HAIKU DIALOGUE – Going for a Walk – magnificent trees – long list
Going for a Walk with Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt
The late Buddhist monk and peace activist Thich Nhat Hanh could see water in all its transformations. Water in the form of a cloud would soon become rain, a river, the sea, and it would help grow plants and trees. The trees would flourish and become paper on which the haijin would write their poetry, so that the cloud (water) would eventually be contained within the poetry itself. Nothing can exist by itself. Let’s take a walk together to follow the different paths of water and see where they will lead us.
Below is Deborah’s selection of poems on the topic of magnificent trees:
child’s play
the frog limps back
into the woodsAlex Fyffe
United States
ungrounded
naming all the trees
I know by heartAllyson Whipple
St. Louis, Missouri
a loud roar beyond
the crocodile bark tree
dusk in the forestAmoolya Kamalnath
India
green lake-
the maple whispers a lullaby
to the wandering moonAnica Marcelić
Zaprešić, Croatia
a sapling then…
generations enjoy
the shade of this banyanAnjali Warhadpande
India
.komorebi
all that still
……….isAnju Kishore
India
a breath of pine…
entering the forest
enters meAnne Fox
USA
spring sunrise …
how the oak swells
with birdsongAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
under veil of moonlight the nakedness of cymbal
Arvinder Kaur
Chandigarh India
homeward bound
the tree outside my window
bursts into birdsongBaisali Chatterjee Dutt
Kolkata, India
the earth moist
with leaf cover
dad’s baritoneBarrie Levine
United States
sparrow hawk
leaving the pine wood
scattering rainBrian Kershaw
Yorkshire, England
even for the pear
tree split by the storm
blossom seasonBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois, USA
windfall fruit
the roundness
of belongingC.X. Turner
UK
bark shedding
the leopard tree
changes its spotsCarol Reynolds
Australia
Mother maple
doula winds
deliver her seedlingsCaroline Giles Banks
Minneapolis, Minnesota, USA
Lone trail runner
high-fiving
the treesCaroline Ridley-Duff
UK
blackberries
a brown bear
tastes firstCezar Ciobica
Romania
giant tree
the sloth arrives at the top
a week behind timeChen Xiaoou
Kunming, China
distant branches
tickling
the moonCindy Putnam Guentherman
Loves Park, IL, USA
sudden wholeness –
I feel blood in the roots
sap in my veinsCristina Povero
Italy
in the forest
of the night
tiger PJsCynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
a mouse resting in the shade of a bonsai
Dan Campbell
Virginia
midnight in the glade –
a stag holds between its horns
the moonDan C. Iulian
Romania
at every step
another part of me . . .
fog in the forestDaniela Misso
Italy
small i in the midst of redwood trees
Daya Bhat
India
favorite tree
the bear satisfies
an itchDebbie Sterling
Oregon, USA
after the wildfire –
first heron
in the banyan treeDeborah A. Bennett
Illinois USA
a willow
drapes over the fishes & me
the river bankDinah Power
Haifa, Israel
poison oak
hugging the redwood
a mistakeEavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
the oak tree
with a red paint mark –
summer’s endEva Limbach
Germany
around a young tree
creeping ivy towards the sun
the fateful friendGoda Virginija Bendoraitienė
Lithuania
morning fog
sound of trees dripping
on fallen leavesGovind Joshi
Dehradun, India
father’s family tree –
one branch of it
points to mevaders stamboom –
één tak ervan
wijst naar mijGuido De Pelsmaeker
Belgium
wooded path
I stop to hug
another treeHelen Ogden
Pacific Grove, CA
forest silence broken
the chittering
of a startled squirrelIngrid Baluchi
North Macedonia
a broken branch…
buds still growing
on itIvan Ivančan
Zagreb, Croatia
taking the long way
to my volunteer job
falling magnoliasJackie Chou
United States
flame of the forest
she picks fire with
bare handsJahnavi Gogoi
Canada
mother’s love of woods
beyond any description ~
sacred legacyJean Tubridy
Tramore, Co. Waterford, Ireland
your tiny leaves
fan the flames of my heart–
gingko loveJennifer Gurney
US
stray sparks
the aspen billows
in windJerome Berglund
Minneapolis, Minnesota, United States
forest the breeze of shadows bathing
John S Green
Amman, Jordan
council cutbacks
the town’s oldest cherry tree
felled for firewoodJohn Hawkhead
United Kingdom
class play
the tall girl typecast
as the oakJohn Pappas
USA
wind after rain petrichor through heart and soul
John Zheng
Mississippi
misty forest
whispering trees
show me the wayJovana Dragojlovic
Belgrade, Serbia
one hand pressed
against the oldest oak
mother’s last pulseKathabela Wilson
USA
growing up —
the different seasons
in an almond treeKavitha Sreeraj
Hyderabad, India
bamboo grove path
regular footsteps
of the monkKeiko Izawa
Japan
our old tree
bowed with apples
its unseen heart-rotKeith Evetts
Thames Ditton UK
light touches the forest floor . . .
