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New to Haiku: Free Discussion Area / New haiku - feedback please
June 05, 2017, 09:39:53 AM
I recently sent this Haiku to an online publisher in the UK. They said is was not "close enough for me to the spirit and traditions of haiku".

Can anyone give feedback on how to improve this, or where I am going wrong?

"we ask why? rivers
flow into to the sea, all
questions lead to love"
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