HAIKU DIALOGUE – Facial Expressions – happiness (1)
Facial Expressions with Co-Guest Editors Hifsa Ashraf & Arvinder Kaur
Facial expression as non-verbal communication is the most significant way to express emotions. Darwin also considered facial expressions as a significant part of the evolution of communication. We may run short of words, but our face symbolically says a lot. It is said that a person’s eyes can lead us to their heart and soul, something that poets and writers have used to the hilt. Apart from the movement of facial muscles, facial expressions have their own language that varies from culture to culture in terms of their understanding and interpretation. In this era of technology, emoticons are used to convey a range of emotions. In fact, one can safely say that emoticons have softened and lent a personal touch to messages that might otherwise seem dull and drab.
In literature, and especially in poetry, facial expressions have a special place. One can immediately understand the import of the moment if the poet says that her large eyes filled with wonder, a tremulous smile played on her lips and the moon appeared pale. In micropoetry, many famous haiku poets have used facial expressions in their poetry in an interesting way. Some examples from Basho’s poetry:
A sense of terror, fear, or surprise in both poems:
an old river
making big eyes
at the willowstars in my eyes
wishing to see blossoms
on weeping cherries
Translator: Jane Reichhold
Basho: The Complete Haiku
And Kobayashi Issa used facial expressions in a different way:
autumn wind—
the face of the man
who planted pines
Translator: David Lanoue
Used with permission, Haiku Guy.com
Many facial expressions have been identified now but we will stick to the basic six facial expressions. And these are happiness, surprise, contempt/disgust, sadness, fear, and anger. You can let your imagination run wild and share some personal experiences or stories, or your observations related to these facial expressions in the weeks to come.
Below is Hifsa’s & Arvinder’s selection of poems on the theme of happiness:
nuthatch at the window
I find myself
smilingAllison Douglas-Tourner
Victoria BC Canada
playing peekaboo
with a war child
crescent moonAnju Kishore
India
the butterfly flirts
and the bumblebee hums –
a baby’s chuckleAnne Curran
Hamilton
a tiny smile
the mysteries
of a sleeping childAnn Rawson
Scotland
bobbing for apples my son’s toothless grin
Ann Sullivan
Massachusetts, USA
turning cartwheels
her laughter lights up
the meadowAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
sky lanterns
the kids mimicking
the dragon danceAnthony Rabang
Philippines
first light
smile of my newborn
in sleepAparna Pathak
Gurugram, India
temple gate
adorned with warnings
for happy soulsAshok Weerakkody
Sri Lanka
gardening joys
my mother’s smile
full of rosesBaisali Chatterjee Dutt
Kolkata, India
double scoop
the chocolate taste
of her smileBarrie Levine
USA
warm milk
his new laugh lines deepen
my crow’s feetBen Oliver
United Kingdom
drought’s end
rain down
her laugh linesBryan Rickert
Belleville, Illinois
winter bouquet
spring smiles
from a vaseCharles Harper
Yokohama
raised eyebrows
I see the invisible teeth
behind her maskChen Xiaoou
Kunming, China
grinning cheers
with caps thrown in the air
graduationCindy Putnam Guentherman
Illinois, USA
a real pony!
