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Don Baird

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #15 on: January 02, 2011, 06:49:22 PM »
summer solstice
a train gathers speed
and dandelion snow
          ~Gael

snow-capped ledge
the tidewash
of the windswept sea
          ~cat

seaborne
memory of prawn curry
aboard a minesweeper
          ~Alan

minesweeper -
the fishermen haul
a heavy catch
          ~Gael

catch-
the old dog twitches
in his sleep
          ~Bea

sleep lab
the more they try to make it
feel like home . . .
          ~cat

home run
half the bat follows
the ball
          ~Don

ball four
shouts the Little League ump
parents start fighting
           ~Al

fighting the urge
to see him again . . .
this dusty road
          ~cat       

road trip
a shanty motel
on the edge of town
          ~Don

town pier
seiners rocking
under a mackerel sky
           ~cat

Sky TV
a cable is removed
in the big house
           –Alan

house warming –
the glow of everyone's
cheeks
           ~Don


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storm drain
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of winter

Gael Bage

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #16 on: January 03, 2011, 03:50:03 AM »
perhaps it might be easier as Cat did at the beginning to just put the previous linking verse ? Saving space  ;D

house warming –
the glow of everyone's
cheeks
          ~ Don

cheeks flushed -
a child's sled flies
down the hill
                 ~ Gael
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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #17 on: January 03, 2011, 07:58:31 AM »
Helo, Gael and other haiku train passengers,

It might be useful to put the previous two.  I suggest that because it's what's being done in the renga I'm participating in, and it does give a little bit more of what's gone before, so the additions don't have the same imagery too close together.

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #18 on: January 08, 2011, 02:20:46 AM »
house warming –
the glow of everyone's
cheeks
          ~ Don

cheeks flushed -
a child's sled flies
down the hill
                 ~ Gael

hillwalking...
heather always
one step ahead
                     ~col
     
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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #19 on: January 09, 2011, 05:37:14 PM »
cheeks flushed -
a child's sled flies
down the hill
                 ~ Gael

hillwalking...
heather always
one step ahead
                     ~col
     
ahead of us shines
january's crescent moon
above the tree tops
                   onecloud

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #20 on: January 09, 2011, 06:34:47 PM »
Hello,

Well, I'm glad "tree tops" is two words here instead of one!

hillwalking...
heather always
one step ahead
          ~col
     
ahead of us shines
january's crescent moon
above the tree tops
          ~onecloud

tops hidden in mist . . .
below the mountains,
blossoming plum
           ~cat
"Nature inspires me. I am only a messenger."  ~Kitaro

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #21 on: January 09, 2011, 07:52:52 PM »
ahead of us shines
january's crescent moon
above the tree tops
          ~onecloud

tops hidden in mist . . .
below the mountains,
blossoming plum
           ~cat

plum seeds
a few kids brandish
their slingshots
           ~Don
I write haiku because they're there ...

storm drain
the vertical axis
of winter

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #22 on: January 09, 2011, 08:08:41 PM »
tops hidden in mist . . .
below the mountains,
blossoming plum
           ~cat

plum seeds
a few kids brandish
their slingshots
           ~Don

twilight party
Elvis brandishes
a Memphis Slingshot

            ~Alan

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #23 on: January 10, 2011, 01:47:40 PM »
plum seeds
a few kids brandish
their slingshots
           ~Don

twilight party
Elvis brandishes
a Memphis Slingshot

            ~Alan

slingshot stone flying
to Goliath's left temple
crashing to the ground
              onecloud

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #24 on: January 10, 2011, 01:51:43 PM »
twilight party
Elvis brandishes
a Memphis Slingshot

            ~Alan

slingshot stone flying
to Goliath's left temple
crashing to the ground
             
            ~onecloud

ground zero
my friend's story
about her friend

            ~Alan


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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #25 on: January 12, 2011, 12:51:37 AM »
slingshot stone flying
to Goliath's left temple
crashing to the ground
             
            ~onecloud

ground zero
my friend's story
about her friend

            ~Alan

two friends
visit the graves
of the unknown

            ~Maggie

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #26 on: January 12, 2011, 06:29:47 AM »
Hello,

ground zero
my friend's story
about her friend

            ~Alan

two friends
visit the graves
of the unknown

            ~Maggie

unknown scent
in the blossoming meadow
climate change
          ~cat
"Nature inspires me. I am only a messenger."  ~Kitaro

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #27 on: January 12, 2011, 01:48:43 PM »
two friends
visit the graves
of the unknown

            ~Maggie

unknown scent
in the blossoming meadow
climate change
          ~cat

change
the promise of every
politician lie

           ~Don

 ;D
I write haiku because they're there ...

storm drain
the vertical axis
of winter

AlanSummers

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #28 on: January 12, 2011, 03:07:34 PM »
unknown scent
in the blossoming meadow
climate change
          ~cat

change
the promise of every
politician lie

           ~Don

if it's only a white one
let it lie
no one gets hurt

           ~Alan

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #29 on: January 12, 2011, 04:02:25 PM »
change
the promise of every
politician lie

           ~Don

if it's only a white one
let it lie
no one gets hurt

                 ~Alan
hurtful words
water off a duck's back
dabble and dive

                   ~ Gael
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

 

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