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"Found" poetry

Started by Gael Bage, December 19, 2010, 04:38:39 AM

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Gael Bage

poetry disovered in other non poetry places / publications -

is there such a category in haiku? Here's one I found reported on the bbc site today, actually it said
The UK, not britain.... i cheated a teensy bit  ::)

Britain
slipping and sliding
...not shopping

and another -

The Census Bureau
world population clocks
...tick tock...

or

The Census Bureau
world population clocks -
....alarm rings

thinking about both they work on multiple levels for me.
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

Julie B. K.

There are two churches that I drive by each morning when I take my boys to school.  Often, they have short religious slogans on their marquee boards that look and feel like haiku to me.  I'm sorry that I can't recollect off-hand what has been written there, but the style of writing often make me pause, look, and think - not just about religion, but about the nature of haiku. 

Thanks for starting the thread on found haiku!

Julie B. K.
(jublke)

Gael Bage

Hi Julie, if your church sparks a haiku I look forward to reading it.  :)
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

merlot

This is not in line with the post's intended point, but I feel most good haiku are fresh images of an instant that suddenly jumps into one's perception--in other words, the haiku feels like a "found" perception.

Basho's frog leaping haiku is one such instant that I love. It's a "found" moment of insight, which I admit is not  what a found poem is. Yet, in both cases a random observation arises into awareness, at first perhaps incongruously, but then its appropriateness is valued.

Going on a haiku walk, or ginko, provides just such "found" moments.


Don Baird

I write haiku because they're there to be written ...

storm drain
the vertical axis
of winter

Gael Bage

Merlot - that is so true !
Don thank you for sharing the link.
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

Gael Bage

another found ku, this time from the bbc again this morning


a total eclipse
of the total eclipse -
cloud cover

    this solstice   total eclipse
of total eclipse   cloud cover
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

Don Baird

without seeing
I see everything ...
unseen

Fun stuff...

Don
I write haiku because they're there to be written ...

storm drain
the vertical axis
of winter

Gael Bage

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

Gael Bage

found on bbc website again....

Santa goes to war
remembering our soldiers
at Christmas
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

merlot

Gael, those are 2 clever finds.

Gael Bage

They found me Merlot.  ;D  Methinks we need a sandbox or play area for these !
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

cat

Hello,

Not to be a spoilsport -- I can see y'all are having a lot of fun with this -- but I am confused as to what makes this "haiku".  (Even though the thread is called "'Found' poetry", this is the haiku forum, yes?  As Alan pointed out to someone who asked about tanka.)

Outside of being three lines long, I am not seeing the elements of haiku in these -- seasonality, concrete images rather than abstract ideas, moment, etc.  The only one that for me comes close is this one of Gael's:

a total eclipse
of the total eclipse -
cloud cover

I can see calling these "found short poetry" or "found tercets", but "found haiku"?  Could someone please enlighten me?

cat
"Nature inspires me. I am only a messenger."  ~Kitaro

Gael Bage


Of course Cat you are quite right, it was just a bit of fun we have asked if we can have a sandbox / play area so that fun moments can have a place, see this other thread below,  but so far no reply from mods / admin,  :)

http://www.thehaikufoundation.org/forum_sm/in-depth-haiku-free-discussion/fibonacci-ku/
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance
- Carl Sandburg

cat

Oh, I see.

I didn't know if this was supposed to be a serious discussion (it sounds so in some spots) or just for fun.  Which is fine.

cat
"Nature inspires me. I am only a messenger."  ~Kitaro

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