the birthday girl’s eyes
light upCorine Timmer
Faro, Portugal
from the pushchair –
her small toothless mouth
opens in a boundless smiledal passeggino –
la sua piccola bocca sdentata
si apre in un sorriso infinitoCristina Povero
Italy
first light the kite ribbons his smile
C.X. Turner
UK
breathing out
the Zen master’s
half-smileCynthia Anderson
Yucca Valley, California
donkey smile –
melting my cold
cold heartDan Campbell
Virginia
full moon
cherry blossom lips
slowly bloomDaya Bhat
India
holding my breath
the length of the train’s passing
summer rainDeborah A. Bennett
Illinois, USA
street cleaner
a broad smile
to a chilly morningDejan Ivanovic
Lazarevac, Serbia
laughing
until we cry
sistersEavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, CA
graduate student hat –
in his mother’s eyes
a cluster of starsElena Zouain
Romania
after equinox
smiling under still-warm sun—
wildflower seed headsElizabeth Shack
Illinois
jack-o’-lantern smiles
candle glow
greets the little devilsEvan Spivack
Teaneck, NJ
laughing together
mother
tickling toddlerGovind Joshi
Dehradun, India
halloween
a pumpkin smiles
on every porchherb goldsmith
Texas USA
swaying boat
under the shining stars
grandpa’s smileIvan Gaćina
Zadar, Croatia
Jack-o’-lantern bucket
filled with candies
a child’s smileJackie Chou
United States
Baklava –
the layers of her
sticky grinJan Stretch
Victoria BC Canada
over her baby’s head
our eyes meet on the bus
the smiles of mothersJenny Shepherd
London, UK
Auguste clown
they laugh
on his termsJerome Berglund
Minneapolis, Minnesota
splitting the atom
a small child’s smile
brighter than starsJohn Hawkhead
United Kingdom
daughter’s smile
the rainbow
in the oil slickJohn Pappas
United States
our eyes meet
just like the first time
cherry blossomsJohn S Green
Bethlehem, Palestine
slow thaw—
her slight smile
at his apologyJohn Zheng
Mississippi
handshakes
on a playing field
half smilesJonathan Epstein
USA
as the dog licks her dimples reappearing
Julie Bloss Kelsey
Germantown, MD, USA
mirror solitaire
I practice smiling
at myselfKathabela Wilson
USA
dreamtime…
baby smiles with
rosebud gumsKavita Ratna
India
sepia wind
the first acceptance
of my haiku submissionKeiko Izawa
Japan
taking a shine
to the nightingale
young moonKeith Evetts
Thames Ditton, UK
after a long wait…
I spot her getting off
the trainK Ramesh
Adyar, Chennai, India
green bowls
painted with daisies–
your laugh in a dreamLafcadio Orlovsky
USA
just born
Mona Lisa
in our handsLakshmi Iyer
India
lowered binoculars…
her wide eyes full
of bluebirdLaurie Greer
Washington, DC
struggling to breathe —
the jerky convulsions
of our giggle fitLisa Anne Johnson
Ann Arbor, Michigan, USA
catching
his smile . . .
a peacock butterflyLori Kiefer
UK
ear to ear
a field at full
sunflowerLorraine A Padden
San Diego, CA USA
love token
her eyes
a squeeze of joyLuciana Moretto
Treviso Italy
steamy day
the warm smile
of the bus driverManoj Sharma
Kathmandu, Nepal
at the bakery
the baker offers me
a rye smileMargie Gustafson
Lombard, IL USA
smile –
among the surly sea
a boatsorriso –
tra il mare scontroso
una barcaMaria Cezza
Italia
beach bar
the pelican’s
wide smilemarilyn ashbaugh
USA
soft giggles
my toddler at a tea party
with her teddy bearsMarion Clarke
Warrenpoint, Northern Ireland
the sly smirk
after telling
one joke too farMark Gilbert
UK
he smiles at me
but I wonder why —
the man in the moonMark Meyer
Mercer Island WA USA
my toddlers
rolling around the verandah…
summer windMaya Daneva
The Netherlands
home cooking
adobo a dance
with each biteM. R. Defibaugh
United States
a leaf falls
peacefully to the ground
I smile at its beautyMel Dennison
UK
still laughing
the snowman made
with my fatherMihaela Iacob
Romania
the innocent grin
of a grandchild
mischief afootMike Gallagher
Ballyduff Ireland
first boat ride
my child’s giggles
burst on and offMinal Sarosh
Ahmedabad, India
stork at the nest
and grandfather’s tears
first grandsonMircea Moldovan
România
contagion
the nephew’s laugh
on my faceMirela Brailean
Romania
family reunion —
the wobble of gran’s belly
as she laughsMona Bedi
India
making friends…
dimples – how much we have
in commonNairithi Konduru, 8 years old
India
Oktoberfest…
children giggle
at the pumpkin dropNancy Brady
Huron, Ohio
the soldier’s comeback
his mother’s face
says it allNatalia Kuznetsova
Russia
soap bubbles
a smile reflected
in a child’s eyesNazarena Rampini
Italia
flowering meadow…
granny’s soft crooning
deepens his dimplesNeena Singh
India
eye-corners crinkle
a shared glance across the room
secret gigglesNicky Moxey
UK
difficult birth –
light fills the room for
its first smileNicole Pottier
France
forced smiles
and happy smiles
class photoOlivier Schopfer
Geneva, Switzerland
the arrivals gate bustling
with teary smiles
Christmas breakPadma Rajeswari
Mumbai, India
graduation ceremony
my father’s wet eyes
on his nonchalant facePadmini Krishnan
United Arab Emirates
back from Vietnam
my smile splits my face
when the ship docksPris Campbell
U.S.
