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Topics - martin gottlieb cohen

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In-Depth Haiku: Free Discussion Area / Tanka Mentoring
October 06, 2020, 03:13:05 AM
Would anyone experienced in tanka like to mentor it? Taking a free beginner course in it, but no mentoring group for it. Would but I am ignorant in it. Go ahead, be a sport!

Here are three I am fooling around with:

In memory of George Floyd

white chalk
on this asphalt
outline
of his long pain
to the curb's end


firefly watching
down this Ogod river
in a stillness
that spreads a moonless light
the river of heaven


Aqaba beachfront                                   
how the stillness suspends
air                                                               
on a G string
the sound's back and forth ache             

https://youtu.be/DRfhcvKvn0E

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