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#1
New to Haiku: Free Discussion Area / Glossary
February 28, 2011, 07:42:42 AM
The purpose of this discussion is to create a glossary of basic terms for the newcomer to haiku. We would like to ask your help in developing simple definitions for the words we use in this forum.

Please do not provide links to articles or suggest articles a person could read to learn more about a topic.  We have a discussion in the Free Discussion Area called, "Learning About Haiku – Helpful Links," which is the perfect spot to provide links for newcomers.

Let's keep this relatively simple and uncomplicated.  

Remember what it was like when you were first starting your haiku adventure.  There were a number of terms that you needed to learn.  It helps to just get a simple, workable definition so that you can read articles and learn and improve.

We will regularly update this introductory post to include all the definitions that we create.

Any discussion that isn't relevant to a particular definition of a word (or one that gets off on some debate as to the merit of having a glossary) will be deleted.

Here is a sample post that would be helpful:

Jim Kacian presents this definition in his book, How to Haiku:

"A brief poem which records an experience of a moment of revelation into the nature of the world in an effort to share it with others."

Now it is worth noting that one's personal definitions of these words will expand and grow as one learns more and more about haiku. However one must start somewhere.

It would also be very helpful to include a pronunciation of each term you discuss.

Note: This is not an official glossary of term of The Haiku Foundation, but a group created one designed to help newcomers to haiku to understand the lingo.
#2
What do you most want to see on these New to Haiku boards?

What are your current favorite discussions/threads?

If you're new to haiku, are these boards helping you to learn about haiku?

We'd like to hear back from you and welcome your thoughts, suggestions and feedback.

Thanks!

Laura
#3
Do you think it is OK to slip in a "me" or "my" into a haiku now and again?  Or does that take something away from the reader's experience?

I'm interested in your viewpoint!

Thanks!

Laura
#4
I've been reading the comments on the board and have been intrigued by the concept of "authorial intrusion."  This is a new concept for me.

I have also enjoyed the threads on ambiguity. 

However these two concepts seem to be, perhaps, in conflict.  If you aren't putting your stamp on the haiku, then there must be shades of ambiguity.  Or am I missing something?

One point, that I have been tossing around, is whether to take ownership in a poem.  For instance should I use "an infant" or "my infant" in a haiku such as:

the hushed breaths
of an infant
spring breeze

(I'm still working on this haiku)

Would it be considered "authorial intrusion" to use "my infant"?

Thanks!

#5
I sometimes run into people who are convinced that haiku must follow the 575 pattern.  They can be quite certain about this and feel all other haiku forms are "wrong."  I know that most Japanese haiku have this format, but that when translated, it doesn't hold.  I'm just curious why there is so much passion about this subject.
#6
New to Haiku: Free Discussion Area / Introduction
December 02, 2010, 10:33:47 AM
This board is designed to be a safe place for you to ask questions you may have about haiku.  Feel free to discuss any beginning level topics here as well.  

Debates are welcome, as long as everyone is courteous.  We're all here to learn!

In addition we will post announcements now and then.

Thank you and enjoy!

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