Recently, I have been reading Reichhold's The Complete Bashō. It's quite a treat, especially her commentaries. Although the book is a collection of haiku, Reichhold discusses the way Bashō started writing haibun. "The Narrow Road to the Deep North" is what she refers to. As we know, haibun combines prose with poetry. Reichhold says "Writing the prose parts of haibun is very different from simply setting down a bit of story or sudden fiction. The haibun are to be poetic prose, the idea being that the principles that govern poetry are followed in the text portion." Moving on to "The Narrow Road to the Deep North" consists of prose followed by 4-line poems. Every poem in the book has 4 lines. Here is an example.
"As I was plodding along the River Fuji, I saw a small child hardly three yers of age, crying pitifully on the bank, obviously abandoned by his parents. They must have thought this child was unable to ride through the stormy waters of life which run as rapid as the river itself, and that he was destined to have a life even shorter than that of the morning dew. The child looked to me as fragile as the flowers of bush-clover that scatter at the slightest stir of the autumn wind, and it was so pitiful that I gave hime what little food I had with me.
The ancient poet
Who pitied monkeys for their cries
What would he say if he saw
This child crying in the autumn wind?
How is it that this child has been reduced to this state of utter misery? Is it because of his mother who ignored him, or because of his father who abandoned him? Als, it seems to me that this child's undeserved suffering has been caused by something far greater and more massive - by what one might call the irresistible will of heaven. If it is so, child, you must raise your voice to heaven, and I must pass on, leaving you behind." (Translation - Nobuyuki Yuasa.)
I can guess what Reichhold meant by poetic prose. I think she means non-haiku like lyricism. Example - "... this child was unable to ride through the stormy waters of life which run as rapid as the river itself, ..." We see here the use of metaphor and simile in a way that haiku wouldn't permit. I hope my understanding is correct. (Incidentally, Bruce Ross' (in How To Haiku) appears to agree with my interpretation.) I am not sure at all though about the 4 liners. Are they haiku? (Bruce Ross, Lee Gurga etc. call the poems haiku and in their own haibun examples all poems are 3 liners.)
Can someone enlighten me please?
Dipankar
"As I was plodding along the River Fuji, I saw a small child hardly three yers of age, crying pitifully on the bank, obviously abandoned by his parents. They must have thought this child was unable to ride through the stormy waters of life which run as rapid as the river itself, and that he was destined to have a life even shorter than that of the morning dew. The child looked to me as fragile as the flowers of bush-clover that scatter at the slightest stir of the autumn wind, and it was so pitiful that I gave hime what little food I had with me.
The ancient poet
Who pitied monkeys for their cries
What would he say if he saw
This child crying in the autumn wind?
How is it that this child has been reduced to this state of utter misery? Is it because of his mother who ignored him, or because of his father who abandoned him? Als, it seems to me that this child's undeserved suffering has been caused by something far greater and more massive - by what one might call the irresistible will of heaven. If it is so, child, you must raise your voice to heaven, and I must pass on, leaving you behind." (Translation - Nobuyuki Yuasa.)
I can guess what Reichhold meant by poetic prose. I think she means non-haiku like lyricism. Example - "... this child was unable to ride through the stormy waters of life which run as rapid as the river itself, ..." We see here the use of metaphor and simile in a way that haiku wouldn't permit. I hope my understanding is correct. (Incidentally, Bruce Ross' (in How To Haiku) appears to agree with my interpretation.) I am not sure at all though about the 4 liners. Are they haiku? (Bruce Ross, Lee Gurga etc. call the poems haiku and in their own haibun examples all poems are 3 liners.)
Can someone enlighten me please?
Dipankar