son’s first pay-check
a tear rolls down
my smiling cheeksPriti Khullar
Noida, India
baby shower-
her smiles at little punches
and the little kicks…Ram Chandran
India
ice cream truck
the toddler lets go
of a balloonRavi Kiran
India
evening sky
her crescent moon smile
says everythingRehn Kovacic
Mesa, AZ
in my hands
you don’t need to worry
smiley ballRicha Sharma
India
clown tricks her laughter hiccups
Richard L. Matta
San Diego, California USA
winter evening
bubbles in the bathtub
and a baby’s smileRichard Straw
Cary, North Carolina
a crescent bindi
on her forehead –
last chemoR. Suresh Babu
India
flat on his back
sharing the sun
a smile in his purrRupa Anand
New Delhi, India
back and forth
my daughter and I
pass our laughRuth Happel
United States
air punch
after I received
her yesRuth H. Hermosa
Gloria, Oriental Mindoro, Philippines
candlelight
dancing in her eyes
sweet sixteenRuth Holzer
Herndon, VA
our first date
the man in the moon
smiles back at meSari Grandstaff
Saugerties, NY, USA
slow smile rounding a city street corner
s. d. broscious
Ohio, US
northern lights —
a glow of wonder
on the child’s faceSeretta Martin
San Diego, CA USA
peek-a-boo…
the child’s laughter louder
with every turnShobhana Kumar
India
after 50 years
wedding vows renewed.
tears of loveSigrid Saradunn
Bar Harbor, Maine
snowfall
and coal fires
lighting up facessimonj
UK
cherry moon –
his face when she enters
the churchSteliana Cristina Voicu
Romania
cherry blossoms
all those
happy facesStephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA
laughs break out
as teacher sits down…
whoopee cushionStephen J. DeGuire
Los Angeles, CA
tears of joy
the world is rocking
in rainbowsStoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
lunch date
with my work buddy
payday glorySubhashini Jayatilake
Sydney, Australia
assisted living –
smiling back
at the lunar phaseSuraj Nanu
India
light bulb
when I see you
my 1,000 watt smileSusan Burch
Hagerstown, MD
drought busting rain
high fives
at the coffee shopSusan Farner
USA
spring sun-
distance no matter
sunflower laughsSwarna Bopali de Zoysa
Sri Lanka
a smile
in and out of sleep
baby at the breastTeiichi Suzuki
Japan
first time at the beach
a toddler giggles
with every waveTomislav Sjekloća
Cetinje, Montenegro
soap bubbles…
the child’s bright smile
lifts meTony Williams
Scotland, UK
laughter lines
gran’s eyes crinkle
at my dirty jokesTracy Davidson
Warwickshire, UK
shining snow
crowned cranes perform
their wedding danceTsanka Shishkova
Sofia, Bulgaria
giggling
in tiny cupped hands
a millipedeTuyet Van Do
Australia
get-together
laugh lines deepening
with every jokeVipanjeet Kaur
India
play school
painted pink
a girl’s smilewanda amos
Old Bar, Australia
i kiss the boo-boo
on his knee
returning smileWendy C. Bialek
az, us
winning shot
midst cheers of joy
tears rollZahra Mughis
Lahore, Pakistan
Join us next week for Hifsa’s & Arvinder’s commentary on additional poems, & our next prompt…
Guest Editor Hifsa Ashraf is an award-winning poet, author, editor, and social activist from Rawalpindi, Pakistan. Her work has been widely published. Hifsa is the author of six micropoetry books on gender-based taboos, mental health, socio-cultural, and socio-political issues. She has won The Touchstone Award for Individual Poems 2021 from The Haiku Foundation. She received special mention for her book, Her Fading Henna Tattoo, in the Touchstone Distinguished Books Award 2020 and in the Haiku Society of America Merit Book Award 2021. Her most recent micropoetry collection, hazy crescent moon, is about Islamophobia and is published by Alba Publishing, UK.
