Thanks and sorry for aggravation…

    1. no worries, Mike – yes, just submit it again, noting that this is a revised version – as long as we receive it before the submission deadline, it should be fine! cheers, kj

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