I remember to breatheKimberly Kuchar
Austin, Texas
an old oak
during the full moon–
last photoKrzysztof Kokot
Poland
forest bathing
we inhale and exhale
the sounds of earthLakshmi Iyer
India
orb web
the heart of a snag oak
still beatingLaurie Greer
Washington DC
alone in the woods
swarmed by a gang
of turkeysLev Hart
Calgary, Canada
forest walk
I learn to be
more treeLori Kiefer
UK
rainforest
a crimson heath climbs
to the lightLorraine Haig
Tasmania, Australia
gnarled roots
the view from
a bedroom windowLorraine A Padden
San Diego, CA
hiding high in a tangle
of lilypilly branches
children’s laughterLouise Hopewell
Australia
eye-opener in the grove
fiddlehead fern…
her mournful AprilLuciana Moretto
Treviso Italy
childhood game
our home base
always an oak treeMadeleine Kavanagh
United States
that one idea
growing into a forest
banyan treeMadhavi Karri
India
miles away
the pull of a river red gum —
i smell its breathMadhuri Pillai
Australia
first school play
my daughter is a
magnificent treeMargie Gustafson
Lombard, IL USA
evening wind
willows are revealing
their secretsMarianne Sahlin
Sweden
understory
the birch
speaks firstmarilyn ashbaugh
edwardsburg, michigan
stumped
trying to write haiku
I go to the pineMarion Clarke
Warrenpoint, Northern Ireland
Texas heatwave
under the shade of a live oak
my parents’ graveMark Meyer
Mercer Island WA USA
60th reunion
the cottonwoods
still whisperingMaxianne Berger
Outremont, QC
last maple leaf
i catch it
in my haikuMeera Rehm
UK
Judas trees in flower
the promise
of winter’s endMike Fainzilber
Rehovot, Israel
deep in the forest
my monkey mind
takes a seatMike Stinson
Nebraska, USA
autumn’s showcase—
the forest filled with
glowing embersMilan Rajkumar
Imphal, India
gusting wind
a neem tree bursts
into parrotsMona Bedi
Delhi, India
mountain trek —
wherever I look
sound of the waterfallMuskaan Ahuja
Chandigarh, India
wintry skies…
deer walk out of the forest
to feedNancy Brady
Huron, Ohio
the silent song
of moss-draped trees…
forest trailNeena Singh
India
adoreboretum
Nick T.
Somerset, England
sheltering generations
in its embrace
old banyanNitu Yumnam
India
for a drop of stolen sap
under the shade
of a date palm treePadmini Krishnan
United Arab Emirates
light breeze
a willow weeps
with mePatricia Hawkhead
United Kingdom
standing below
redwood trees I contemplate
possibilitiesPaul Callus
Malta, Europe
sizzling sun…
that cool curl of air
beneath tall pinesPris Campbell
USA
temple banyan
the black ants circumambulating
at brahma muhurtaR. Suresh Babu
India
backyard mango tree –
chirping sparrow
answers rustling leavesRam Chandran
India
pine forest
all the furniture
that wasn’t madeRavi Kiran
India
“timberrrr!”
beavers chew
a logger’s next mealRhoda Tripp
Allegan, MI, USA
picking up
the mystic’s words
tree nutsRicha Sharma
India
a small tent
the sound of wind
in tall treesRichard Straw
Cary, North Carolina
prayers
reaching for the sky
ancient oaksRita Melissano
USA
weeping willow
intertwined with
my irish twinRoberta Beary
County Mayo, Ireland
the long arms
of an ancient banyan
holding meRupa Anand
New Delhi, India
spotted fawn
in dappled forest-
invisibleRuth Happel
United States
on the taiga
stunted spruce trees
north windRuth Holzer
Herndon, VA
his drunken stumble
up a stairway
dryad’s saddleSangita Kalarickal
United States
sacred stump
in the old growth forest
we follow the signsSari Grandstaff
Saugerties, NY, USA
huge tree
twittering his identity
a small birdSatyanarayana Chittaluri
Kalwakurthy, Telangana, India
magickal pine
I gift my cloak
to the forest floorSharon Ferrante
Florida, USA
giant baobab
telling stories about
motherShruti Patel
Switzerland
looking beyond
the willow 彼方 so much light
inside the coffinsimonj
UK
the carpet
I can’t step on …
jacaranda flowersSreenath G.
