Dear Allan,
I recently saw a fallen banyan tree, it was probably centuries old and touched my heart. Written two haiku on this topic. I look forward to your feedback / inputs.
ancient tree fallen
witness of bitter sweet
secrets lost forever
children hop on
roots and branches -
fallen banyan tree
Regards,
Padma
Dear Palma,
Two lovely verses!
I can see a potential haiku sequence about the banyan tree.
warmest regards,
Alan
Quote from: Padmarajeswari on February 06, 2021, 10:42:47 PM
Dear Allan,
I recently saw a fallen banyan tree, it was probably centuries old and touched my heart. Written two haiku on this topic. I look forward to your feedback / inputs.
ancient tree fallen
witness of bitter sweet
secrets lost forever
children hop on
roots and branches -
fallen banyan tree
Regards,
Padma
Thanks so much for your quick response Allan. And your encouraging words.
Look forward to more guidance as I take few more baby steps in this journey.
Regards,
Padma
Quote from: AlanSummers on February 07, 2021, 02:40:24 AM
Dear Palma,
Two lovely verses!
I can see a potential haiku sequence about the banyan tree.
warmest regards,
Alan
Quote from: Padmarajeswari on February 06, 2021, 10:42:47 PM
Dear Allan,
I recently saw a fallen banyan tree, it was probably centuries old and touched my heart. Written two haiku on this topic. I look forward to your feedback / inputs.
ancient tree fallen
witness of bitter sweet
secrets lost forever
children hop on
roots and branches -
fallen banyan tree
Regards,
Padma
Quote from: AlanSummers on February 07, 2021, 02:40:24 AM
Dear Palma,
Two lovely verses!
I can see a potential haiku sequence about the banyan tree.
warmest regards,
Alan
Quote from: Padmarajeswari on February 06, 2021, 10:42:47 PM
Dear Allan,
I recently saw a fallen banyan tree, it was probably centuries old and touched my heart. Written two haiku on this topic. I look forward to your feedback / inputs.
ancient tree fallen
witness of bitter sweet
secrets lost forever
children hop on
roots and branches -
fallen banyan tree
Regards,
Padma
Apologies,
We are both spelling each other's name incorrectly.
I just have one "l" :-)
Alan
Should I say more correctly Padmarajeswari?
And have you tried the wonderful mentoring boards which are private and cannot be seen until signed into?
warm regards,
Alan
Quote from: Padmarajeswari on February 07, 2021, 03:24:18 AM
Thanks so much for your quick response Allan. And your encouraging words.
Look forward to more guidance as I take few more baby steps in this journey.
Regards,
Padma
Quote from: AlanSummers on February 07, 2021, 02:40:24 AM
Dear Palma,
Two lovely verses!
I can see a potential haiku sequence about the banyan tree.
warmest regards,
Alan
Quote from: Padmarajeswari on February 06, 2021, 10:42:47 PM
Dear Allan,
I recently saw a fallen banyan tree, it was probably centuries old and touched my heart. Written two haiku on this topic. I look forward to your feedback / inputs.
ancient tree fallen
witness of bitter sweet
secrets lost forever
children hop on
roots and branches -
fallen banyan tree
Regards,
Padma
Quote from: AlanSummers on February 07, 2021, 02:40:24 AM
Dear Palma,
Two lovely verses!
I can see a potential haiku sequence about the banyan tree.
warmest regards,
Alan
Quote from: Padmarajeswari on February 06, 2021, 10:42:47 PM
Dear Allan,
I recently saw a fallen banyan tree, it was probably centuries old and touched my heart. Written two haiku on this topic. I look forward to your feedback / inputs.
ancient tree fallen
witness of bitter sweet
secrets lost forever
children hop on
roots and branches -
fallen banyan tree
Regards,
Padma