HAIKU DIALOGUE – Allusion – Connections to the Past – long list
Allusion with Guest Editor Allyson Whipple
Though the writing of haiku is often a solitary act, each individual effort is part of a centuries-old tradition that is bound up in a larger collective impulse. Allusion allows us to be in dialogue with both the past and present, focused within the world of literature or expanding out to broader cultural memory. Using allusion also reminds us that nobody creates in a vacuum; our poetic selves are comprised of all we have written, studied, and experienced. Over the next several weeks, we will focus on writing allusive haiku that foster our sense of a global haiku collective.
Below is Allyson’s selection of poems on the topic of Connections to the Past:
on a dry branch
a raven landed
late autumn
Bashô
leafless tree
with the last leaves
the birds fly awayStoianka Boianova
Bulgaria
a nightingale —
my sandals stuck
in field mud
Bonchō
nightingale ode—
a soldier’s smile stuck
in battlefield mudAdele Evershed
Wilton, CT, USA
songbirds—
how often the rain
cleans my sandalsSharon Ferrante
Florida, USAthe first violets…
with muddy shoes
I trample the grassAngiola Inglese
Rapallo, Italy
plum blossom scent
rises up —
halo of the moon
Buson
spring floods
rising up —
the Little DipperMarilyn Ashbaugh
Edwardsburg, MI, USAplum blossom
how the scent carries
the light of the moonAnnie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
grasshopper—
cheeping in the scarecrow’s
sleeve
Chigetsu
second-hand shirt
a grasshopper jumps
out of my sleevethomas david
UK
all the way to Ise
we have been fellow travelers
wild geese
Chin-jo
noon bike ride
ladybug on my shorts
sharing the milesLyle Smith
West Sacramento, CA, USA
the footprints
of a man —
first cherry blossoms
Chiyo-jo
the hand of man
extended —
calm cow’s faceHerb Tate
Jersey, UKa carpet
of cherry pink—
my black footprintsTony Williams
Scotland, UK
smoky candle —
the evening cold
with snow
Etsujin
the sweet sound
of Easter hymns …
curling candle smokewanda amos
Australia
the quiet —
the cherry blossoms unmoved
by the temple bell
Fuhaku
church bells tolling
the town’s fallen
cherry petalsArchie G. Carlos
Minnesota, USAthe gong-ging
of the temple bell
devi stillKavita Ratna
India
spring to spring…
feeling the same
and different
Gekkyo
sprouting weeds —
the holes in her smile
filled up againMichael Pappafava
Belgiumoxbow …
the river circles back
birthing a lakeSubir Ningthouja
Imphal, India
a waterbird
beak in its feathers
falls asleep
Ginkō
on the ferry
she sinks into her coat
inemuriIvan Georgiev
Germany
winter wind –
it ends in the roar
of the sea
Gonsui
bora wind —
its sound in the stones
rolling to the seaSanjana Zorinc
Croatia
dawn—
the call of whales
beneath the sea
Gyōdai
midnight crossing
the Gulf stream sweeps away
a mother dolphinPris Campbell
USAawake awhile
the call of whales
from my dreamKathabela Wilson
California, USA
using a candle
to light my cigar —
hototogisu
Issa
everyone’s gone
but for you and I —
kobutomushiMark Meyer
Mercer Island, WA, USAlighting
one cigarette with another
. . . distant geeseBen Oliver
United Kingdom
don’t worry, spiders,
I keep house
casually
Issa
enjoy the day
little mouse, my mother
is not homePadma Rajeswari
Mumbai, India
morning glory —
so white the dew
disappears
Kakei
skeleton flower —
the clarity of cemetery
raindropsKelly Sargent
Williston, VT, USA
pampas grass
takes the form
of the autumn wind
Kigin
autumn wind
gusting through
the bent bristlecone pinesLee Hudspeth
USAwind in the willows
the winter sky
talks to meStephen A. Peters
Bellingham, WA, USA
in the market
stones on the woodblock prints–
spring breeze
Kito
roadmenders’ lunch
bread rolls atop salad leaves —
spring breezeSheila Barksdale
Gotherington, UK
falling blossoms
and the calming down
of us all
Koyū-ni
after the bloom—
our breaths
in the same hushDorna Hainds
Michigan, USA
storm over—
the coolness left
in the bamboos
Makusetsu
argument over—
in the bedroom
a coolnessDebbie Scheving
Bremerton, WA, USA
warehouse burnt —
nothing left to impede
the view of the moon
Masahide
falling shells
through cracked wall
sun risesFatma Zohra Habis
Algeria
a dog’s bark—
a man passes in
the snowy night
Meimei
just one more day ….
