What marvelous haiku. The are both so well crafted. My vote however is for John's poem. I had a visceral response after reading that and then upon reflection found even more depth. The attention to awareness has a profound playfulness to it which I admire. I tok the haiku to reflect on the communal realities of the individual - with a nod to both the individual as well as external experience.
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