the word god being eaten by a field of robins
Scott Metz
say it so it sounds like starling she says
Chris Gordon
I will give this a try. I am not so very good in giving of comments. But I shall try.
I love the verse written by Scott. By reading and another time reading I see a torn Holy Scripture in the fields and Robins who are using the paper for their nest's. So the Holy Scripture becomes a building material and that ... I think is what it was meant to be.
The verse by Chris ... I love the aliteration, but that's all. Sorry Chris.
My vote goes to Scott.
I will, by the way, include a haiku I once have written in the same picture as the one by Scott:
the Holy Scripture
torn apart and thrown away
moves with the breeze
Scott Metz
say it so it sounds like starling she says
Chris Gordon
I will give this a try. I am not so very good in giving of comments. But I shall try.
I love the verse written by Scott. By reading and another time reading I see a torn Holy Scripture in the fields and Robins who are using the paper for their nest's. So the Holy Scripture becomes a building material and that ... I think is what it was meant to be.
The verse by Chris ... I love the aliteration, but that's all. Sorry Chris.
My vote goes to Scott.
I will, by the way, include a haiku I once have written in the same picture as the one by Scott:
the Holy Scripture
torn apart and thrown away
moves with the breeze