as long as his life lasts
the snowman smilesDeborah Karl-Brandt
Germany
cherry blossoms
scattering—
an evening in prayer
Moritake
last of the tulips
chewed down–
blown fuseLaurie Greer
Washington, D.C., USA
in the mountains
autumn, briefly, and
the setting sun
Ōemaru
again autumn love loses a face
Daya Bhat
India
to know the plum:
a heart,
a nose
Onitsura
to know my heart
chocolate
in plum sauceAlfred Booth
Lyon, Franceunknown after me a plum
Vijay Prasad
Patna, India
dragonflies
all going the same way —
sunset
Rangai
sunset
the road to cemetery
made one waySrinivasa Rao Sambangi
Hyderabad, Indiastarlings
all turning as one
sundownRichard Straw
Cary, NC, USAnoonday sun
going every which way
mayfliesKeith Evetts
Thames Ditton, UK
plum blossoms —
traces of spring
nowhere else
Rito
mango blossoms
the koel’s call becomes
louder and louderMinal Sarosh
Ahmedabad, India
hamlets bereft
of blossoms and the sea:
tonight’s moon
Saikaku
supermoon
the hamlets won’t
sleep tonightSumitra Kumar
India
its body ends
in emptiness —
cicada
Saimu
its empty shell
still clings to a branch —
cicadaJenny Shepherd
London, UKin the end
our death poems rush
downriverRoberta Beach Jacobson
Indianola, Iowa, USA
nameless
but each weed
its flower
Sampū
without a name
yet colouring a whole hill
wildflowersArvinder Kaur
Chandigarh, Indiacalling them weeds
the fireweed
in full bloomBiswajit Mishra
Canada
in the doorway
a man’s shadow —
autumn evening
Seira
in the doorway
his silhouette
bending lightPeggy Bilbro
Alabama, USAshe folds his name
into the drawer—
last lightC.X. Turner
Warwickshire, UKautumn sun —
the leaves brush
a man’s shadowKatherine E. Winnick
Brighton, UK
winter gale —
a lone bird
looks cold
Shikō
a pyramid of cards . . .
falling to her song
the winter galeRicha Sharma
India
rainy day —
a stranger passes by
with flowers
Shintoku
steady rain
a stranger offers
his umbrellaValentina Ranaldi-Adams
Fairlawn, OH, USAgloomy morning
the wag
of a dog’s tailOlivier Schopfer
Geneva, Switzerland
departing autumn —
the grasses hide
a stream’s flow
Shirao
departing autumn —
dried-up leaves
fold into flightAnne Curran
Hamilton, New Zealand
loneliness—
the height of the temple ceiling
through the mosquito net
Shōha
loneliness —
the height of the skyscraper
through the smogMaxianne Berger
Outremont, Quebecloneliness—
barren hospital room
while spring returnsChrista Pandey
Austin, TX, USA
overnight on the line
drying my underwear —
the Milky Way
Sōchō
across my back
the Milky Way glides
skinny dippingMichelle Hoover
Castle Rock, CO, USA
felling the hedge
the young bamboo
becomes the hedge
Sodo
flailed hedgerow
old nests
never seen beforeAnn Rawson
Glasgow, Scotland, UK
slant sunrays
on the temple bell
scant heat
Sogan
wave patterns
across folding fans
sweat dripsStephen J. Deguire
Los Angeles, CA, USA
gazing up
at the great sky —
scent of plum blossoms
Soin
dad’s passing…
the end of a trail
of plum blossomsJackie Chou
Pico Rivera, CA, USA
cold wind—
through the torn shoji
October moon
Sokon
bent blinds
in the front window
my mother’s depressionBarrie Levine
Massachusetts, USA
the dog barks
at the roar of leaves —
the storm
Sono-jo
the cat paws
at the fluttering blooms —
first spring breezeRupa Anand
New Delhi, India
trudging, trudging —
when I fall, let me lie
in this field of bush clover
Sora
tottering
when I fall, let it be
into purpleEavonka Ettinger
Long Beach, California, USAfirst in my field
the praise you almost give
grudging, grudgingTracy Davidson
Warwickshire, UK
snowy morning —
the sandals leave behind
their two and two
Sute-jo
virgin white —
waiting for its pair
a snow angelDan C. Iulian
Romania
mosquito larvae
the sunshine
on stagnant water
Taigi
stagnant water
and yet!