Guest Editor Arvinder Kaur, author, translator and an award-winning poet, specializes in English literature and Media Studies. Her haiku have appeared in several international journals. She is the author of four books of micropoetry, two of which are bilingual where she has translated her own work into vernacular. Her books have been very well received in India and abroad. She lives in Chandigarh, India with her family.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. A novice haiku poet, she lives in New York City.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She is Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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Dear Hifsa & Arvinder, you both have enriched the world of haiku greatly with your outstanding selections. I enjoyed every one of them. Thank you bringing all that happiness to us!
Hifsa Ashraf & Arvinder Kaur kudos to you both for placing together this topic and bringing forth so many enriching happy/ smiling ‘ku.
thanks for posting one of mine in the mix.
here are just a few, that caught my heart:
Baklava –
the layers of her
sticky grin
Jan Stretch
Victoria BC Canada
sometimes things taste even sweeter when you can test and watch them being consumed by a child you’d love to lick each sticky layer of her grin!
splitting the atom
a small child’s smile
brighter than stars
John Hawkhead
United Kingdom
Ah! the power of a child’s smile!
we would walk 500 miles for this moment.
dreamtime…
baby smiles with
rosebud gums
Kavita Ratna
this one brought me back!
We where told by the pediatric nurses
that when your baby is sleeping, that’s
the time you are to get your rest, too!
BUT….if i heeded this, i would miss out
on the million faces my first baby made.
i could not pass up these moments
by closing my eyes on them!
Kavita, i love the way you used, “rosebud gums”
giving it a gender, maybe, a colour and textural shape.
Looking back over the list of haiku, I found another gem that made me smile (there are many here, but…)
I loved the pun in Margie Gustafson’s haiku. Thanks for the fun haiku!
at the bakery
the baker offers me
a rye smile
Margie Gustafson
As was said previously, it is with pleasure that we get to read these uplifting haiku especially with all the bad news right now.
Wonderful to read them all. Very nice selection.
Lots of great haiku in this selection. Many brought back memories or made me smile. Here are two of my favourites:
lowered binoculars…
her wide eyes full
of bluebird
Laurie Greer
Washington, DC
at the bakery
the baker offers me
a rye smile
Margie Gustafson
Lombard, IL USA
Delightful reading in an otherwise somber week. Celebrating both the old and the young are two picks.
gardening joys
my mother’s smile
full of roses
Baisali Chatterjee Dutt
just born
Mona Lisa
in our hands
Lakshmi Iyer
a great prompt this week and lovely selection.
my favourite this week:
flat on his back
sharing the sun
a smile in his purr
Rupa Anand
New Delhi, India
So much humanity in many of these poems.
laughter lines / gran’s eyes crinkle / at my dirty jokes Tracy Davidson
our first date / the man in the moon / smiles back at me Sari Grandstaff
I know the grandma of the first must have experienced something similar with the man in the moon on her first date.
Thank you Alan!
A lovely selection of happy haiku in these dark times. Thanks to Hifsa and Arvinder for the fine selections and well done everyone for a bright compendium of smiles!
Thankyou John .
a tiny smile
the mysteries
of a sleeping child
Ann Rawson
Scotland
Some say that this is involuntary practice to get muscles accustomed to smiling, frowning, grinning, etc. for later on. But, aside from the relief of passing gas, or something else, a sleeping baby’s gummy smile is just about the cutest thing. Loved this one, Ann, as well as so many others.
