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Cherie Hunter Day — Touchstone Distinguished Books Award Winner 2022

Cherie Hunter Day is the recipient of a Touchstone Distinguished Books Award for 2022 for the volume Miles Deep In a Drum Solo (Durham, N.C: Backbone Press, 2022). 


Commentary from the Panel:

Cherie Hunter Day’s fifth book of haiku, Miles Deep in a Drum Solo, demonstrates her dexterity with the form in an offering that balances an attentive nature-based experience with the inventiveness of language. The collection comprises four sections of fifteen poems each with three poems presented per page. Each sequence exhibits a resonance between the haiku. There is a physical and emotional groundedness that provides a breadcrumb path for the reader to intuitively make their own connections through these deeply-felt poems. On one such page, Day explores mortality, longing, and grief.

 

migrating red knots

the return

of my heart murmur

 

ocean a summer’s worth of asking

 

last time I heard you become dusk

 

The poems include three-line haiku, one-line haiku, vertical haiku, and haiku of only three words in length. The haiku do not strain to fit their structures but emerge organically from them.

Throughout the book, Day’s close attention to language is evident. Her creative juxtapositions suggest new interpretations of the words and the worlds she is describing. The urban brushes against the natural, and the abstract is placed adjacent to traditional season words in unexpected ways that offer a disjunctive English-language haiku style that will hold up over time.

 

inland sea a resume without references

 

blossom rain

part of the bank deposit

available today

 

In Section 1: “a new normal”, themes include sadness, technology, writing, communing with nature, and the pandemic. Like snapshots, the poems stipple a story. In Section 2: “a shortfall of small doors”, the tone shifts to regard the dismissal of nature and nature’s response to that dismissal. These are poems of incompleteness, absence, refusal, and small wins.

 

they have

a list of demands

redwoods

 

then a few pages later:

 

redwood seeds the instrument of your hands

 

We can listen to the demands of these ancient trees and answer their call. The word “seeds” in the second poem can work as both a noun and a verb. As a noun, we are planting the seeds and rejuvenating their kind. As a verb, they are rejuvenating us. 

 

Throughout Section 3: “the rollover of unused data”, we feel a movement toward emotional resolution set up by the previous sections. When we reach Section 4: “leftover persimmons”, there is a level of acceptance as we acknowledge the injuries.

 

meteor shower

the scar

part of my fingerprint

 

is followed by:

 

that one kid

with a plastic whistle –

evening heat

 

Both poems consider an irregularity that stands out from its background even as it is assimilated by it. The visual streak across the sky. The tactile scar on a finger. The sound of a whistle.

 

Miles Deep In a Drum Solo is a rich and carefully orchestrated collection that rewards careful reading and re-reading.


Touchstone winners receive a crystal award to commemorate their selection.  See the complete list of winners of both Individual Poem Awards and Distinguished Books Awards in the Touchstone Archives.

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  1. oni mają

    listę żądań

    sekwoje

    potem kilka stron dalej:

    Nasiona sekwoi Narzędzie Twoich rąk

    Bardzo piękne ,rozumiem ,że wszystkie drzewa są zależne ,niestety od ludzkich rąk ,mam nadzieje ,że będą mądre drzewa ,też ludzkie ręce…

    Very beautiful, I understand that all trees are unfortunately dependent on human hands, I hope there will be wise trees, also human hands…

  2. oni mają

    listę żądań

    sekwoje

    potem kilka stron dalej:

    Nasiona sekwoi Narzędzie Twoich rąk

    Bardzo piękne ,rozumiem ,że wszystkie drzewa są zależne ,niestety od ludzkich rąk ,mam nadzieje ,że będą mądre drzewa ,też ludzkie ręce…

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