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Tracy

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #135 on: May 20, 2014, 09:56:31 PM »
in her mind
it is winter still
-- cottonwood flurry

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #136 on: May 29, 2014, 02:26:08 AM »

Apologies Don..


lolly pop -
the unique sound
of sugar

Don Baird


sugar she says
I think a tougher word
exists in her mind

Alan Summers

in her mind
it is winter still
- cottonwood flurry

Tracy

flurry of fingers
the argument
takes off

Nicole Andrews
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In small proportions
We just beauties see
And in short measures
Life may perfect be

Ben Jonson

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Don Baird

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #137 on: June 04, 2014, 11:05:42 PM »
Please continue the journey format of including four poems in each post: three prior and the new addition. This makes it much easier to follow the sequence with a new poem (without hunting down the prior posts on prior pages)  :)

Thank you.

Tracy and Nicole. Please revise your posts to include the three prior poems - four total including yours. Thank you.

Don
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storm drain
the vertical axis
of winter

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Re: All aboard, for the Haiku Train ....
« Reply #138 on: October 28, 2014, 09:03:19 PM »
sugar she says
I think a tougher word
exists in her mind

Alan Summers

in her mind
it is winter still
- cottonwood flurry

Tracy

flurry of fingers
the argument
takes off

Nicole Andrews

off or on
the switch sparks
bad start

marty