What a prompt and what a selection. This happy poems selection was one of the most delightful I have read.
Thank you Hifsa and Arvinder for bringing so much joy. And thanks for including mine.
Glad you enjoyed the selection.
Congratulations to all the poets. So many haiku made me smile and laugh. So uplifting.
Eavonka’s
laughing
until we cry
sisters
reminds me of my younger sister. When she is very tickled, she laughs until tears stream out of her eyes. She is the first person I ever saw do this. Nicely done, Eavonka.
Shobhana Kumar’s haiku
peek-a-boo…
the child’s laughter louder
with every turn
Love it as every child I’ve ever known has done this and there is something so joyful about this game and the laughter it generates. Thanks of reminding me, Shobhana.
So many more I could comment upon because all are so evocative of happiness.
Thanks for including mine among all these haiku.
It makes my heart sing to have reminded you of your sister, Nan. I’m definitely a laugh until I cry person. 😂
Thank you both, for the uplifting varieties of happiness. A few tried to express the essence of happiness, or at least its outward manifestation, not an easy task. I’d pick out these:-
double scoop
the chocolate taste
of her smile
Barrie Levine
USA
raised eyebrows
I see the invisible teeth
behind her mask
Chen Xiaoou
Kunming, China
full moon
cherry blossom lips
slowly bloom
Daya Bhat
India
Thank you so much dear Mark, glad my poem resonates with you. And thanks to editors Hifsa Ashraf and Arvinder Kaur for the lovely theme. Smiling through the happy poems, yours adds a fine facet of humour!
Ever so grateful to team Haiku Dialogue and The Haiku Foundation.
Congratulations to all wonderful poets. Looking forward to commentaries next week.
Daya
Thank you, Hifsa and Arvinder for including my haiku amongst this outstanding collection. I very much enjoyed reading them all. Too many favorites here to name them all, so multilayered.
What an absolute delight it was to read these selections today! I’ve needed a pick me up, and this more than provided it. Thanks to Hifsa and Arvinder for including my poem today. Truly wonderful to smile and laugh at so many.
Here’s a favorite:
the sly smirk
after telling
one joke too far
Mark Gilbert
UK
I can’t resist the word “smirk”!
Thank you Eavonka, yours was wonderful!
Thanks! It may be the shortest one. 😂
Oktoberfest…
children giggle
at the pumpkin drop
.
Nancy Brady
Huron, Ohio
.
Nancy, please enlighten me to what a pumpkin drop is?
Valentina,
In Huron, Ohio they have a fall festival. During the festival, the local nursery brings out their crane. Large pumpkins are carved out and then filled with all sorts of gooey stuff. I’m not quite sure what all is inside, but local celebs go up in the crane and from increasing heights, pumpkins are dropped to the pavement splatting the contents in the drop zone after a countdown. That’s the pumpkin drop. Kids love the drop, the mess, etc. It is well attended by children and adults and for some it is the highlight of the day’s events. This year’s event was cancelled because of rain, by the way.
Thank you for sharing my haiku! I very much enjoyed reading this selection, and especially appreciating the incredible variety it offers. These haiku definitely brought a smile to my face!
Thank you so much to the Editors for selected my haiku! Congrats to all featured poets!
Thank you Arvinder and Hifsa for including my haiku in the happy facial expressions this week! Congratulations to all the poets here. It is awesome how there are poets from so many different places that participate here – India, Pakistan, Sri Lanka, Bulgaria, Australia, Philippines, Italy, Romania, The Netherlands, USA, Switzerland, France, just to name a few. I really got a kick out of this haiku – just perfect:
son’s first pay-check
a tear rolls down
my smiling cheeks
Priti Khullar
Noida, India
And I appreciate this one a lot. Reminds of those breastfeeding days, nothing like it:
a smile
in and out of sleep
baby at the breast
Teiichi Suzuki
Japan
Thanks Sari for your kind comments and for sharing your beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading a lot of great ku this week!