the lotus bloomsLakshmi Iyer
India
this one and that one
must still have a name—
burning grasses
Tayo-jo
drifting smoke
over blackened fields
shallow gravesJohn Hawkhead
United Kingdom
bursting at the seams—
weeping cherries
in bloom
Teitoku
bursting at the seams my wife past due
M. R. Defibaugh
USAovernight
the plum tree
becomes a bouquetDebbie Sterling
Oregon, USA
spring
but the sky is not
my home sky
Tokoku
passport
each page a step away
from homeNitu Yumnam
UAE
summer evening —
the smoke planes
mosquito columns
Tsunenori
a shift of shadows
bridges the beck…
swarming gnatsMarilyn Ward
Lincolnshire, UK
just their voices
passing in the dark —
the cold
Yaha
calling out to passersby
the kogarashi devouring
the oakJahnavi Gogoi
Ajax, Ontario, Canada
Join us next week for Allyson’s commentary on additional poems…
Bios:
Guest Editor Allyson Whipple is the author of the haiku chapbook Postcards from Texas (Cuttlefish Books), as well as two free-verse chapbooks. She is the founding editor of Haiku Girl Summer and currently serves as the managing editor of Frogpond, and is at work on her reference work The Culinary Saijiki.
Assistant Editor Lafcadio, a former teacher, now works from home writing, editing and proofreading study guides for nursing textbooks. She lives in Tennessee. She has written poetry for a long time but a couple of years ago fell in love with Japanese micropoetry and hasn’t looked back. Lafcadio has been published in a number of journals and anthologies. She writes under the nom de plume of Lafcadio because nom de plume is so fun to say. You can read her poems on Twitter (X) @lafcadiopoetry or BlueSky @lafcadiobsky.
Assistant Editor Vandana Parashar is an associate editor of haikuKATHA and one of the editors of Poetry Pea and #FemkuMag. Her debut e-chapbook, I Am, was published by Title IX Press (now Moth Orchid Press) in 2019 and her second chapbook Alone, I Am Not, was published by Velvet Dusk Publishing in April 2022.
Lori Zajkowski is the Post Manager for Haiku Dialogue. She lives in New York City and enjoys reading and writing haiku.
Managing Editor Katherine Munro lives in Whitehorse, Yukon Territory, and publishes under the name kjmunro. She served as Membership Secretary for Haiku Canada for ten years, and her debut poetry collection is contractions (Red Moon Press, 2019). Find her at: kjmunro1560.wordpress.com.
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the willow leaves fall
and the clear water has gone
stones lie everywhere
Buson
the plum tree buds
and the vernal pool swells
tadpole jamboree
even in Kyoto
hearing the cukoo’s cry
I long for Kyoto
–Issa
after the wildfire
even among wildflowers
I long for the wildflowers
–Susan Rogers
This has been a great exercise and selection of allusive haiku (also known as “honkadori” haiku). See https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Honkadori.
Michele Root-Bernstein wrote an excellent article on the topic back in 2017. It’s available at the Modern Haiku website: https://www.modernhaiku.org/essays/.
Root-Bernstein, Michele. “Copying to Create: The Role of Imitation and Emulation in Developing Haiku Craft.” Modern Haiku 48.1, Winter-Spring 2017.