India
autumn forest –
instead of photographs
I take fir-trees conesSteliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania
saving lives
from perches on high
tree sittersStephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
wind bells
whisper of lovers
under tangerine treeStoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
cicadas stop
wrens taking over
summer bush walkSubhashini Jayatilake
Sydney, Australia
Pando
a whale’s belly quivers
on the beach sandSubir Ningthouja
Imphal, Manipur, India
magnificent tree
bows down in prayer
on an unvisited tombSudha Devi Nayak
Bhubaneswar India
sweetgum trees
beauty lost
in the beastsSusan Farner
USA
stone Buddha
under gigantic cedar trees
in meditationTeiichi Suzuki
Japan
heart of the woods
the hedgehog we rescued
returns homeTracy Davidson
Warwickshire, UK
The silence of
a fir forest,
only fungi sighTracey Foster
United Kingdom
crisp cold morning
neighbor’s mulberry tree
littering my back yardTuyet Van Do
Australia
instead of that tree
knowing our June secrets
now a diaryUrszula Marciniak
Poland
dense forest . . .
home to the legend
of bigfootValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, Ohio USA
summer rain
a few stray branches burst
free from the topiaryVandana Parashar
India
dancing
wind caresses her body
tree shadowVicki Vogt
Watertown, MA USA
strong winds
the conformed symmetry
of rain treesVidya Premkumar
Kerala, India
forest walk
i pick myself
from a fallen leafVijay Prasad
Patna, India
mango tree
cuckoo’s song deepens
its shadeVipanjeet Kaur
Chandigarh, India
desert palm
missing cool shadow
of banyanVishnu Kapoor
Chennai, India
campfire sparks flying
falling into the eucalypts
a starwanda amos
Australia
Join us next week for Deborah’s commentary on additional poems…
Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt lives in Bonn, Germany, with her husband, two rabbits and numerous books. After her PhD studies in Scandinavian languages and literatures, she now works as a freelance author and poet. One of her poems won 2nd place in the 2021 Pula Film Festival Haiku Contest. Her poems have most recently appeared in Prune Juice, Kingfisher, First Frost, Frogpond, Failed Haiku and Tsuridoro. If she is not outside for a long stroll or to do some birdwatching, she is an avid reader who is currently exploring Chinese Xianxia Webnovels.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. A novice haiku poet, she lives in New York City.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Comments (16)
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this selection.
‘adoreboretum’ does it for me!
Thank you Nick T.
Thank you Guest Editor Deborah Karl-Brandt for including my “timberrrr!” haiku in this selection.
Congratulations to all.
I appreciate all observations of our great trees.
Resonating most with me this week are “the earth moist” by Barrie Levine, “forest the breeze” by John S. Green, “our old tree” by Keith Evetts, “light touches the forest floor” by Kimberly Kuchar, and “light breeze” by Patricia Hawkhead. Thank you, Deborah, for guest editing.
Thank you to Deborah for selecting my tiny haiku that I conceived whilst walking in wet forests last Spring. It’s been lovely to read all the other inspired poetry too.
Congratulations to all the poets on such magnificent haiku. Lots to appreciate, but having lived on the backend of an arboretum, I loved Nick T’s
adoreboretum
With his word play, he describes my family ‘s experience wandering through our local arboretum regularly. Between the ponds, the ducks, the bowers, etc. my children enjoyed them all.
Thanks,Deborah, for accepting my haiku, and thanks, Kathy and Lori, for your commitment to keeping Haiku Dialogue functioning week after week. Kudos to all the hardworking volunteers here.
Another engrossing collection Deborah. Some sweet, some funny… a few are profound and and a few others are oh so relatable. A nice mix. Will take a couple of readings more for me. After a first read through most of it, here are some that made me pause.
forest walk
I learn to be
more tree
Lori Kiefer
UK
deep in the forest
my monkey mind
takes a seat
Mike Stinson
Nebraska, USA
pine forest
all the furniture
that wasn’t made
Ravi Kiran
India
Thank you for including one of mine too, Deborah. Honoured 🙏
Thank you Deborah and to everyone who has made it possible. A delight to see my ku selected for the list.
Thank you Deborah for gathering these refreshing and beautiful poems…so much to ponder. I am going to read the list again! Thank you for including my poem! Thank you Katherine and Lori for all your work as well!
Many thanks for selecting my haiku!
Congratulations to all featured poets!
What a breath-taking selection.
Thank you, and wonderful to be included. Sharing two of my favourites in appreciation of the poets.
deep in the forest
my monkey mind
takes a seat
Mike Stinson
Nebraska, USA
light breeze
a willow weeps
with me
Patricia Hawkhead
United Kingdom
Many thanks for selecting my haiku!
Congratulations to all featured poets!
What a wonderful walk through trees you’ve created, Deborah. Thanks for including mine.
This poem reminded me of one of my heroes, Julia Butterfly Hill.
saving lives
from perches on high
tree sitters
Stephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
Thank you Deborah for including my haiku in this selection. Congratulations to all haijin featured in this list.
Thank you Deborah for including my haiku this week. And congratulations to all the poets here! There are so so many astonishingly wonderful haiku here. It is great reading the variety – firs, baobabs, banyans, palms, willows, pines, oaks and more.
Thanks to Deborah for selecting my haiku. Thanks also to Lori, Kathy, and the
Haiku Foundation. Congrats to all the poets.