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New to Haiku: Free Discussion Area / Re: Buson haiku
April 15, 2023, 02:02:06 PM
I saw the first version in a small gift book by Hallmark.
Probably a bad translation.

This one I found on line.
I think he sees a connection between
the ripples and the wild ducks.

Washing the hoe--
ripples on the water;
far off, wild ducks.
                         Buson 

I couldn't find the original.
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New to Haiku: Free Discussion Area / Buson haiku
April 14, 2023, 06:13:15 PM
From a book of haiku I see this from Buson:

Cleaning a saucepan,-
ripples on the water:
A solitary seagull.
                         Buson

Can someone explain this or perhaps a bad translation?
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