This approach produced a lot of good haiku! Well done all.
Dear Allyson,
Thank you for this amazing prompt – it was a challenge and such a joy! Some of the masters are so naughty in their poetry! It gives so much pleasure to read the seed poems and then all the work they have inspired! Enjoyed the entire selection here.
Some which had a special appeal for me are here:
plum blossom
how the scent carries
the light of the moon
Annie Wilson
Shropshire, UK
on the ferry
she sinks into her coat
inemuri
Ivan Georgiev
Germany
lighting
one cigarette with another
. . . distant geese
Ben Oliver
United Kingdom
passport
each page a step away
from home
Nitu Yumnam
UAE
bent blinds
in the front window
my mother’s depression
Barrie Levine
Massachusetts, USA
Thank you once again. Greatly looking forward to the commentaries next week!
That was a great challenge ….. and wonderful responses by poets. Thanks Allyson
Congrats to all the poets. I enjoyed reading these haiku especially side by side with the haiku from the masters. I also enjoyed the exercise and found myself writing quite a few just for fun. Thanks for the prompt, Allyson.
A complex and fun read this week; thank you Allyson and team.
Especially making me smile was the pairing of:
don’t worry, spiders,
I keep house
casually
Issa
enjoy the day
little mouse, my mother
is not home
Padma Rajeswari
Mumbai, India
Thank you, Allyson, for including my haiku! I loved this exercise and hope to see more “assignments” like it.
While all haiku here were worthy of recognition, here are a few that stood out to me:
second-hand shirt
a grasshopper jumps
out of my sleeve
thomas david
UK
on the ferry
she sinks into her coat
inemuri
Ivan Georgiev
Germany
bursting at the seams my wife past due
M. R. Defibaugh
USA
a carpet
of cherry pink—
my black footprints
Tony Williams
Scotland, UK
sprouting weeds —
the holes in her smile
filled up again
Michael Pappafava
Belgium
Congrats, everyone!
Loved reading Haiku Dialogue’s long list this week. What an inspiring prompt! Congratulations to all the poets!
A really wonderful challenge, Allyson, and like you, I was intrigued by how some poems had several responses, and the different ways we we approached our allusions.
I loved reading where people went with this assignment, Allyson. It was fascinating to see the different ways poets alluded to these historic poems. Thank you so much for including mine.
I was particularly struck by:
in the doorway
a man’s shadow —
autumn evening
Seira
she folds his name
into the drawer—
last light
C.X. Turner
Warwickshire, UK
I can’t wait to hear the commentary choices next week!
Some great haiku here. Maybe I will remember to submit next time!
I know the feeling . . . I have a recurring calendar reminder for submission weeks and yet I miss them more often than I’d like.
I’m really enjoying this unusual and interesting exercise for Haiku Dialogue, so thank you Allyson for the prompts. Very much looking forward to your commentary next week too!
I’m glad you’re enjoying it! I love the ways in which allusion can enrich such short poems.
It’s so neat to see multiple people’s takes on the same starting verse!
This was a fun, educational prompt.
It was also interesting to me to notice which poems got responded to most frequently. Some really resonated with a lot of people!
What a fun and challenging exercise Allison. Thank you so much. I enjoyed reading the original poems and seeing where they led our modern poets.
I also loved seeing all the ways in which people chose to make their allusions. Some went for a specific line, some went for structure, some focused on the broader topic.
Welcome Allyson. Thank-you for selecting my poem for your interesting exercise in writing
haiku. Thank-you also to all at the Haiku Foundation who help with this column. Congrats
to all the poets who were chosen this time.
The team really does a great job. It’s fun to get to see behind the scenes of this series.
And thanks for rising to the challenge. I was so impressed with the poems that came through!
Thank you so much Allyson Whipple for a very thoughtful, engaging and inspiring experience. Enjoying this week’s selections and looking forward to commented poems! Thank you so much for including one of mine.
Also thanks to the entire team of haiku dialogue.
Daya
I’m glad you’re enjoying this topic, Daya. People did an excellent job responding to the seed poems. I loved seeing what these older poems inspired in people.